Purple Sky Chain:

Why give up cultivating?

I think cultivation can give the protagonist more time to learn things in this world and create more powerful witchcraft! It can also become a god!

reply:

Articles tend to be witchcraft.

The ambition of the wind:

I think I'm idiotic when I was young

reply:

Where are the idiots?

Ah Soul:

Author, can you shorten the child's time as much as possible! The fusion between the two age groups you have tried is really bad! It makes people feel nauseous! When the protagonist shows his mature side, it is really satisfying to watch! But when he sees the child's psychology, it makes people feel very depressed! Although the author is trying his best to express the contradiction between the two and wants to create a new situation.

But the contradiction you want to try to fail! The setting of this book is very good! I also read your book because of the keywords "witchcraft", "cold-blooded", "dark" and "cruel"! But without these keywords, I will not read your book again! Your "contradiction" is really nothing to watch! I advise the author to change it early! Through the excessive number of pictures, let your childhood pass quickly~!!

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The suggestion of the soul makes sense. It seems that my way of expressing contradictions is not mature enough. But please rest assured that childhood will only be the beginning of any work, laying some things that should be laid. Starting from the haze, the taste of childhood will gradually weaken. A series of changes have to make the protagonist mature and regain some feelings from his previous life.

hahaxixi:

I wrote it too LJ. I won't read it after reading 1 chapter, it's the same. Trash

reply:

Cultivation, rebirth, another world, superpowers, time travel, and overhead. Since there are categories, it must be fundamentally similar. Cultivation, there must be a Nascent Soul, and rebirth must start with children. There must be magic, fighting spirit, etc. in another world, and superpowers must have space system, fire system, ice system, etc....

Brothers' words are relatively empty, and it is meaningful to be more specific.

Ziyuan Youhuang:

Why are his brothers and sisters all have great excellence? And that sister seems to be very big and have little brains and willful!!

Why are his brothers very outstanding? And that sister looks very idiot and willful!!

reply:

The dragon gave birth to nine sons, and the son was different.

xpq:

OK! That's great! I hope the protagonist won't become a god in one go.

reply:

High-end such as invincibility or gods must be a long accumulation process.

Good Book Reviewer:

Depressed ~ The names of the protagonists in the books are all like this

reply:

The protagonist's name? What? It's empty and I don't know what to refer to.

o0sukeki0o:

May Day Bird~Support~I hope I can take a little time during the holidays to update~~Thank you~~Bow~~~

reply:

The King of Essence, the King of Ten Thousand Gold. Get used to seeing your ten Thousand Gold every day :)

Little Shrimp:

The author should not be influenced by readers. Continue to write in your own style. Don’t want the beauty for the time being. When you are full of wings, a new chapter will be opened, and the beginning is that beauty will appear in N years.

It is also best not to write too much about violence, although the protagonist is not a good person at the beginning. The above personal opinions are for reference only.

reply:

Beauty will have D, and bread will have D.

A crazy man ~:

Since he is so awesome, why are you afraid of family members? Zhujiao is a lawless person. He ran away from home and added more than 10 large formations outside the Boluoer Forest. He practiced for many years. He was invincible and changed his life. He could tell at a glance that he couldn't get the foundation!

reply:

Is the protagonist afraid of his family? That is respect and unbearable. Even if parents, grandpa, brothers and sisters are wrong, is it unforgivable and tolerant? Big array? What kind of big array will the protagonist have? If it refers to time, then first of all, this witchcraft is not something that ordinary people can bear. Secondly, time does not have much significance to Sikong Haoxuan's cultivation. Witchcraft lies in understanding.

As for the complete book? It’s useless, and it’s used for... wait and see.

Immortal in the Cloud:

Question: Why is the protagonist in the previous life just an ordinary person, but he can catch the three non-humans? He can also use the method of cultivation? Just a gangster godfather has been instantly done?

reply:

This is really a mystery... Well, it is a mystery. So beware of some weak people :)

Silvertail Red Wolf:

"The taboos in my grandfather's heart, the bets of unscrupulous nobles, and the inexplicable discovery, seem to have some connection."

