Today in the reader group, a reader said that the final battle should be the climax, but he felt nothing after watching it.

I re-edited it and looked it over, and I really felt that it was not in place, the lines were not strong enough, there was no momentum, and there was no excitement like during battle.

So today I revised chapters 265 to 287.

Make the lines more powerful, the momentum more powerful, and the battle scenes more passionate.

If you are interested, you can watch it again without resubscribing.

Some have more modifications, some have less modifications.

Basically, the original chapter is 2,000 words, and the revised one is at least 2,200 words, and the most is more than 2,800 words.

I did a little calculation and found that I wrote at least 5,000 more words, which I sent to everyone as an apology gift.

In the past, in order to earn tens of thousands of dollars, I rushed every day to finish the manuscript, but there were indeed many places where the writing was not precise enough. If you think something is not good, you can say it in a chapter review or short review, or you can join the readership and express your personal opinions.
Chapter completed!