Including the final subtitles, the twenty-minute screening of the work ended, and there was no sound for a long time on and off the stage.

Until an audience member broke the silence with a deafening roar: "Yuan Xiao!! You have no heart!!!"

Then there was another sound.

"Luo Hanzhang! What a bastard!"

In fact, what I want to scold most is the bastard father who blamed Qin Jue and deceived his son and daughter!

But that guy doesn’t even have a name!

I don’t even know how to scold!

Ahhhhhhh I’m so angry!

To be fair, Qin Jue doesn't really have many scenes, but the problem is that it's so cruel! It's hard to let go of the torture! It's hard to let go of the torture! I wish I could hang the screenwriter Ling Chi upside down!

"Let's see."

Director Fang Youwen, the only director who had read the complete script, turned his head and looked at screenwriter Yuan Xiao who was smiling wryly beside him.

Few of the members of the fourth group knew the plot. At this time, all the women were defeated, including Lin Rou, and they were crying. The men also looked like they were going to eat Yuan Xiao, and some of them even shot angry looks at Yuan Xiao.

Luo Hanzhang.

Actor Luo Hanzhang was about to cry: "Fathers and fellow villagers, it's none of my business!"

With all the conscience, when he got his part of the script, he just thought he was a handsome guy who was a little timid!

I didn’t expect Qin Jue’s plot to be like this!

Amid the curses from the audience, the fourth group came on stage one after another.

Suddenly, an unusually obvious roar came from the nearest auditorium: "Where are the eggs and rotten vegetable leaves! Which one is Luo Hanzhang?! Throw him away!!"

Actor Luo Hanzhang immediately took three steps back with weak legs, trembling and said: "Please don't bind the character to the actor!"

If I had known earlier, I would have asked the director to change the character's name! Help!

Under the roar of laughter, the atmosphere finally eased, and the host Lin Yuqin also seized this opportunity and intervened appropriately.

"Alas." He started with a tactical sigh and said with a smile, "This work of yours..."

Dragon Kingdom has a grading system in the entertainment field, but it will not be rejected due to dark content. However, the fourth group of works is too depressing.

Although compared with "The Cage", the psychological depression is far less than Jiang Shuming's level, but the abuse in "Empty Monument" is straightforward and obvious, and the public can take a bite of the blade without much effort. No wonder it aroused public sentiment.

Excited.

Fang Youwen kept a sweet smile and looked like he was just the director and had nothing to do with me.

Next to him, Yuan Xiao's face was frozen with laughter. Never before had so many viewers turned their attention to him as the screenwriter at this moment all the way to the third round.

Wouldn’t you like to pay more attention to the actors!

Oh, the actor Luo Hanzhang is not having a hard time either.

That’s okay.

"A very realistic work." In the judges' seat, Yue Yang spoke first, "First of all, I want to say that you are very brave."

"The Empty Monument" is obviously a tragedy. The culprit, Lin's father, survived safely, but Nie Xingliang and Qin Jue passed away forever. Especially the latter, he was an injustice from beginning to end, and he was not punished until his death.

Rehabilitate.

In the ending, Nie Xingliang has a tombstone without words, symbolizing his heroic and martyrdom achievements, but Qin Jue "doesn't even know where her ashes are." The tombstone that records her life and death does not exist and is empty.

This is the real "Empty Monument".

Good people die, but bad people still live in the world. Such satirical works are rare in today's era. On the one hand, the main theme of promoting justice and kindness is on the one hand, but on the other hand, the audience is small. If the ending is bittersweet, it will still be

Well, completely depressing socially oriented works of revenge are hard to get the support of a large audience, and over time the number of people creating them will decrease.

"There are still loopholes." Zhu Zishu, the only screenwriter among the four judges, smiled and added, "However, the flaws cannot hide the advantages."

"Indeed." Yue Yang nodded, "Is that Fang Youwen? I remember you."

The "Invisible Lover" he shot was the one Yue Yang commented on, "You also learned from "The Cage"."

The judges' vision is so vicious, not to mention that the detail processing in "The Empty Monument" is also quite obvious. However, many interns and the audience did not notice it before Yue Yang pointed it out.

"Yes, teacher." Fang Youwen nodded honestly.

He made a magical modification here, adapting two quick cuts of scenes in "The Cage" into the switching between Lin Rou singing and Nie Xingliang's sacrifice in "Empty Monument". The traces of imitation are slightly heavy, but because of Lin Rou's singing

The action scenes with Nie Xingliang were very outstanding and directly attracted the audience's attention, so there was no direct association for a while.

"A relatively successful reference." Yue Yang said, "But the perspective transitions were used too many times, and I was already tired of aesthetics at the end. In the end, Lin Rou's father, the murderer, appeared, which cannot be regarded as a highlight."

Fang Youwen listened carefully.

"The camera shoots Lin Rou and Qin Jue from the perspective of 'Father Lin'. This clever trick is used over and over again, which is very boring." Zeng Xinhuiqin did not show mercy because of the excellence of their work, "On the contrary, it exposed the fact that the crew was not good at acting.

."

Yue Yang laughed: "Yes, whether it is the two female students at the beginning or the two policemen at the end, there are too many roles and lines given, and the distribution is unreasonable. Moreover, the acting skills are disconnected from the main and supporting roles, which is very distracting."

"Because of this, you deliberately made the actor who plays Lin Rou's father appear on screen for only a short time. The setting is very clever, but it is not enough to cover up the shortcomings."

Fang Youwen kept nodding, this is indeed the problem.

Yuan Xiao was so excited as he wrote this script. None of the actors are villains, so they can only choose among the extras. But if the extras can be so good, why should they be an extra?

I just found a man with good lines but average acting skills to play Father Lin, so I had no choice but to use this method.

"It's quite scheming." Zeng Xinhuiqin snorted lightly, "Since the actor's performance is passable, I will use my strengths and circumvent weaknesses to play a hat trick."

Fang Youwen could only laugh naively.

"Have fun." Zeng Xinhuiqin's eyes moved on the faces of the members of the fourth group in turn, and finally stopped near several actors. "Here, half of your scores come from the actors, and half of the remaining half

For screenwriting and cinematography."

She held up the score board with 94 written on it.

"In terms of acting skills..." Best Actress Ruan Ziyan said softly, obviously very satisfied, "The performances of Qin Jue and Nie Xingliang are very good."

"In the play, the character 'Nie Xingliang' does not have major changes in expression. I am very happy to see the actor's handling of micro-expressions. A few smiles and a few eyes have different meanings. As for Qin Jue, he has fewer roles and highlights.

It's quite satisfying, that part of the acting that turns from laughter to tears..."

Ruan Ziyan paused, looked at Qin Jie, and smiled.

"It's not at the textbook level, but it's more than enough for a teaching assistant level."

The rating is so high!

Lin Yuqin was thinking about how to find a topic, and immediately answered with a smile on his face: "In the last movie "The Cage", our Qin Xiaolang still mainly played dramas. Unexpectedly, after a few months, our literary dramas have also improved so much.

Ah!"
Chapter completed!