Chapter 36 Which version are you asking about?
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The beautiful woman doesn't really want to punish Li Dayou, at most she's a warning.
So after Li Dayou begged his grandfather to sue his grandmother, she snorted coldly: "Li Dayou, please remember that you are an editor at all times!"
"Yes, yes, I must remember it, I must remember it in my heart." Li Dayou nodded and did not fall.
When Li Dayou drove away in shame, the beautiful woman then walked up to Su Qin and said with a smile: "Hello Su Qin, I am Bai Jie, May's literary editor."
Bai Jie?
Young woman Bai Jie?
For some reason, Su Qin's mind suddenly jumped out of Bai Jie, a young woman who was once extremely famous on Earth, and suddenly missed her a little.
He couldn't help but look at the other person.
At the age of twenty-four or five, it seems that he is married, and he has the charm of a mature woman. He is really a young woman
The oval face, willow-leaf eyebrows, and bright eyes, just like yi Wang Qiushui, with a beautiful nose, sexy lips, white teeth, and a slender neck.
Although it was early winter, she was still wearing a white skirt and a slim sweater on her upper body.
Very good looking!
The temperament is also very elegant, with the unique charm of mature women and the vitality and breath of a twenty-four or five-year-old woman.
Of course, it was impolite for Su Qin to look at the other party so unscrupulously, but Bai Jie didn't seem to be angry.
On the contrary, she was a little curious!
Su Qin is only eighteen years old this year. When a boy of this age sees a woman of her level, he will be at a loss, wanting to see but not daring to see it!
But the person in front of him obviously did not show such a thing. He was like an old man who had seen all the beauties in the world, and he used a purely gaze to surround her.
The curve of the corners of his lips was a little funny, as if he had thought of some embarrassing things about her in the past.
"What's going on? How could this Su Qin give me a strange feeling?" Bai Jie felt a little strange.
"Hello, Teacher Bai Jie, I'm very happy to know you."
At this moment, Su Qin reached out and shook her seriously.
Bai Jie saw that when Su Qin shook hands with her, the time was neither long nor short, the strength was neither light nor heavy. She did not have the panic and uneasiness of young boys, nor did the thoughts of those lustful people taking the opportunity to take advantage of the situation. She was very mature.
So, the curiosity in Bai Jie's heart became stronger!
Who is this Su Qin?
The soldier's assault is so well written, and his behavior gives people a mature gentlemanly feeling, not like an eighteen-year-old!
"Su Qin, I'm sorry to you first. I actually saw your manuscript very early, and I decided to come down to talk to you in person. But I suddenly had some things these days, which made me so busy that I couldn't care about you. And you didn't have a cell phone to contact, so... Sorry, I'm so sorry! If I had contacted you earlier, I might not have had such a thing today."
Bai Jie apologized very sincerely.
Su Qin smiled: "It's okay, Teacher Bai Jie, it's really okay."
Somehow, the story of a beautiful woman coming from the Niulanshan recruit camp spread, so soon, almost everyone came, but they didn't dare to come forward, just watched secretly not far from the door.
只有张华连长上来招呼了yi下.
Bai Jie did not come empty-handed. She had already obtained relevant procedures, so it was natural for her to enter the Niulanshan New Recruitment Company.
She drove an off-road vehicle, but it was not a luxury car, it was very domestic.
After some greetings, Su Qin and Bai Jie came to the reception room and began to get to the topic.
"Su Qin, we want to serialize your soldier assault in May. I discussed it with other editors and decided to publish two issues for you with a manuscript fee of 100 words. If the response is good, we will raise the price again. What do you think?"
白洁开门见山.
千字yi百?
This price is actually not high, of course, it cannot be said to be very low, it is considered a normal price!
But the more sincere point in May is that they can raise prices!
So Su Qin nodded without thinking much: "Okay, Teacher Bai Jie, I'll listen to you."
这么快就答应了?
白洁yi怔.
She originally thought that a talented author like Su Qin must be extremely arrogant and ask for a sky-high price when she spoke, but she didn't expect...
So, in this instant, she felt the better about Su Qin!
He looks handsome and elegant. Although he is a soldier, he does not have the arrogant aura of a soldier. Instead, he looks like a scholar, making people want to get close to him.
He is very tall and has a strong sense of masculine taste, giving people a strong sense of security!
The words and actions, the movements are both gentlemanly, the chic and unruly of mature men!
白洁于是不由悄悄多看了苏秦几眼.
"Su Qin, can you tell me the story of the soldier assault carefully? I want to know the general plot direction."
"Of course." Su Qin nodded, organized the language a little, and said:
"The story of soldier assault is a story that I felt after joining the army.
Before joining the army, my own conditions were not good, I failed the college entrance examination and did not go to college. After joining the army, the psychological gap was even greater, physical training could not keep up, and discipline training was also very difficult, and every aspect was not easy.
But I know that there are actually many new recruits like me. Although some recruits graduated from prestigious universities, they still cannot adapt after entering the military camp.
There is nothing else, there are naked people in the army, the fittest survive, and the strong respect the strong. The disguise and glamour are stripped away, leaving only the bloody truth...
这里不是弱者的天堂!
对于弱者来说,这里是地狱!
So I thought, can a weak person like me and a useless person like me survive in such a cruel place?
So I had the idea of writing about soldiers assault…”
Su Qin talked happily, Bai Jie listened carefully, and asked questions from time to time.
At the beginning, although she was a little confident in Su Qin's literary cultivation, she didn't care much about it to be honest!
毕竟才十八岁!
毕竟才高中毕业!
But after talking, she suddenly felt: "Oh, my god! How could he know so much! Why is his background deeper than me! His literary attainments are higher than mine!"
Ye Zhiqiu, as the most famous editor of May, Bai Jie's ability to recognize people is not as strong as yi!
So, she made up her mind secretly: "No matter what method is used, I must keep Su Qin in May!"
She even regretted the act of publishing the royalties just now, otherwise, she could quietly increase the price, at least to 200 thousand words! She has this right!
The price of a thousand words is a hundred, but I’m afraid I can’t keep this talented guy!
"Oh, by the way, Su Qin, how many words do you want to write about this soldier assault?" Bai Jie asked.
She suddenly thought of a way to raise prices.
"How many words?" Su Qin was a little distracted just now, but he didn't react, so he asked casually: "Which version are you asking? I wrote two versions of the soldiers' assault. One should be shorter, five or six hundred thousand words, and the other one should be much longer, at least one million!"
Varied......
What?
Bai Jie was stunned!
Soldiers wrote two versions?
Write two versions?
True or fake!
Bai Jie's eyes widened, unbelievable!
She has been an editor for so many years and has been in the literature industry for a longer time, but she has never heard of any writer who can write two versions?
Su Qin didn't say anything, but took out two notebooks and handed them to Bai Jie and said, "What I voted for you is this version, and there is another one, it's this one, you can see."
Bai Jie opened the two ordinary notebooks.
Seeing the dense fonts above, Bai Jie's eyes lit up, and even her heart was about to melt, and she couldn't help but scream: "Wow, what a beautiful word!"
Su Qin smiled and said nothing!
Can you not be beautiful if you are thin gold?
Bai Jie seriously appreciated the calligraphy all the time, and then she started reading it carefully. She only read more than ten pages, and then looked up at Su Qin!
She didn't say anything!
She was shocked!
There are actually two versions of the Soldier Assault!
One is the version she received, and the other one is the one in her hand!
Apart from the core of the story, there is almost nothing in common between the two versions, and the reading feels completely different!
"My God! This...is Su Qin a human being! Eighteen years old! He has just graduated from high school, but his writing level..."
Chapter completed!