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Chapter 444 The second lesson

"Qingwu greets Master." Xiao Qingwu was hanging on his chest and said helplessly: "It is not convenient to treat the whole ceremony when you are on your body. Please don't blame me."

Xue Mu almost laughed: "Qingwu, you are becoming more and more interesting now, you can consider writing jokes."

"It's just because she faces the master." Xiao Qingwu said in her heart that she even gave you a bellyband. What else can she shrink? She is not so cheerful when facing others.

Xue Mu asked, "Are you here to hand in your homework?"

"Yes, I went to give Ji Qingyuan a regular treatment early in the morning, so I came to ask my master to comment on my homework." Xiao Qingwu endured for a long time, and finally couldn't bear it anymore and picked up the endless rubbing of Xiao Ye on her chest, took out a volume of manuscripts, and said carefully: "Please give me advice..."

Xue Mu was shocked: "So many!"

"Ten, eighteen, I wrote eighteen episodes."

"..." Xue Muru looked at the heavenly beings: "Don't you know that you can act eighteen kinds of appearances in one game?"

Xiao Qingwu was stunned: "Ah?"

Xue Mu taught with regret: "If you want to talk about the eighteen-like appearances and thirty-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-something, it's just a saying. As long as you write the most brilliantly, that's the essence. Why do you want to write the eighteen types?"

Xiao Qingwu listened to the training dejectedly and recorded his homework secretly.

Xue Mu was hugging Liu Wanxi to read the manuscript together. Although he was so sorry that he couldn't make a strong man, he was actually very happy. It was so interesting to see the little yellow article written by this timid doctor fairy.

The text is pretty good, but the scene structure is not well written, and there is no feeling of being immersive for just a few strokes, and it is a little rigid and rigid. There is no way to do this, you need to practice...

Then, the description of that matter was particularly interesting, filled with serious medical terms, no character expressions or verbal communication, stereotyped posture movement, and even evaluated what postures are easier to get pregnant.

Nothing to do anything...

As he looked, a word suddenly flashed through Xue Mu's mind:

Physiological and hygiene textbooks!

"Wanxi, did you react after seeing it?"

"No, no..."

"The reader did not respond at all. This is the failed text." Xue Mu sighed, and then folded it back in a straight manner: "You keep it yourself, and read it again in the future, and you can refer to it and improve."

This sentence has the meaning of real teaching. Xiao Qingwutong blushed and put it seriously, and whispered: "I'd like to ask my master for advice."

"Whether this kind of scene or a regular scene, the story must be interesting first. For example, this scene has a grape trellis, which is a unique interesting point. If you don't play it out, just talk about how to move under the grape trellis, wouldn't it be a waste?"

Xiao Qingwu nodded as if he had some understanding, and said, "How can I use this in combination? My disciple can't think of it."

Xiao Ye said, "Dad, please write an article for my junior sister. Don't keep making things difficult for my junior sister."

"You little thing." Xue Mu was so amused and crying. After thinking about it, he felt a little itchy. He hadn't written a little Huang article for a long time. This is a classic scene, and it should be used as a Water Margin Series!

He did it as soon as he said that, Xue Mu directly hugged Liu Wanxi and spread out a roll of paper to start writing a model essay.

Liu Wanxi stopped reading the memorials, and Xiao Qingwu and Ye Guying came over there, and they all stretched their heads to watch the "A Generation of Wenzong" writing articles.

Without taking a few glances, Xiao Ye couldn't stand it first and ran away with his eyes covering his eyes. Not long after, Ye Guying turned around and left silently. Only Xiao Qingwu was left with a blushing face, looking at him with shame and admiration, wanting to leave and learning.

Liu Wanxi in her arms had long been a puddle of mud.

"Pan Jinlian Hanging the Grape Rack Upside Down", this classic scene can be immortal... Where have people from other worlds seen it?

What big white legs are spread out and hung on the grape racks on both sides, and they must be described in detail, like a golden dragon exploring its claws, a red groove and a red dew... Imagine that kind of desolate scene, where Ye Ye retreated directly. Ye Guying retreated from Ximen Qing and threw the plums into the pot, and all three hairs hit the bull's eye... Liu Wanxi was limp and put the plums in... When she was picked out and eaten, Xiao Qingwu's face had turned into a burning cloud.

