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Wang Hao is excited! Wang Hao is so rippling! Damn I have never touched such an awesome computer in my life. I'll wipe it!

Sitting on the purely finished carving rosewood computer chair, Wang Hao looked at the huge monitor, it was simply not even more pleasant, right?

As a computer enthusiast, what else can attract yourself more than a super magic machine?!

After seeing off the four porters, Wang Hao quickly took out his cell phone to reply to the woman. As soon as he opened the WeChat message, Wang Hao saw the woman's message: "Is there any novel you wrote later?"

Has she watched "Fighting Break the Sky"?

Wang Hao, who originally planned to say thank you, suddenly withdrew his hand - now there is really nothing behind "Fighting Break the Sky"! Only the first chapter!

Forget it, let’s not reply now. Let’s see if Jin Kuihua has written the subsequent chapters!

Open QQ quickly and log in. Maybe the car accident that happened today used almost the bad luck attribute, so as soon as Wang Hao logged in to QQ, he saw Jin Kuihua's avatar flashing violently!

Jin Kuihua: "Brother Ritian, I wrote it so much today! I did 15,000 words in one go! It was so smooth. Brother Ritian, please help me see how it was written!"

Damn! I can’t write 15,000 words a day, it’s so cool, right?

Wang Ritian: "Success, don't worry, I'll take a look first!"

He quickly received the file, and Wang Hao couldn't wait to open it and read it.

I have to say that there is absolutely no problem with Jin Kuihua's writing style. Wang Hao is even sure that the writing style of many great masters before Luck Dice changed the world. However, after reading this more than 10,000 words, Wang Hao always felt that something was missing.

Wang Ritian: "The plot is not bad, and the process is similar, but I always feel like I'm missing something, but I just don't feel happy."

Jin Kuihua: "Ah?! No? Brother Ritian, what should I do?"

Wang Ritian: "Don't worry, I'll take a look."

Jin Kuihua: "Chengcheng, Brother Ritian must point out the problem!"

Wang Hao quickly looked at the part written by Jin Kuihua from the beginning. This time he read it in detail and soon discovered the problem.

Wang Ritian: "Nalan Yanran has not laid enough preparations here! Where is hatred? How can you feel good if you don't lay the foundation and don't pull the hatred? You have to write down what consequences will happen after you are broken off!"

Jin Kuihua: "Ah? I've laid the foundation here!"

Wang Ritian: "I know you have laid the foundation, but it is not enough! Look, who is the protagonist? Although he was originally a genius, he is a waste now, right? So is there any problem with a genius coming to get a waste marriage? "

Golden Sunflower: "It should be...no..."

Wang Ritian: "What does it mean? It's not. Think about it, for example, you are an otaku and have a family background that is not outstanding, but the woman is a family with a family property of over 100 million yuan, and she looks like a star. Is there any problem with her marriage? No, right? Then how can I make readers think that the protagonist is really wronged when he is broken up, and this is the most important thing! Only when readers feel wronged will they feel happy to slap the protagonist in the face!"

Jin Kuihua: "I knelt down for Brother Ritian! What Brother Ritian said makes sense! Then how should I write it here?"

Wang Ritian: "You have to write down the specific reason why you broke the engagement. After breaking up, you will have an impact on the protagonist and his father. Why did the heroine break the engagement? Because she is so awesome, because she is trained by the sect and looks down on the protagonist, so she broke the engagement. Then this is not enough. Look, what occasion is this? This is a clan meeting. The son of the clan leader was dismissed in public, so he still can't be regarded as the clan leader? Right? Another point, how did Nalan Yanran come this time? A tall, rich and handsome guy came by next to her! This is simply a demonstration! Compare it with the protagonist! You have to portray this image of rich and handsome guy! Look at you now, this tall, rich and handsome guy has no sense of existence at all! A tall, rich and handsome guy with no sense of existence is still a furious hatred?!"

Jin Kuihua: "I understand Brother Ritian! You are simply a god! I really feel something is wrong when you say this! No wonder when the protagonist said the words later, "Thirty years from Hedong, thirty years from Hexi, don't bully a young man poor." I can't get it up when I can't. I'll change it now! Let's change it now! Brother Ritian, wait for a while, and it will be fine soon!"

After Jin Kuihua said this, there was no movement. Wang Hao took a deep breath. Fortunately, he read more and more, and he understood some tricks more or less. Otherwise, if Jin Kuihua wrote it and posted it directly on the website, he would probably not be able to perform one-tenth of the score.

If the God of Defiance is written as a floppy text, it is definitely a blasphemy to the classics, and it is better not to write them.

Jin Kuihua went to modify the text. Wang Hao also remembered the message the woman sent to him, and quickly replied: "Your computer has been received, and the grade is a bit high, I really feel sorry for it."

After sending this WeChat message, Wang Hao took a sip of water. As a result, before the water was finished, the woman's reply came.

Cold heart: "It's good to receive it, why do you reply? I have read your novel and it's written well. Is there any more in the future?"

Wang Ritian: "I have been typing just now, but I didn't see any news when the phone sets. Wait for me for a while. Today, I have a good inspiration and wrote a lot, and I will send it to you later. By the way, do you have an email or QQ? Wechat cannot send files."

This time the woman hesitated a little, and then said, "Then add me QQ. 66888888."

This is a tycoon number...

Wang Hao was depressed in all kinds of depression. After adding, the two of them directly moved to the chat position.

Wang Ritian: "Do you like to read my novel?"

Cold heart: "Yeah, I'm pretty good at writing. I don't have anything else to do today, so I took a look."

Seeing the woman's words, Wang Hao suddenly laughed secretly - he was quite arrogant, and he just looked at it so anxiously...

Wang Ritian: "It's good to like it, haha, then I'll finish writing this chapter and pass it on to you. No matter what, your computer configuration is really good, and I dare not use it."

Cold heart: "That's nothing, just like it."

Wang Ritian: "I like it, I like it so much. You know, the boot time is only eight seconds! The seven-star magic machine!"

Cold heart: "{laugh}".

As soon as this smile came out, Wang Hao obviously didn't know how to continue the topic, and suddenly the two of them fell silent.

Fortunately, I haven't been silent for long, and there is news on Jin Kuihua.

Jin Kuihua: "Brother Ritian, I have made a correction. See if it will be successful this time!"

Wang Ritian: "Okay, I'll take a look."

I have to say that Jin Kuihua has a very high understanding and is worthy of being a typical example of the person she meets in a good state of luck. Almost all the things Wang Hao told him just now were perfectly realized in his writing. This time it was even more smooth to read. The hatred was so irresistible that people would want to fight Yunlan Sect now!
Chapter completed!