()Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:24:49
Uncle, my writing has been better recently??
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:24:57
Personally, I think the book hasn’t been written yet enough to be put on the shelves.
Yes it's better than the one written in the middle
The beginning was good, the middle was bad, and now it's pretty good these days
Don't always use the name written by Lost Leaf
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:25:54
If I want to change it now, the amount of work will be huge.
Just Murong Mingyue and Zaishui Fang
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:26:10
This means that no matter how good your writing is, you can't compare to him. The characters you write are all under his shadow.
You, when I first wrote it, I didn’t tell you not to use it.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:27:35
I've recently been paying attention to adding plots of life
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:27:43
In fact, any battle is for peace, and fighting ends with force. Just remember this.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:28:05b22:28:34
By the way, there are also romantic and graceful love stories
It doesn’t reflect romance and elegance at all.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:28:48
You have to live and fight at the same time. If you don’t live, you won’t fight, and there won’t be a big fight.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:29:01
22:29:04
The passion for fighting has long been worn away
Ambiguous and don’t really feel it
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:29:2522:29:34
I don't feel it myself
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:30:3622:30:35
Brother Feng
I think
Online games?
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:30:4822:31:08
It would be better if the scenes and settings were more grand.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:31:23
We are still in the stage of fighting for hegemony in Silvermoon City.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:31:25
In the darkest side of human nature, as long as there is a glimmer of hope, it will break through the darkness and usher in the light of dawn.
What is stallion flow?
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:31:58
It’s just that the protagonist pushes down more women.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:32:17b22:32:31
Let me give you a suggestion
mercenary
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:32:47
22:32:47
gods and demons
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:33:20
There can be many girls who like the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is indecisive about their feelings.
Men only like one
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:33:51
Well, this is also the current strategy. I also feel that it would be irresponsible if we demolish it at will.
The concept of gods and demons was already laid out when the Dark Dragon appeared.
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:34:59
It must be a god or demon, otherwise why would there be electric shocks?
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:35:0322:35:19
no no no
I haven't said everything yet
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:35:3522:35:56
Can you bring the war between gods and demons into the game?
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:36:0222:36:16
In this way, divine weapons and beasts will be useful.
Brother, this is a game
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:36:32
The Dark Dragon's counterattack will eventually reveal the story of the war between gods and demons through a series of missions.
The line I buried is too far
Ark in the Sky(1303605612)22:37:19
It’s great that the line is far away, and there are many chapters to write.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:37:27
I set No. 1098 Novice Village as the secluded place of the Eastern Protoss in a paradise land. The protagonist will pass through this village and finally go to sea to find the Eastern Dragon Clan.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:37:32
It will be collected quickly when the time comes.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:37:59
Therefore, I use ancient Chinese dialogue in 1098 Good Village
The paving is too loose. It seems that we need to tighten it appropriately to let the magic thread come out.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:38:54
The problem lies in your current description of the protagonist’s electrical abilities. From a reader’s perspective, he is no longer a mortal.
Ren Xiaofeng(277283481)22:39:16
Later, someone will come from Tianhen headquarters to explain.
Ark in the sky (1303605612)22:39:38
To be continued...