What is fate? Is it the trajectory of fate? Or is it the luck we have in fate? When we work hard to change the so-called fate, is it just within the expectations of the creator? Some people say that fate is destined to suffer

Many people call it a calamity, a crisis, and a turning point. However, Gu Long once said: "People are in the world, and they can't help themselves." When we don't want to change, but we must change, when you can't avoid it,

, when you meet it head on, maybe your destiny wheel has undergone tremendous changes. This time, it will be called growth.

A person's growth actually has a lot to do with his or her decision-making, and the birth of a great person is a legend in itself. What will he encounter, what will he learn, and what will he forget? Where does he start to grow? Until the end.

To reach such a state, the main line of this article is a growth process. For example, this article is the process of how a man with unique skills grew from being unknown to influencing the world and then reaching the peak. This article does not

Starting from the life experience of the male protagonist Long Hao, it does not first introduce the life experience and the reasons for cultivation like other cultivation articles, but directly introduces the plot into the cultivation process, thus elevating the identity of the protagonist and leaving it to the readers.

Infinite reverie, why did he become the old man's apprentice, and what is his identity? Faced with a thing, the actions of everyone with different backgrounds and growth environments are definitely different. This article has no

Without the explanation of his background and identity, there is no trace of his decision-making, which adds to the suspense of the story.

The story at the beginning is actually very similar to Zhang Wuji's experience of falling off a cliff after being exploited by the sanctimonious "Zhu and Wu" martial arts families. What is different from Zhang Wuji's mistaken learning of kung fu is that this article

Li Lu Ling'er's betrayal made him understand that not everyone believed that this time was equal. He was exposed to the dangers of the world without knowing it, which was indeed a cruel thing for a young man who was not familiar with the world.

However, for the birth of a brave man, it is a necessary process. Optimistic people are not easy to be hit, but they can face it calmly after being hit.

The plot of the whole book is ups and downs, well-proportioned. The development of the story is often unexpected, but it is also leisurely and unhurried. The structure is grand and sophisticated. The language of the novel is concise and meticulous, and the conception is strange. The classical story has modern dialogues.

Invisibly, it brings the readers closer, without obscure and jerky words, which is more conducive to the understanding of the characters. The characters in the text are vivid and have distinct personalities. The good and bad times during the period are all born of emotion.

Their nature cannot be summed up in one word as good or evil. By describing the life course and fate of these characters, the author implies the connotation he wants to express. The fate of the characters invisibly deepens the urgency of the story.

Sex. In addition, this article arranges a lot of martial arts scenes, and the descriptions are relaxed, powerful, natural, and intense. Readers who like to watch martial arts scenes, please don't miss it.

Naturally, not every piece of white jade can be flawless, and not every article can be made without mistakes. If we talk about the shortcomings of this article, it is probably the beginning of the article, which does not convey enough atmosphere. The author seems to be just borrowing the opening chapter.

Chapters are used to introduce the power and general content of "Feng Yun Jue" learned by the male protagonist Long Hao. When you read it, it will feel like an introduction to martial arts. Fortunately, the character dialogue interspersed in the article will give those chapters a sense of story.

And the progress after that was a bit too fast. It would be great if the author could polish up the writing a little bit.

There is also the charm of language, which needs the assistance of character actions to achieve the effect of infecting readers. The story also takes place during this period. Therefore, many people will say that when you know someone, you can know what they are like by just looking at their small movements.

One point, the author needs to work harder. Lingxi will find that the martial arts scenes in this article are very good, but in the dialogue, the actions are a bit weak. If they can be polished a little, the atmosphere will be enhanced.

I thought it would be better. After reading it again, I also found that some sentences in the article are too trivial, which will greatly weaken the progress of the plot and even make people feel like a running account. I secretly thought that if it were not a small talk,

The foreshadowing of the story's progress should not be mentioned at once, but should be avoided if possible. The author should also pay more attention to this point.

The above is purely Lingxi's humble opinion. If there is anything wrong, please forgive me. I look forward to your completion of this work, please work hard.
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