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Chapter 17 Full Score Essay

With the whole school's attention focused on him, Li Luo stood up from his seat.
Even though he already has 35 years of life experience.
But the experience of going on stage to receive an award in front of so many people was an unprecedented experience in my entire life.
Li Luo followed Ying Chanxi and passed between the seats of his classmates. He was still a little nervous and a little excited.
The feeling of adrenaline secretion, which caused a slight numbness in the arms and accelerated heartbeat, was really rare in Li Luo's life.
But when he looked ahead, Li Luo couldn't help but sigh. He was strolling in the courtyard of Ying Chan River, with a calm expression on his face, and a figure walking towards the rostrum calmly.
It's true that Ying Chanxi has been weak since he was a child. He goes on stage to receive awards and speak as if he were a normal person.
As a 35-year-old, I don't have the high on-the-spot qualities of a little girl.
It's a bit embarrassing.
With this thought in mind, Li Luo also reshaped his posture, straightened his chest, and walked towards the stage with a calm expression.
There were eleven people in total, one more than the quota for outstanding teachers, but no one cared.
After walking to the rostrum, the teacher who arranged to take pictures wanted Ying Chanxi to stand in the middle.
But Ying Chanxi stopped at the edge of the stage, squatted down and tied his shoelaces.
When she got up, ten classmates over there were already standing in a row.
So Ying Chanxi naturally stood next to Li Luo at the edge and took the certificate from the principal.
The two of them got together and were engraved in the group photo by the teacher who took the photo.
Among these eleven outstanding graduates, there are top players like Ying Chanxi and Liu Shaowen who have good academic performance and have won competitive awards.
There are also students who have participated in some sports, music, painting and other projects, and have won at least provincial awards.
In addition, there is another classmate who did good things and was reported by local TV stations.
Therefore, Li Luo standing inside was not too obtrusive or conspicuous.
"How about this surprise?" Ying Chanxi asked Li Luo in a low voice with a smile as he walked down from the podium.
"It's indeed quite a surprise." Li Luo nodded, still recalling the feeling of seeing the playground full of people just now, feeling a little overwhelmed for some reason, "Is my quota a temporary addition? There should only be ten people.
"
"Who told you to perform so well in the high school entrance examination?" Ying Chanxi laughed and said, "I think it's quite suitable."
"That's true." Li Luo accepted Qingmei's compliment shamelessly, and then said, "But I actually got a perfect score for my composition, I didn't even know."
"I'll go find Teacher Zhang after it's over and ask for your composition to take a look." Ying Chanxi said as he walked, "In the past, your composition score was only 25 or 6, but this time it was so high. Zhao Rongjun
I don’t even get full marks for my essays, how can I teach you?”
"Maybe it's because I have a better understanding." Li Luotian said shamelessly, "The inspiration in the exam room has to get into my head, and there's nothing I can do about it."
Getting perfect marks in the Chinese composition is something that can only be said to be rare.
When Li Luo took the exam, he just followed the standard argumentative essay model of total score, copied three celebrity anecdotes in his mind that fit the topic, and paired each with a famous quote.
Then the three sub-arguments were summarized and finally synthesized into one big argument to complete the argument.
Add a few more sentences that seem to be more literary and youthful, and you have an 800-word high school entrance examination essay.
I don’t know how I got full marks.
With this in mind, Li Luo followed Ying Chanxi back to his seat.
Zhao Rongjun, who was sitting behind him, stuck his head out, took the certificate from Li Luo's hand, and looked at it curiously: "I'm envious, I don't even have it."
"Humble, low-key, nothing to look at." Li Luo took the certificate back and carefully laid it flat on his lap, "I have to show it to my parents when I get home, so don't get it wrinkled by me."
Shao Heqi and Jin Yuting, who were sitting in the front and back seats, heard sour water rising from their mouths.
But Li Luo's score was indeed higher than both of them, and the two of them couldn't say anything and could only hold it back.
Jin Yuting, in particular, thought at this moment that she might not be able to pass the score line of Attached No. 1 Middle School, while Li Luo had already successfully passed the exam.
Thinking again of the taunts I made to Li Luo before the junior high school entrance examination... Oh my god! It's so embarrassing!