It seems that what????=Pretty

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djxy:

I read the existing articles and then read the comments and it felt good. The writing style is pretty good, at least at medium level, and the narrative is quite clear and reasonable.

I think many children who read books are too ideal now. Can the gangster godfathers be the Lone Star of Tiansha and are cold-blooded to everyone? Who has no relatives or a few close friends in real people? What we know is often the open side of those people. As for private emotions, they are not something that ordinary people can understand.

The protagonist's sister does not have the temperament of a nobleman... She looks like a nouveau riche lady who has no good tutor and has been spoiled since childhood... Of course, there are many female characters of this type now. I don't know if the general author's imagination is limited to this... I personally feel that this character is usually created...

Write it carefully and set the plot carefully, there is still a future. I hope the author's plot setting will not fall into clichés. There is nothing else. I will collect it first, fatten it and then kill it. Haha

reply:

Thank you brother for your encouragement.

Little idiot No. 2:

I want to know when did the human skin drum move in?

reply:

I personally think how the human skin drum is made is not that important. What is important is what role it will play in the future. Because it is just a logo, there is no waste of brush and ink to describe its production process.

wishfish:

It was very beautiful and it felt good, but I felt it was boring recently... The protagonist is simply an embroidered pillow, which looks very awesome, but in fact it is stupid everywhere... Disappointment

reply:

I really hope that my friend’s book reviews can be expressed in detail. Where did the part that felt good in the past? I need to strengthen and maintain. Where does the embroidered pillows and stupidity reflect in the book at this time?

Ling Xiaoke:

After entering into meditation, he felt a warning from the depths of his soul. Sikong Haoxuan, who has studied ancient witchcraft for many years, knew that soul warnings often occur when wizards make mistakes or lack of judgment on objective information, the divination and predictions that the ancient witches are proficient in are closely related to soul warnings. "'The witch will never take himself to a dangerous situation. From this we can see that the plot written in the art of preface men will not appear, which is such a big flaw.

reply:

The powerful soul that the protagonist achieves in his mother's body is not comparable to that of the old man in the preface. The soul is the foundation of the witch. No old man, let alone the realm of a great witch, is even a wizard. Although he is clear about the taboos of the wizard, he does not have enough ability and cannot make predictions like the protagonist.

6675:

The writing is good, but I have some doubts. Even the elders of a family will not be so benign, pushing their own people to the enemy.

reply:

In the family, the family is in charge of the rule. The Presbyterian Church is in charge of the violent organization. For many years, the Presbyterian Church has attached great importance to the pursuit and research of power. The conflict between the protagonist and the Presbyterian Church also comes from power. The Presbyterian Church is very dissatisfied with the protagonist's hidden abilities and is greedy for the protagonist's way of practicing power.

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Actually, I know that I can refer to the witch!! The power of witches in these two books is very great.

reply:

There is witchcraft among gods and demons. I seem to have read it, but I haven't found it. I also like the Buddha's book, but unfortunately I haven't finished reading it-||

Wind Night Shadow:

After reading the comments, I also read the first chapter. I found out that I was lucky that I didn’t read this book.

For the author, he probably wanted to create a witch who was extremely powerful in another world. However, since the only bloodline of the ancient witch could be solved by a mortal, and when he was reincarnated in another world, the descendant of the great witch with powerful cultivation could not seize a mortal. Don’t tell me what the great witch has died. Mortals are not dead. In modern society, witchcraft can control dead people in Nanyang and other places, let alone the ancient witch. Since the great witch is so trash, it’s better not to appear. It’s better not to be embarrassed.

In addition, even if the protagonist wins, after reading many comments, the protagonist probably has changed his personality to a SB. Since he has SB, there is no need to write this book.

In addition, many brothers don’t understand what the other world is. Let me answer: the so-called another world is a complex of prisons, crematoriums, mental hospitals and sewers, which are the four continents of the other world that appear in countless novels. So scoundrels throw away the alien plane, gangsters throw away the alien plane, and murderers throw away that.

reply:

My friend is not reading a book, but reading a comment D, and the answer is finished.

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