Chapter 351 The first full score essay in this college entrance examination was born!
After removing the broken trees, the road is no longer obstructed and can be opened to traffic in two lanes.
Moreover, after what happened just now, the car owners were very qualified and courteous to each other, so the road was quickly restored to smooth flow.
All the students in Grade 3 and Class 3 returned to the bus safely. Except for the palms of the boys who participated in moving the trees, they were all uninjured.
Everyone was still in the excitement of solving a big problem personally, especially the applause and praise from the adults around them, which made them all feel proud.
Everyone's eyes couldn't help but focus on Qin Ke. Ning Qingyun was wiping his sweat with his own towel.
The students could not hide the look of admiration in their eyes. If Qin Ke had not proposed and personally taken the lead in organizing this "rescue work", they would not have been able to enjoy the sweetness of this success.
"Brother Ke, you look so handsome when you sweat!"
"That's right, Brother Ke is worthy of being Brother Ke. I will never forget today's experience in my life. Thank you, Brother Ke!"
"Brother Ke, this is the best thing I have ever done, and I am proud to be a part of it!"
"My sister-in-law is also very impressive! She braves the scorching sun and takes the lead to persuade car owners!"
Even Fang Yongtang looked at his little boss in amazement. He didn't expect that he, a kid who had just graduated from high school, could actually accomplish something that so many adults present had failed to accomplish! Such power of action and organizational power.
, it’s really hard to believe.
The last hesitation in Fang Yongtang's heart about working for "children" completely disappeared at this moment.
She doesn't believe that such a child cannot achieve a great career in the future. Just work hard with the two small bosses, the future will be bright!
The uncle driver also kept praising the students, saying that this is the first time he has seen outstanding students like you in so many years of driving.
This made the students on the bus even more excited and proud.
If the person with the most complicated emotions is probably Li Zhonghan.
Listening to the discussions around him and seeing the unabashed admiration on their faces, Li Zhonghan, who participated in the whole process, felt a strange sense of pride and frustration at the same time.
He finally understood that even if he didn't mention his studies, he couldn't beat Qin Ke, and he would never win.
But at the same time, he also understood why so many people liked to call Qin Ke "Brother Ke" and were willing to follow his instructions.
Now, he also wants to call Qin Ke "Brother Ke".
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On the same day, the news that Qin Ke organized the tree removal halfway spread through the provincial TV station. The photo of Qin Ke sweating profusely and struggling to move the tree was widely forwarded, arousing countless praises on the Internet.
[I’m convinced, I’m not only a great learner, but I also have the courage and decisive action to solve difficulties!]
[Looking at this photo, I feel sorry for God Qin, and I also admire God God Qin.]
[Awesome, I'm afraid I would just curse and wait for the crane to come over if something like this happened, and then waste most of my time in vain.]
[It is indeed amazing, Qin Shen, our role model!]
【Like God Qin!】
[Watching this video makes my blood boil, these kids are amazing!]
[Is this considered a act of righteousness? Can you apply for a collective righteousness award for this group of students? 】
A well-known liberal media person even wrote excitedly: "It is valuable to achieve academic achievements, but it is truly valuable to be able to bend down and solve real-life problems for the public. I feel sorry for Qin Ke, this kid
I like it with my pure heart and like all the students who enthusiastically participated in this tree-moving incident!
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While the Internet was being praised, a Chinese language teacher surnamed Wu was sitting in the same marking room with more than a dozen colleagues, looking at the computer to review the essays of college entrance examination candidates.
Nowadays, college entrance examination grading has been paperless, and all marking and scoring work is done through computers.
Teacher Wu is one of the teachers in the composition review team, who is responsible for grading compositions. Today, the grading work process of the college entrance examination has been very mature, especially the scoring of compositions, which basically has a complete set of standards.
"This article is a narrative. The writing style is acceptable and the sentence structure is flexible, but the conception is a bit lacking."
Teacher Wu made a mental evaluation of the finished essay and then gave it a score of 48.
He rubbed his sore eyes and clicked on the next candidate's essay.
"Huh? "When poverty leads to change, change leads to prosperity"?"
The topic of this candidate's essay quotes ancient texts, which is not very eye-catching, but judging from the title alone, this candidate is one of the very few students who can accurately grasp the core gist of the topic of this Dream of Red Mansions essay.
Teacher Wu perked up and took a rough look at the paper. It was good. The handwriting was neat and correct, the paragraphs were well-proportioned, and there were no traces of alteration. It used an argumentative essay structure. The overall structure was rigorous, and there were no flaws in the style.
This essay made a very good first impression on Teacher Wu.
He continued to read carefully.
As soon as he saw the "methodology" at the beginning and the explanation of "if you are poor, you will change, if you change, you will be general, and if you are general, you will be long-lasting", Teacher Wu nodded secretly again and said, "Sure, this student is at least stable in solving the problem."
Looking further, his eyes suddenly widened.
Rie...Riemann Hypothesis? What the hell is this?
Mobile phones and the Internet are not available in the marking room. Fortunately, Teacher Wu, who has a liberal arts background, usually reads a lot of books. After thinking hard for a while, he vaguely remembered that this is a world-class mathematical conjecture.
This candidate actually said he was studying the Riemann Hypothesis? Isn’t he overestimating his abilities?