Now Li Luo has even won the title of Outstanding Graduate, and he got it by relying on his ability in the high school entrance examination.
This was even more like a knife thrust into Jin Yuting's heart.
Jin Yuting is now embarrassed to talk to Li Luo and Ying Chanxi. She feels very embarrassed.
Fortunately, Li Luo didn't have the habit of settling old scores with children. Jin Yuting and Shao Heqi didn't talk to him, so he definitely didn't bother to go out of his way to slap him in the face.
Now that I have received the certificate of excellence for graduates, the surprise that Teacher Zhang mentioned has finally settled.
As for what the principal said later, Li Luo didn't pay attention. Only when the principal announced the end of the graduation ceremony did Li Luo come back to his senses.
"It's already half past four." Li Luo glanced at Shao Heqi's watch, stood up and stretched, "Will you go directly to Jiangnan Restaurant later, deputy manager?"
"Ah, yes." Shao Heqi's reaction was a little slow. He glanced at Li Luo and the certificate in his hand, then quickly looked away and responded, "Move the chairs back to the classroom, and then we can set off and leave the school.
Just a few hundred meters away.”
"I'll put this certificate in your schoolbag for a while." Li Luo turned to Ying Chanxi and said, "Be careful not to crush it. Give it to me when you get home in the evening."
"I got it." Ying Chanxi took the certificate directly from Li Luo's hand, stacked his own with his, and then said, "Then I'll leave my chair to you."
Shao Heqi in the front sighed, picked up his chair, his back became increasingly bleak as he walked forward, and silently left with the team in front.
After everyone returned to the classroom and put their chairs in place, the head teacher Zhang Wei clapped his hands on the podium and motioned for everyone to look over.
"Let's take a short break, and then we'll line up to go to Jiangnan Restaurant with the classmates from Class 6."
"There are some precautions that I need to explain clearly to you in advance. Don't turn a deaf ear to the teacher's words just because you have graduated."
"Be sure to line up on the road, pay attention to safety when crossing the road, and don't run the red light."
"After we get to the hotel, we can't drink, you know? We can only drink drinks."
"Our class still has part of the class fee left before. Shao Heqi will just charge 30 yuan per person."
In fact, thirty yuan is not enough, but Zhang Wei was happy to win the title of outstanding teacher, and he paid for the remaining money from his own pocket.

"Be careful and release slowly."
Before setting off, Li Luo stood next to Ying Chanxi and stared at her as she put the certificate safely into her schoolbag before nodding with satisfaction.
And Ying Chanxi did not forget to ask Teacher Zhang for Li Luo's perfect composition.
"Well, I'll give this to you first." Zhang Wei went to the office and handed over a copy of the composition. Then he smiled at Li Luo and said, "Although I don't know much about composition, your article is really good.
Not bad, I felt good after reading it.”
"Ahem, thank you, thank you." Li Luo took his composition from Teacher Zhang and stuffed it into Ying Chanxi's schoolbag.
After all the students in the class were ready, Zhang Wei asked everyone to leave the classroom and line up in the corridor.
Nearly a hundred students from Classes 5 and 6, plus teachers of various subjects, walked out of the school in a mighty manner.

"What are you looking at? Be careful when you walk."
In the team of Class 6, Lin Yuan, who ranked first in the class this time, reminded Hua Xiuxiu next to him, who ranked second.
Hua Xiuxiu ignored him and kept her head down as usual, holding a piece of paper in her hand with a copied composition on it.
The title is "If you drink water, you will know whether the world is warm or cold."
"Just like a person drinking water, he knows whether it is warm or cold." Hua Xiuxiu pondered the origin of the title of the essay, and the more she chewed, the more it tasted.
After arriving at school this afternoon, Hua Xiuxiu went to her class teacher, Teacher Wang, and asked for some full-score essays from this year's high school entrance examination.
What she didn't expect was that one of them actually came from within their school, written by a classmate named Li Luo in the next class.
I have never heard of this name Hua Xiuxiu, and I have never seen this person appear in the school's outstanding essay award publications before.
This made her very curious.
So during the graduation ceremony in the afternoon, Hua Xiuxiu had already taken the time to secretly read this essay several times.
