I have actually wanted to open a single chapter to communicate with readers for a long time. When the first volume of "Smart King" was completed, I wanted to answer some readers' suggestions. In the afternoon, I just received the "strong recommendation by category" for next week.

Backstage text messages, there are so many words of thanks that I really can’t help but say:

I would like to thank my editor, Mr. Blu-ray, for giving me such an opportunity. Thank you for taking such good care of a newcomer like me. Thank you for your strong support, whether it is in terms of writing guidance or work recommendation!

Of course, I would also like to thank my readers who have always supported me. Without your continued support, it would be really difficult for me to persevere. Thank you for tolerating my unstable early updates and the small number of words. Thank you for writing to me in the book review area.

Many suggestions, and thank you for your tips and praise!

The country is in hot weather recently, and the city I live in is famous for its big stoves. I work mostly outdoors during the day, and start typing as soon as I get home at night. In fact, I also like this feeling now. Since uploading, although I have updated

It's not fast, but I haven't stopped updating it. From now on, I can guarantee at least two chapters and five to six thousand words every day. I will burst into flames at special times!

Regarding the suggestions from readers in the book review area, I will also give some explanations here:

1: "The writing is okay, the writing style is good, but there is one thing that is very cheating"

"About me, I have only read a few chapters now, and I found that the two words "haha" appear more than once. Modal particles like this are okay if they appear occasionally, but if they appear too often, they will make people feel disgusted.

.I just discovered this now... It’s hard to comment on the plot now... At least I’m enjoying watching it now, which shows that the author himself is still a relatively optimistic person. But those catchphrases and the like should appear less often, right?

One point, I personally hope that there won’t be too many female protagonists, at most 2, or even just 1 is enough. If you write too many female protagonists, it will be easy to fall into the trap of describing the female protagonist, not caring about the plot, just to pick up girls, just to pick up girls.

xxoo, it’s boring.” - Little Pig in Peach Blossom Spring

Thank you for your support! I will pay attention to "haha", haha ​​(haha, you said another one?) Regarding the heroine, what I want to say is that this article focuses on creating a smart phone technology article, although I may not write it well.

The professionalism is a bit YY and exaggerated, but this article is definitely not an article with multiple female protagonists, so don’t worry!

He will only be in love with his first love and "first time". As for who is the protagonist's first love and "first time"? Is it one person or two people? You still need to continue reading. - Wuliangda

2: Let me put it in the simplest way...I haven't read it yet...but I'll tell you what I think...smartphones...first of all, they have to have a system...I'm so stupid.

...What I mean is that he has a large system that specifically runs on its hardware...and then small software...that is to say, the hardware must meet the standards first...However, it seems that their processor architectures are different.

There are also differences in software... Even if they are compatible... But... We compare hardware to a bag... The operating system is just some sundries... The bag is too small to fit... It seems that the more advanced it is

The more space the system occupies... However, if you want to achieve the awesome effect in your introduction, you either develop a new processor or you develop a new system... Simplify repeated operation instructions... It seems like the second one

Simpler... But this lead is not too obvious... Just like one second and one second... It's hard to tell where it wins... because the same configuration is there... The first mobile phone

The second key point is his battery... This is very important... I won’t talk about it... I’m going on too much... I’ll go on and on... The summary is that knowledge alone is not enough... Made with 28nm processing technology

There is no 18nm process... Then material science is progressing... The materials now are not the materials of future generations... You can write about surpassing Apple... but you have to come up with materials and processes first...

Also...I understand some of those movies...sometimes technological leadership can attract people's attention...but we can't ignore some inevitable factors...for example...what the movie expresses is not there

...Humanity...and the resonance caused by its own quality...Shaolin Temple has been fresh in our minds for so many years...Do you dare to say that its picture is very good? But why does it make people feel good-looking?

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So...——Speechless and lonely

Thank you for your comments. It can be seen that my brother is very knowledgeable and professional about smartphones. Although you may not have read the article, your two corrections are very accurate and will be very helpful for my subsequent plot. The first volume will be completed soon. I

The reason why you write a lot about art clubs and young students who strive for their artistic dreams is actually to prepare for the second volume. Regarding the 4D movies in the second volume, you said, "Technological leadership can attract people's attention... But

We cannot ignore some inevitable factors...for example...what the movie expresses does not resonate with...humanities...and its own qualities."

Thank you for your suggestion, I will adopt it!

Your second question said about surpassing Apple, and you said, "But you have to come up with materials and technology first." This will probably be the content of my third or fourth volume. There are detailed level upgrades in my book, and now it has been upgraded to production.

The level, materials and craftsmanship will also gradually improve. - Wuliangda

Three: I saw 69 pictures, what a tangled plot, it’s boring - Bloodthirsty Dharma King

Please wait for a few chapters. I have two heroines in this book, one is the first love and the other is the first time. This entanglement is foreshadowing. In our opinion, the protagonist tells the story of his first love in such detail, Zhao Xinxin

It’s still a bit confusing, the protagonist wrote so many love letters, but she really didn’t receive them? Who responded to the protagonist’s Christmas Eve date? After Chapter 80, I believe you will be moved by the story of the protagonist and Zhao Xinxin,

An explosion of emotions in all plots!

I don’t like to write about a protagonist who I just accept whenever I see one. In fact, when I was writing chapters sixty-five to sixty-nine, I was just like you. I was afraid that readers wouldn’t like it and would be confused. But please forgive me, I really want to write this paragraph.

Emotions are written with more twists and turns and are better. - Wuliangda

Four: I’ve been reading too many urban system articles recently and I’m tired of it. I’ve almost finished reading your book. Although some parts are a bit exaggerated, it’s generally good. After all, it’s a novel. The plot should not be exaggerated and the protagonist should not be described as awesome.

It’s a little too forceful, and no one likes to read it. In terms of technology, the writing is quite rigorous, and the upgrade system is also a bit interesting. Starting from the second volume, I will be able to create some platforms and systems. I’m still looking forward to it. Keep up the good work, I

I will follow it.——Gu Xuan Zui

Thank you for your support! It is true that some of the plots are exaggerated, and I have been downplaying them. Maybe my writing skills are limited, and for the sake of the entertainment of the book, my technical rigor is a bit lacking.

This is the second volume, I hope to write more exciting stories! - Wuliangda

There are many more book reviews that I won’t write here. These issues are more representative. Thank you for your suggestions and corrections. I will try my best to write them well!

Finally, I would also like to thank all the book friends who rewarded me: Open? Book friend 121022, Guxuanzui, ╰つ泯出, Yuanlai/, book friend 130814, I am Happy Third Brother.

I wrote this single chapter in an Internet cafe while I was outside waiting for customers. Sorry, I can’t update it in the afternoon. There will be a big chapter of more than 3,000 words in the evening. In the second volume, various characters’ emotions in the book
Chapter completed!