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The book was posted on the ban of the Qidian. I was depressed and listless when I was originally happy. I worked hard last night, from 8 o'clock to 3 o'clock in the morning, but I was in a bad mood and naturally I couldn't do it. I only wrote more than a thousand words.
I got up at 8 o'clock this morning to write a book, but I didn't dare to open Qidian's webpage. Then I focused on the computer. Finally, I finished the manuscript three hours later, and gave the sixth episode to the publishing house at noon. However, when faced with the countless comments in the book review area that affected my mood, I had to say a few words, otherwise I wouldn't be happy if I didn't say anything.
I admit that I don’t have enough social experience and all the things are written terrible, but I have been working hard to learn from others’ common places. I often read books for more than six hours a day. Many of the loopholes pointed out by book friends in the book review of "From Starting from scratch" are often my foreshadowing, and there will be a gradual explanation later, such as why Han Xue accepted the clothes given by Xu Jialiang? Why did Xu Jialiang appear at Han Xue’s house? Why was Xu Jialiang not afraid of offending the provincial party secretary and instructing others to take photos secretly?
The protagonist in the book is weak and has become the focus of criticism. I think I wrote the protagonist childishly, but before writing, I had considered it. Just imagine if you were 13 to 18 years old and had not been in contact with society in the past five years, would you still show the stability and maturity of an adult? A protagonist with shortcomings and cowardice was set in advance by me. I need to gradually train, grow, fall, fail, and learn from the lessons before the cunning, scheming, and uselessness. If these protagonists were fully possessed at the age of 18, how would their life develop in the future?
As for the plot development, many people think it is far-fetched, but there are too many subpoenas, so I can't write it one by one! So it's a bit "chaotic", and this article's first-person narrative causes many places to be unclear, unreasonable, and many jokes. I will start to correct this in episode 7.
I am not married yet, and I have never had the ing of separation and death when I was in love. So I don’t think there is anything impossible in love in the book. This society is somewhat the same. Love is almost equivalent to going up. As long as I accept being a boyfriend and girlfriend, it doesn’t take too many twists and turns to go to that point. As for Han Xue’s attitude, I will ask if a woman who has never been in love wants to have her own love. Pan Junyu’s conditions are not bad, and it is direct enough, and there is nothing impossible.
Finally, since the previous chapters have been finalized, I cannot modify them. I hope everyone can continue reading them 'sloppy'. I will learn computer knowledge. My goal is to gradually improve this book, and through the training of the subsequent chapters, hone yourself and reduce jokes, mistakes, and flaws.
It is impossible to pursue perfection. I can only take it slowly and do it perfectly. I am still young (Xu Sui 23, stop attacking me in life). With this experience and future training, I don’t believe that I will be criticized like this ten years later.
Chapter completed!