Hello everyone, I am Zhennan.

This chapter is just a casual chat, it is a comment.

First of all, I would like to thank all the readers for their appreciation and spent the time reading this book.

I believe that readers who can read this chapter should all be true love. After all, if you really want to talk about it, I feel that I am a bit willful when writing it until now.

Here I will give an example of what is willfulness.

The latest volume of "Silver" has been written almost 200,000 words so far. It is not difficult for readers to read carefully that the subject and perspective of the narrative are constantly changing. If I read this novel by myself and ignore the fact that "I am the author" (although not very capable), I will definitely call this author a "sand sculpture" when I see this. When anyone has no fantasy of being the protagonist, I will substitute myself as I read it, and the novel will be enjoyable. The problem is not only more obvious in "Silver", but the previous chapters also contain some non-protagonist perspectives. This is destined that this novel is not so good when reading it.

This issue needs to be viewed from several perspectives. On the main line, this volume talks about the development of the I after the channel is stable, and is mixed with many minor stories. For example, about online gambling, online lending, pirated copywriting, unfamiliar social and sexuality, micro-business, self-media, data privacy, dark web, Bitcoin, data annotation, rumors, etc. Although it always seems that the amount of information is quite large, there are many vague words in the actual writing. Some are clues, while others cannot be written, difficult to write, and they are not suitable for random writing. Then again, this is destined that many stories need to be displayed from the perspective of supporting roles. First, it is reasonable, and second, it can also be more generous and realistic.

Why do you need to write these bits and pieces? Two points, logic and storyline.

As mentioned earlier, the main line is about the development of Luzhou after the channel is stable. Then when someone is in the application mall, someone is doing chess and card games, gambling games should be considered inevitable. When Mojie becomes popular, he should be given yp for someone...

Many things seem to be deliberately arranged, but in fact these stories have become a logical foothold for the success of the protagonist's product. At least it sounds like one thing. Many stories often lead to some problems. Most of them may encounter problems in the development of Luzhou Company in my imagination. We will talk about this later. As for. Oh, does the money earned in Luzhou Banana come from chess and card games? I won't explain much about this.

The second story. It is not too easy to take into account both interesting and logical. As for my own writing experience, it is probably to abandon a certain storyline in order to clearly write development. It can be understood that it is logically very transparent, but it has become a description or dialogue throughout the article to advance the main line. Looking back on the previous article, the previous article of this book is probably like this. It is not so interesting to write it like that. As for the impression, it depends on personal preference.

So, here we answer the question mentioned just now: Why do you need to write these bits and pieces? Jargon: Water. Make the story more interesting while ensuring the logic is correct.

Whether it looks good or not, it depends on yourself whether you like it or not. After all, it is a sacrifice that has a lot of sense of substitution.

Let’s talk about some of the problems raised in the story.

Many of them are quite controversial and very close to reality. If you want to summarize it in general, it is probably "the contradiction between people and technology in certain scenarios". It is not a boast about the idea of ​​the work. I think this is just a part of the microcosm of society in real development, and I just try to state it. Although many chapters are not necessarily written.

What does "Silver" mean?

Before answering this question, I thought of some questions mentioned by readers: Literary Youth.

After thinking about it for a while, I understood a little bit about what this adjective means in me. Of course, although I caught some signs, I still felt it was a bit mysterious. The reason for getting the approximate answer was that I saw a summary of the squid when I was reading the Lord of My Best Friends.

[What I am more and more pursuing is simplicity and puncture. That is to say, if you can accurately describe it in the simplest and simplest vocabulary, try not to make a long-term statement, and do not fill it with gorgeous things. You can accumulate emotions step by step by step by step by step by step by step by step by step by step by using the most accurate and concise language to pierce the barrier and pierce the softest part of your heart...]

What's going on with me?

First, let me answer it from me. The concept of [Silver] comes from Wang Xiaobo's "Silver Age". In this book, the concept of silver is repeatedly used to describe the utopian world. It itself is a relatively open fable and metaphor.

In the book, the beginning of this symbolic concept is first a plot in which Luzhou was invited by Rebs to the capital for a meeting, discussing issues about privacy and user rights. Then there are a series of problems encountered in the banana market, and then the volume of "Silver".

That is, to borrow the concept of silver, in actual writing, I hope to describe a social situation similar to a dystopia in reality, and Lu Zhou is in it and is the creator of a certain system. (A certain encyclopedia interprets dystopia: matter is higher than spirit, spirit depends and controlled by matter, and the spiritual world is not free while technologically advanced.)

Let’s talk about the silver volume, there is a separate chapter of "Connor". What does Connor mean?! When I talk about this, I am so angry. The first half of this chapter is some measures that Lu Zhou will take during the Spring Festival, involving some user privacy issues. The second half describes some views on privacy by Zhong Yuanliang. Why is it called Connor?! This name comes from John Connor, the leader of the Human Rebel Army in the "Terminator" series. At that time, I planned to use this as a metaphor for future clues.

There are many similar chapters like this, such as some fantasies surrounding Ai, such as discussing plots about interaction with Zhang Xiaolong.

After understanding what you wrote before, the answer to the question will be obvious: the key story details and background are not described enough, which makes readers not understand what the story is talking about; too many metaphors and metaphors are used in the details, and understanding becomes difficult and meaningless.

So, emm…the end of the speech.

I will write it carefully, you can read it slowly. If you like it, you can collect it and subscribe to vote, and if you feed you poison, you will tear it down in the comment section.

It seems like I have forgotten something. Oh, emotional drama. Emm... Whether it is bad or watery, it should be as much as you should.

That's it. See you back.
Chapter completed!