When I first saw your book review of "Big Tomcat", I was honestly a little unhappy, but after carefully looking at the content, I found that it was an old reader who came here, but to be honest, I still feel a little uncomfortable with your accusations.

Regarding sincerity, I am afraid that you and I have different opinions. At that time, when I started writing at a certain point, I was suddenly liberated from the pressure because I had just been demobilized. I thought of writing books because of the great book shortage at that time, and it was just a whim. Except for the part where Asma used cigarettes to assess the protagonist team, I actually wrote it in a boring and coping manner. I was very good at it at that time and did not make money by writing books. It was really difficult to write sincerely.

I believe you still remember the "…………” segments that appear frequently at that time. In fact, I had thought about learning the "————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

I thought of coming to Zongheng at that time, one was because the page of a certain point became more and more disgusting, and the other was because I flipped through the first version of Kishita, but I only felt one feeling - strong complaints **!

Many readers had commented at that time, saying that the first edition of Kinoshita's later period was completely broken, but because of the mentality at that time, I didn't care much. Until my mentality changed, I found that even I couldn't read the book..., and my still firm collection made me not want to give up on this book. I was already working at that time, and suddenly I found that although it was quite hard to read the book reviews of readers, and when I was thinking and typing, it made me feel much more at ease.

In fact, if you have written serial novels, you should have an understanding. Compared to a cross-shot, thinking about the environment, guessing the context and psychological activities, as well as the conception of fighting, which one is more difficult and troublesome.

And to be honest, although the modified version of the Hatsuno Country chapter is still not as good as many mature authors, I am personally very satisfied, because it was indeed written with care. The first version of the Hatsuno Country chapter and the establishment of the Shikamaru Oshima Bridge did not write about the influence and shock of the protagonist on Hatsuno Country, Dazna and Inari at that time, as well as the changes that may occur in the Wako Country and the protagonist's involvement. If it is a manga, with the help of visually, the protagonist and other characters' movements and expressions, combined with the context, it is naturally easy to achieve the atmosphere, but the novel is not good, without laying the groundwork, just as straightforward as writing a primary school student essay, it is dry and meaningless to read.

The only thing that made me feel bad about the revised version is the content of the written test in the last two chapters. Because some regulations of the Chunin Exam Chapter need to be translated into the original work, it may have some sense of déjà vu, but if I want to skip it with an ellipsis, I am not willing to do it because if I don’t want to narrate it in plain words and often skip paragraphs, I need to constantly conceive the environment characters, etc. It is easy to think stuck and cannot write it out. The author does not have enough writing skills, and it is easy to jump out of the same situation as the first edition - everyone still remembers that in the first edition, Shikamaru was promoted to Shikamaru, and I wanted to write about the Shikamaru assessment process, but because I was too lazy to conceive, I skipped the chapter directly..., including the later Shikamaru's strength cannot be controlled, in fact, they are all the consequences of often playing with the bad part of the paragraph...

In fact, if you really want to play narratives and play jumping paragraphs, the author can do it, but it doesn't make sense. I once said that if this book is not on the shelves, it may seem a bit arrogant. After all, there are indicators for it. But the book friends are more powerful. Collection, clicks and red tickets are growing slowly but firmly (black tickets are also rising!) - But I don't want to cut corners and put out the outline stream to quickly end the book. I still want to try my best to write this book well, write carefully, write carefully, and not deal with it, and not be merciless. In my opinion, this book must be written at least one million words, secretly spoiled, and my outline has been set until the fifth Ninja World War...

So, if I say that I am slow to update and accept it, after all, I have to eat when I have a job, but if I say that my modified version is to deal with and perfunctory, I firmly deny this.

Or tomcat, when I was ready to finish the book without writing a million words, I must blame me! Just use the promise I made with what I said!^_^
Chapter completed!