A belated commentary.

There are many things happening during this period, and the new book is about to be put on the shelves, so I haven't finished writing this comment.

This book is the author's first novel. Since it was his first creation, he made many mistakes that novices must make. It is precisely because of this that the results of this book are so poor.

In fact, this book should not be only so short. Many discerning book friends can see that the later stage is actually very fast. Even intersecting in the early and mid-stage period, and the later stage can be described as unfinished.

But there is no way. First, the poison point in the early stage drove everyone away, resulting in the later stage of chasing only about 50, and I was unwilling to write a book. Second, the most important point is that the content in the later stage is too sensitive and very difficult to write.

Many sensitive words and contents cannot appear, otherwise they will be blocked, which leads to the fact that the book is very timid when it is written in the later stages, fearing that it will be harmonious again.

In the original setting, Ma Mingda and Ergouzi should not have only such a little role. The protagonist will fight them with similar strength as them, and then analyze some secrets bit by bit during the battle. However, due to the length of the article, it can only end in this way.

Also, the last elf in the protagonist bites the Lu Shark, which is basically a so-called soybean. Logically speaking, the adventure should be arranged like the other few, and then the strength will be improved, but all of them are omitted.

There are countless such things. In short, let alone you, even the author himself is very dissatisfied with this ending.

But all this has passed, and it is unintentional to say more.

The protagonist goes to another world to be a god, which can be regarded as an open ending. If you have the chance, you can write about the scene where the protagonist returns to this world, or the urban plot where the protagonist pretends to be after returning to the earth. In short, it depends on the situation.

Of course, there is the most important point. According to the concept of the divine universe mentioned by Arceus and the Phoenix King in the end, the protagonist may be able to create a new world in the future and become the mastermind behind another book to create the world god himself.

But these are still too far away, and it is not certain whether they can be written until then.

The last one, this book was published on March 15 and ended on October 30, which lasted for 6 and a half months. In these nearly 200 days and nights, thank you for being with you all the way. Those who can see this are all true fans. Thank you, I will meet again if you are destined to be together!
Chapter completed!