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Chapter 89: Volume 1: Future Talk

 The story of Uzumaki Village finally ends here. You can even read this as an independent novel because the content is very complete. Most of the foreshadowing was recycled in the end, leaving only a small part for the future.

Make preparations.

The origin of this story is half a year ago. I conceived the possibility of the entire Uzumaki clan being wiped out in my mind, and then continued to add flesh and blood to this framework. Starting from the cause of the genocide, I thought that the Uzumaki clan could seal the tailed beast but...

Why don't I have one? I thought about the ownership of the Kyuubi, and then I thought about whether Danzo had done something here, and then thought about the Hashirama cell plan. Finally, everything was connected together, and it made sense.

Then I thought that there should be something about Madara in this, so I thought of Madara transplanting eyes to Nagato, and then combining all this with the genocide, and what happened to Nagato later, so Madara controlled Danzo, and the group

The matryoshka logic of hiding profits and luring the four major countries was established.

This is very original, isn’t it?

However, the bug about Nagato's age was something I didn't expect before I started writing. After careful calculation, I realized that Nagato was only two years old at that time, and it was unreasonable to attend a ninja school, so I added two more years.

After all, even Hatake Kakashi can graduate at the age of six (laughs).

As a result, it became the most criticized part, which I had never thought of before. However, even if two extra years are added, it will not have any impact on the development of the plot, so everyone can rest assured.

The next step is to figure out how to get from this step to the next, write an outline, and then I haven’t started writing.

Because I’m afraid I won’t be able to write it.

I don’t have confidence in myself and always feel that I won’t be able to write well, but every time I go to bed, I toss and turn, unable to fall asleep, and unconsciously start thinking about how the plot of the story should develop.

So after suffering from insomnia for several months, I finally couldn't bear the torture anymore and started writing.

Two hundred thousand words were written from February 28 to March 24, which lasted nearly a month, and was completed in one go.

During this period, I experienced several insomnias and crashes. Fortunately, it was finally completed, which is what I present to you now.

If there is anything wrong with my writing, I can't help it. This is the limit of my current writing ability.

However, there should be no OOC in terms of characters. I took out each character in the original work and read it over and over again to figure out the character's personality, preferences, characteristics, etc.

Of course, I also wanted to write about daily life in order to shape my feelings, which would also be more descriptive. Later, I forced myself to write a little bit, but found that it is really difficult to write well about daily life, and in the setting of reincarnation.

It is decided that it is difficult to establish an emotional line for the protagonist in daily life, so we simply go all the way and push the main line to the end.

However, from the moment the protagonist joins Konoha, it will no longer be a repetitive story line, but a straight single arrow, which will not loop too many times even if rebirth is triggered.

Otherwise, with a story format like RE:0 that jumps from one cycle to another, it will be difficult to promote the development of the main line. After all, it is fan fiction, and I have to consider the story line of the original work.

Since it is a single arrow, I will definitely consider writing more daily life to increase the richness of the characters.

And because the golden finger of reincarnation is temporarily offline, the ability to read intelligence will be upgraded.

I completed all the above stories in a stand-alone environment. I didn't even consider the results after publishing. I just wanted to write the story out, otherwise I wouldn't be able to sleep. I was also afraid of being affected by negative comments after publishing.

I lost the motivation to continue writing.

Fortunately, I finally finished it. I am very satisfied with some parts, but there are also some very dissatisfied parts.

For example, the beginning is too protracted and not suitable for the current fast pace of online writing, which means that the results of this book will not be very good. But since I reluctantly signed the contract successfully, I will continue to write and generate electricity for love.

It belongs to yes.

You must know that 200,000 words only have more than 300 collections, and it is still a fan fiction. This is a very popular figure at the beginning.

This is also related to the lack of promotion. You must know that when I wrote the book at Qidian ten years ago, I pushed the three rivers in succession, but now I can’t even get a test push...

But even if it is to practice my writing skills for the next work, I will continue to write.

Finally, let me talk about what I am proud of in the story.

The first is the battle between Hatake Sakumo and Uchiha Madara. The reason why I placed it at the climax of the story is because I wanted to make up for a regret. In the original work, Sakumo was not reincarnated by the dirt, so he could not see it.

What kind of friction arises between him and Madara.

Moreover, in the original work, Sakumo's characters are very low in character, and it is easy to draw on white paper, so I added a lot of original content to Sakumo so that he can fight against age spots.

In fact, his strength has always been a mystery in the original work, but it is certain that he was invincible in World War II, so I think he has at least movie-level strength.

After writing it, I found that the battle part was better than I thought, and Ohnoki's role was just right. I was very happy.

Then there is the way the protagonist solves the problem. When he didn’t understand anything at first, he only knew how to solve it through reckless actions. It wasn’t until he joined the Baath Party uprising and failed that he realized that he had to solve the problem diplomatically. This is a kind of growth.

But it seems that today’s readers don’t like to read such ink-written plots. Of course, it is also related to my lack of writing skills. It seems that it has not attracted readers to retain.

When we reach the neutral border, if it weren't for the storyline killing of the boss at the end of the level, the protagonist would have already passed the level. This actually counts as the Happy End ending I gave.

If this was just a short story, then this would be a good ending.

But for future considerations, in order to set off the real climax, the protagonist can only continue reincarnation until he passively accepts an ending that is not good but not bad, joins Konoha, and starts his real career in the ninja world.

There is no way, Madara cannot die so early. If he dies, the original plot line will completely collapse, but if Madara is not the protagonist, he will never be able to complete the level.

In the end, it can only end in a compromise. I wonder if the readers who read this are scolding the ending...

Let me tell you two things to reassure everyone:

There is a save point, so you won’t go back to the time when Uzushio Village was not destroyed in the next reincarnation.

When necessary, the curse seal will be released and you will not become Madara’s puppet.

In the first volume, the protagonist is growing up, and his growth and gains are reflected in all aspects of the story. Even the final battle with Uchiha Madara on top has almost nothing to do with him, but it was still his fault. If it were different

He definitely wouldn't be able to do it when he first traveled through time.

So don't just see the protagonist's growth in strength, the growth in mentality and behavior style is the key to breaking the cycle, and it is also the capital for him to have a place in Konoha in the future.
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