As for what I did later, I thought it was interesting, and I was more sophisticated than Xiao Qingwu's physiological and hygiene teaching materials.

Xue Mu threw the pen and waved his hand happily: "Take it back and make a model essay, and think carefully."

The air was very quiet. After several breaths, Xiao Qingwu took the manuscript in a rustle. He didn't dare to look at it again, and quickly stuffed it into a small medicine bag.

Xue Mu leaned comfortably on the chair: "Qingwu, your little schoolbag is so cute..."

"Thank you for your advice. Qingwu went back to figure it out." Xiao Qingwu could no longer hear what Xue Mu was saying, so he barely bowed and ran away in panic. When he arrived at the door, he was almost hooked by the threshold. He knocked his head for a moment and didn't have time to cry out, and ran away with tears in his arms.

"Uh...had you put too hard?"

Liu Wanxi laughed: "You can take someone as an apprentice and teach you some real skills. It's too much to tease you like this..."

"They asked for this model of reasoning. Cough cough... Although this article is very powerful..." Xue Mu scratched his head: "Next time, let's teach her something else, it's really not good."

Liu Wanxi murmured with charming eyes: "Who have you ever played with such a powerful scene?"

"No, it's not me, don't talk nonsense..."

Liu Wanxi twisted gently, and her cherry lips brushed across his cheeks, and the sound was like a mosquito: "Do you want to... play with Wanxi like this?"

Xue Mu was moved and coughed dryly and covered up, "Forget it, this is not good. Pan Jinlian is so playful..."

"When I ask you to drink half a cup of tea, isn't I just Pan Jinlian..." Liu Wanxi smiled and said nothing more, just said, "Okay, I have to deal with the memorials and deal with Ji Qingyuan later. We... the future is long."

…………

Liu Wanxi wants to do serious things, not only to deal with Ji Qingyuan, but also learns how to deal with government affairs by herself. This is a big deal, not a time to play.

Although Xue Mu was itchy by her statute, he did not continue to disturb her. He got up and went out to carry Xiao Ye, greeted Ye Guying, and ran to Xiao Qingwu's palace courtyard, intending to teach her some serious compensation.

Along the way, there were palace maids leading the way, and they were also dragging their children and daughters. They really regarded the inner palace as the back garden.

"Dad is so naughty."

"The leader is a pervert."

These are the words that the two girls of two big and small have repeatedly recited and repeated along the way, all of which turned into Xianglin Sao and chatted endlessly, without any other new meanings. It seems that I really don’t know how to describe it.

Xue Mu lowered his head and was squirting without saying a word. It seemed that the grape trellis had caused public anger besides Liu Wanxi. It would be better to be honest and not to resist. To teach others a little serious, this image can at least be saved...

Xiao Qingwu's single courtyard has a great origin. This is the residence of Xiahou Di in the palace back then. It was secluded and quiet, with several plum blossoms in the courtyard, and the environment was very suitable for Xiao Qingwu's taste. There were also palace maids taking care of their diet and daily life. If they were according to her habits, if they were not going to treat Ji Qingyuan, they could stay in it for the rest of their lives.

Xue Mu visited, and Xiao Qingwu's face was not yet red. She couldn't see Ye Guying. Seeing Xue Mu carrying Wu Ye, she was not scared to close the door, but just bowed weakly: "Master..."

"Well, I just misconsidered the sample essay and tried too hard. I apologized to you."

Xiao Qingwu was stunned for a moment, and instead shook his head and said, "Master's article is very good, and I have learned a lot."

Xue Mu was stunned: "What did you learn?"

"Only by combining scenes and actions, language and expressions, can they become vivid and lively, instead of explaining what they think in their hearts in a stereotype. As for those who are lustful but appearing, Qingwu learns the way of writing. How to describe sexual intercourse and how to describe military affairs are actually common."

Xue Mu looked at her in a daze. He knew that the genius had already shown his strength. Even if he was not in the world, Xiao Qingwu would sooner or later shine brightly.

He took a deep breath and said seriously: "Last time I talked about the three elements of novels, so let's talk about the structure and foreshadowing today..."
Chapter completed!
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