"Is this so good-looking?" Lin Yuan glanced at Hua Xiuxiu's pretty profile and said, "A perfect score composition often depends on luck. It may be written with an idea in the examination room.
The person involved might not be able to write so well if he had to do it again."
"How come you haven't had any luck in the three years of junior high school?" Hua Xiuxiu glanced at him and met Lin Yuan's eyes. "Strength is strength. Didn't you see the graduation ceremony just now?"
"Li Luo, the guy in the next class who wrote this essay, originally only had a score of over 400 points."
"As a result, one month before the exam, the score improved to 555. This is higher than both of our scores, right?"
"His perfect essay about interpersonal relationships may be his reflections on the interpersonal relationships around him when he had poor grades in the past?"
"Look at the last sentence of his composition."
At this point, Hua Xiuxiu's tone changed a little, becoming a little low and frustrated, and said: "Nature's warmth and coldness play out in spring, summer, autumn and winter, and flowers bloom and wither throughout the year; human relationships are cold and warm, as cups are pushed in the morning and cups are replaced, and the lights dim in the evening.
"
"This sentence is not only well written, but also echoes what the Meteorological Bureau mentioned in the essay title. It can be said to be very relevant."
"How can it be possible to write such a sentence during an on-the-spot exam? It can be summed up by just one sentence of luck?"
Hua Xiuxiu is usually a literary girl. She was born into a scholarly family and reads a lot.
As a Chinese class representative, her Chinese scores are among the best in the school.
For example, in this high school entrance examination, the highest score in Chinese language at Yucai Middle School was 112 points, while Hua Xiuxiu was only one point lower, ranking second in the school in a single subject.
Li Luo ranked third with 110 points.
In addition, there are no Chinese language candidates with a score of 110 or above in the entire Yucai Middle School.
But for Lin Yuan, this was very uncomfortable.
Classes 5 and 6 usually have a good relationship, and the boys would make appointments to play basketball together.
Lin Yuan's height is a flaw, he has always been only about 1.65 meters.
That bitch Li Luo from the next class always blocked his shots when he was being guarded, which made Lin Yuan angry every time.
Fortunately, my grades are much better than his, and I can still be mentally victorious when losing.
As a result, this kid Li Luo actually made a huge comeback. He scored higher than him in the high school entrance examination and even came back with a perfect score in his essay.
As a result, his Hua Xiuxiu was talking about "Li Luo, Li Luo, Li Luo" today, which annoyed him to death.
But Li Luo's perfect composition this time really had something to say, and Lin Yuan couldn't find anything to say, so he could only watch Hua Xiuxiu gloomily and admire it over and over again.
It wasn't until he arrived at Jiangnan Restaurant and sat down at the dinner table that Lin Yuan watched Hua Xiuxiu put away the essay in her hand, and he finally breathed a sigh of relief.
But in the middle of the meal, when everyone stood up with their juices and went to toast the teacher, Hua Xiuxiu suddenly stood up and asked Lin Yuan, "Who's Li Luo over there?"
"Ah?" Lin Yuan was stunned for a moment, and subconsciously pointed her in the direction. As a result, he watched Hua Xiuxiu holding the juice and walking straight towards Li Luo, "No, eh... wait a minute."
Lin Yuan hurriedly followed him at a trot.
As a result, he saw Hua Xiuxiu walking up to Li Luo. After greeting her politely, he couldn't help but ask him: "May I ask what your thoughts or inspiration were when you wrote this essay during the high school entrance examination?"
Like that?"
This question was asked... Lin Yuan on the side covered his forehead, feeling embarrassed for Hua Xiuxiu.
But she was usually such a person. When it came to matters related to literature, she didn't care about the opinions of the people around her at all. Lin Yuan couldn't say anything about it.
As for Li Luo, who was asked a question, he was looking at Hua Xiuxiu with a confused look on his face, and then responded casually: "Even if I'm lucky and have an idea, I might not be able to write it if I try it again. It's not worth it."
Mentioned."
It was obviously similar to the words he used to disparage Li Luo, but when Li Luo said it himself, Lin Yuan just felt that he was really pretending to be cool.
If only he had written this perfect composition!
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