Final thoughts new book released
I started writing in mid-January, and it is the end of May, with a time of 130 days, 670,000 words, and an average daily update of 5,000, which is a normal completion.
Let's summarize the experience.
The first point is language style.
When writing about a hundred chapters, I thoroughly grasped Ban's language style and narrated Ban's language. It is best to write less structural auxiliary words and tone auxiliary words, and use the simplest subject-predicate verb-object structure.
Let me give you a simple chestnut.
For example, when praising people, use "not" instead of "not quite good", use "shangke" instead of "not quite okay", use "shangkeke" instead of "not quite okay", which is to use less tone auxiliary words.
Use less structural auxiliary words, which means less words like "". For example, do not write "Makura uses Susanoo very strong, blurblur" and "use Susanoo, blurblur immediately".
The second point is overall style.
The pure battle of writing patriarch is more popular than writing patriarch's psychology, that is, pure narrative, less psychological description and psychological discussion.
I would like to give you a mistake, such as at the Doupo auction.
Rewrite it again, how to write it.
The wrong way: "A good dog doesn't block the way." Then there are a bunch of psychological descriptions, well, this is what I did at that time.
Correct writing: Uchiha Madara narrowed his eyes slightly, and it flashed like a lightning bolt. The next moment, someone blocked the way and flew out like a kite with a broken string, landing heavily on the ground, unconscious.
The third point is the poison point.
When writing about Zhutian's words, the poisonous point is about the protagonist. I admit that I did follow Xiao Yan in order to save trouble. However, when I swallowed it, I did not follow Luo Feng, which is considered to be a progress.
If I still have the opportunity to write about other worlds, I will pay attention to this point, but the question is, what world do you like to see? Perfection? A thought is eternal? A king will spare your life? Even Dafeng beats people?
Then in this book, I made another poison point, that is, I wrote Tuantuan on the tenth day after it was released. Oh my god, actually I wanted to give Ban a bond, but I didn't expect the response to it was so fierce, and I fell in a cliff-like manner. After the next few days, I stopped writing Tuantuan to recover without success, so I started to set it on.
A few days ago, I listened to the live class of Squid, and then I understood that I made the mistake of expecting misplaced.
Readers want to see Ban’s battle, Ban’s invincible, not want to see Ban’s bondage. Squid said that it’s not that they can’t do these things, but before that, readers must be paved with tens of thousands or even hundreds of thousands of words, or they must be tying up the bondage from the beginning.
Here I will promote my new book "Wandering the Ninja World from the End Valley". This is a correct demonstration. From the beginning, it is said that the protagonist and Madara have been intermittent for decades, and they are also the identity of a teacher. In this way, I will not feel inconsistent when I write about Madara.
But if, at a certain period of time, such as when Madara is thirty or forty, suddenly let the protagonist join and then intend to establish a deep bond from scratch, it will be very troublesome and difficult, and even for Madara in this period of time, this matter is basically impossible.
That strange fire spirit group is the sudden explosion of thunder.
The fourth point is the upgrade route.
In fact, when writing about the heavens, it is based on improving their abilities. After experiencing two or three high martial arts worlds, it is almost over. You have mastered all the laws that should be. For example, devouring the last chaotic laws, it is equivalent to mastering all the laws that can be written. If I continue to write, I can't continue to write them.
Doupo Doudi, it’s easy to say that one million miles and one hundred thousand miles.
But at the stage of devouring the strongest man in the universe, it is basically difficult to go to any world, and I don’t want to be meaningless water anymore, so I directly chose to finish it.
I think that if I really want to write about the heavens, I feel that this way of writing one world and one world is a bit out of touch with the times.
What is the best way to write it according to the event. For example, if I go to participate in a climax event in these ten chapters, then go to the sky to participate in a climax event, and then go to the ten chapters, maybe I want to participate in a climax event in the sky, so that I will always be on the road to climax.
The best thing is that you can have a super powerful main world.
The best thing is that every world is original, so that there will be no dyslexia, and the author has the final say in matters such as combat power comparison.
Let’s see if there is a chance to open the world again in the future. "Strolling the Ninja Realm from the End Valley" is a pure Naruto, without any other styles. It is a warm story about the protagonist, Madara and Hashima that I want to write. I am not sure how many words I write now. If you have good grades, write more and complete the book naturally.
Then I was writing an entertainment book I just signed.
Recently, the hand speed has become faster and faster. There is no problem with the speed of 5,000 or 6,000. It has been a day or two for more driving. It has been several months. Please rest assured.
This is also the helplessness of poor grades. As long as there is a book that is more than 1,000 yuan, I will definitely concentrate on writing that book, and I will update 10,000 or 20,000 yuan a day.
Finally, I recommend "Sand Wandering from the End Valley" with all my heart. I personally feel that this is the most comfortable book I have written and will not disappoint.
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Chapter completed!