There are too many problems with this book, so I am going to stop revisions and modify them. If I can’t modify them, I won’t be listed on the shelves and will apply for the completion of the book.

So I’m sorry for the old men who are still following and helping them with the help of the chapter push!

Let’s talk about the problem.

1: The setting is too complex, the world framework is large, and there are many elements. Although I try to control the desire to talk and not reveal it too early, the title of the book actually exposes some content, which causes the early start not to correspond to the plot and background that readers expect, and they have poor expectations, which means they lose their sense of expectation. This is probably because too many books are built and too poor reading.

2: The author may be writing in the period of writing martial arts novels, and he did not write about the feeling of fairy tale. Moreover, the trend of fairy tale seems to have changed a little now. The strange flow of fairy tale obviously occupies traffic. The ancient themes of fairy tale and martial arts start seem old-fashioned and difficult to open up the situation. I have to say that I am the best of my brother Playing. The previous book "The World of Gods and Strife" made me fascinated. Unfortunately, Kacha's sword... Alas, a masterpiece. But it also brought Gou Xiuliu, and many books followed the trend and achieved good results.

In addition, the problem with writing is that it is not novice enough, but the writing has not become novice. If you can try to be as simple as possible, the simple language is the best. Yesterday I was criticized by readers. The sorrow you wrote, suddenly, suddenly, suddenly, I didn’t recognize these words, and I felt uncomfortable reading them and didn’t want to read them.

Well, I admit that I may have written too much martial arts and haven't changed it yet. I will write a little bit more about it next time.

3: There are problems with the plot. In fact, in terms of the plot, this book is already too craftsmanship. This is the fourth version. The three versions I wrote before were all other golden fingers, but because the golden fingers are too complicated, the plot is not smooth. I still use a simple panel as the basis and mainly pays attention to the plot. But perhaps the calculation between low-mart is a dynasty and a royal grandson. Compared with the reincarnation of immortals, the pattern is too low, so it leads to a lack of expectations, and the problem seems to be very big.

In addition, if you make too much changes, you will lack a kind of aura and passion, so you will naturally not be able to write anything good. So sometimes it is better to make a decision by just thinking about it with all your heart.

Even if there are many long-term, worldview, and power systems designed, it is useless, the gears that are choked in front do not have a good track, and if you want to enter the track behind, you have to take many detours.

4: Time is too hasty. From the end of the previous book to the opening of this book, I have been in a hurry. I originally planned to take a break and write slowly to find a feeling, but when I got on the road, I agreed to the old reader to open the book on the 27th, so I was in a hurry. When I was writing this version, I changed it in a hurry five days before the opening of the book. I couldn’t even think of the title of the book, so the editor helped me get it. So I am very grateful to my editor, but unfortunately I didn’t have enough ability to write a good article.

Okay, that's all I said. The King of Scarlet that I told you the day before yesterday is really because you didn't have your eyes to read. You should admit it? It's not my fault, but you even reported me... Ahem, forget it, you are still the author, I won't say anything. The editor asked me to delete the words the day before yesterday. But I didn't say swear words. I just told the truth, you don't have your reading... Well, that's it.

[To be honest, I have been using wild fruit reading to read books and follow updates recently, changing sources and switching, and pronunciation aloud for many tones, www. Android and Apple are available.]
Chapter completed!