What left Teacher Wu speechless the most was that the candidate actually said that after thinking, he boldly ended the mistakes in two directions and proposed the direction he thought was correct.
Teacher Wu shook his head when he saw it. The theme of this essay was clearly written, and candidates were required to combine their own experiences in study and life, so they could not use fake stories to deceive people.
A high school student is actually talking about delving into some world problem that even the world's top mathematicians have not been able to solve. Isn't it ridiculous and childish?
Of course, in the essays he reviewed before, some students were even more ridiculous. They actually wrote about developing next-generation mechas, researching Mars probes, quantum chips, controllable nuclear fusion... in order to be new and different.
Moreover, the style they used was not a short novel that could barely justify itself, but an argumentative essay like this one. Without exception, Teacher Wu gave them all low marks.
However... this description of this student always gives people a sense of righteousness and arrogance, which makes Teacher Wu who doesn't know much about mathematics feel inexplicably guilty and hesitant to give low marks.
He decided to read on.
The following is an example of why Lime operating system can make a breakthrough in the market. It is combined with the candidates’ own experience. There is no problem with this, and it is very innovative and bright.
Teacher Wu is also using the Qing Ning operating system. It is indeed very easy to use. The candidate’s analysis is also very insightful and reasonable. Teacher Wu nodded repeatedly. I heard that next year’s college entrance examination evaluation computers will all be equipped with the Qing Ning operating system.
Keep reading until the end, the full text is about 900 words.
The arguments are precise, the evidence is sufficient, the materials are rich, the structure is clear, the rhetorical techniques are used appropriately, and the sentences are contagious. The series of parallelism and rhetorical questions at the end made Teacher Wu a little excited. It also had far-reaching ideas and novel insights, pointing out that innovation is technology
Development is the only way for the progress of human civilization. Especially scientific and technological researchers must dare to use innovative methodologies, step out of their comfort zones, dare to challenge authority, dare to make bold assumptions and verify carefully...
This kind of mentality is almost unique among high school students.
Teacher Wu couldn't help but feel a little embarrassed.
Judging from the overall article, this composition has full marks, especially the argumentative writing technique is very sophisticated and has rich and diverse sentence patterns. It is really a rare good article.
Only the Riemann Hypothesis part, he was not sure about.
His intuition told him that the student did not seem to be bragging, and the example he wrote could indeed demonstrate the importance of innovation.
Is it necessary for a candidate who can write such an excellent argumentative essay to fabricate such personal examples? If he wants to find better examples, he should be able to find them at his fingertips, right?
Teacher Wu looked at the time. He had spent enough time on this composition and could not delay it any longer.
He took a deep breath and finally made a decision.
He entered the word "60" in the fraction space.
Soon after, this essay was randomly assigned to another teacher Chen.
Teacher Chen is an old-fashioned person and does not understand the Riemann Hypothesis at all. His intuition is that this student is talking nonsense. Although the overall level is excellent, he still only gave 50 points.
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For college entrance examination essays, two teachers generally participate in grading, and the computer automatically counts the scores. If the difference between the scores of the two review teachers does not exceed 5 points, the average score of the two teachers will be taken as the score of the candidate's essay.
If the score given by two teachers differs by more than 5 points, it will automatically be transferred to the leader of the corresponding composition group of the two teachers, who will give the score.
If the score given by the team leader is closer to that of a teacher, then the sum of the scores given by the team leader and that teacher will be divided by 2 as the candidate's composition score.
Because the score gap of this article "If you are poor, you will change, if you change, you will be successful", it was naturally transferred to the computer of Yu Yizheng, the leader of the fifth composition group.
Yu Yizheng does not directly participate in the composition review work of the group, but all the compositions that come before him have a large difference in ratings.
Therefore, Yu Yizheng was very cautious, and he had enough time to think slowly and give the most careful score.
——He knows whether his scoring is fair or not will not only affect the future of the candidate for this essay, but also affect the whole body and the future of other candidates. After all, sometimes just one point is the difference.
It will affect whether a candidate can be admitted, and also whether other candidates will be squeezed out of places in their favorite universities.
He clicked on the article "If poverty leads to change, if change leads to success", he read it carefully three times.
It is indeed a very excellent argumentative paper. Except for the Riemann Hypothesis part, it should be possible to give it a full score.
He didn't know much about the Riemann Hypothesis, but with his rich teaching experience, he could tell that the student was not talking nonsense. He couldn't write such confident and profound details with nonsense.
And he dared to challenge world-class problems in high school. This courage and courage alone are very closely related to the theme of this essay, and it even has a finishing touch.
What's more, he has the same conjecture as Teacher Wu. If he can write such a rigorous and excellent argumentative essay, why should he lie on such countless arguments that can be drawn from?
Thinking of this, Yu Yizheng marked "60" on the score column without hesitation.
He also specifically wrote in his final "Team Leader's Opinion": "Accurate topic analysis, prominent theme, novel arguments, ambitious structure, rich arguments, strict structure, rhetorical techniques, proficient use of long and short sentences, exquisite use of ancient poems, and well-written paragraphs.
Impeccable. I rate it 60 points!”
He and Teacher Wu both scored 60 points, which means that the candidate's essay will be based on the average score of the two, which is 60 points.
The first full score essay in this college entrance examination was born!
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