Today's modification progress: 5~7 chapters are wrong to modify.

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Chapter 5: The grammar is slightly modified, and some of the wrong reds have been fine-tuned. The plot frame has not been changed. The overall adjustment is not large, and the number of words has been expanded by about 200 words.

Chapter 6: Interactive content, logical content, scene description and other aspects have been moderately adjusted, and the expansion has also been about 200 words.

Chapter 7: The battle description, specific details, and wrong words were optimized at medium and high levels, and the writing layout was adjusted, and the overall framework and rhythm trend did not change.

Tomorrow's construction status will be in total for three chapters, and the text will be about one thousand words~

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I'm replying to some troubles from my friends from Dongshu.

The purpose of revision of the whole book is to improve the smooth reading of the book. The new readers who are wrong with cocoa are the ones who are not good at reading.

The essence is that the plot will not be changed. Therefore, if you don’t go back and watch it, you will not cause any mistakes to miss some new key points. For friends who like to repeatedly find details, you may have a new experience.

Secondly, the second purpose of revision of the book is to hope that this way can allow the author to re-control the details of the book. The general direction has not been lost, but he is also worried that some inconsistent story points will be born because of the mistakes and omissions.
Chapter completed!