Apologize first.

I have been writing books for many years, and revision is the norm when writing books. However, this is probably the first time a problem like this has occurred.

The novel is over a million words long, so I don’t really care about the so-called plot bugs, because readers have different perceptions of the plot and draw different conclusions.

Different people have different opinions and seek common ground while reserving differences.

If the logic can support itself, it is a good plot.

But the character split is a big problem.

This time, the time point was deliberately chosen on the night of the official announcement. Originally, I wanted to smash the beautiful illusion about pure love with a hammer.

But I have made the same old habit again, causing trouble for everyone, causing reading discomfort like white jade sinking into an ink pool.

So I learned from the pain and thought about it. I lost 3,000 hairs one day and one night, and I decided to make a correction.

Does this mean that I am more mature than when I was on the parallel line? (touching my head)

The scene with Mi Yue is a pre-existing setting,

Because this book will touch on some gray aspects that are difficult to describe directly.

Everyone knows what the devil is.

This is no problem, and it is also to make the character of the protagonist less perfect, and then use this as one of the reasonable breakthrough points for opening a harem.

Normally speaking, having a harem cannot determine one person's status, it will lead to ambiguity until death, and in the end it will be inclusive.

This time, I changed my writing technique. I first determined Ye Su Shang’s status and then found a breakthrough point.

Mi Yue is the best breakthrough point.

Because her devil can arouse desires beyond moral constraints and cannot be avoided.

Once this breakthrough is opened, it is logical to add other people, which gives the harem a self-justifying logic.

But the problem is that the node is not selected correctly.

The contrast between the pure love announced by the official and the fraternity of the harem is too sharp. This medicine may be too strong, causing the character's character to feel torn.

In other words, some brothers said that the character can be a scumbag, but his motivation is insufficient and seems abrupt.

I admit, it’s not a lack of motivation, but a lack of preparation.

For the first time, in Yizi Canteen, I mentioned the devil emerging from Lin Baiyao.

The second time, in the hotel room, I applauded because of this devil.

It's really a bit faster.

Maybe some people don't understand this line because it can't be written too clearly.

As for last night's chapter, it took several revisions before it was released.

Therefore, in view of all kinds of things, I finally decided to make some changes to the direction of last night's chapter, and I'm tired of everyone reading it again (with a guilty expression)

After all, harems in reality can be magical and incredible, but harems in novels should still try to take into account the character's logic and everyone's emotional appeal.

One more word:
Chapter completed!