Chapter 87 The Female Character With Soul
Although Ye Hai's wife Li Mengyao supports her husband to try out a new way of portraying female characters, that is, to portray them according to the way her husband originally portrays male characters, and then insists that it is a female character. If the male character was originally a handsome guy, she would insist that she was a beautiful woman, but there is not much difference in personality.
But no matter how support is, she still asks her husband to read the contents she wrote before updating, so as to avoid the eye-catching description of female characters.
"My writing status recently is very good, especially when portraying the character "Yu Shengfan" of "Yu Shengfan", I feel like I have a magical writing, as if I saw her appear in front of me, playing the game called "Eternal War"! I can no longer write her out loud or false, because she is real! She is a very interesting girl. She falls in love with games because of loneliness, and is even proficient in many languages for games. She also likes to play games while talking nonstop..." Ye Hai said to his wife excitedly when he handed the manuscript to his wife for a look.
When Li Mengyao saw Ye Hai's appearance that she had not yet emerged from the world she wrote, she couldn't help but believe it, because in the past, Ye Hai was in a state of "inspiration burst". Whenever he was in that state, the speed and efficiency of typing seemed very high!
Even the quality of the text has improved. Ye Hai, who is already good at male character portraying and game pictures, looks more vivid, and that sense of picture can make readers feel immersive!
If the words written by rosemary in general are at the level of a great god, then the words written by rosemary in "inspiration burst" are at the highest god level, which can easily mobilize the readers' emotions and immerse them in the world he outlines!
Ye Hai also handed over the publication of the manuscript to his wife Li Mengyao, and then fell into writing again. He wanted to take advantage of his condition to write a little more.
Li Mengyao also felt a huge sense of expectation, but she actually finished reading the manuscript in one breath, and then couldn't help but say to her husband who was typing, "Is there any more? I'm not enough to read it! I really want to see Lin Feng and Tang Yongkai that [Ye Yu Sheng Annoyed] was the plot of the peerless beauty who had made them unable to see it. I really look forward to their reaction..."
As a result, the only response to her was Ye Hai's very rhythmic typing. Seeing her husband working so hard, a hint of tenderness appeared on her face. She began to read the manuscript again and prepare to change the typo for her husband.
But what surprised her was that there was not a single typo in the manuscript of more than 10,000 words!
Too awesome!
Really done in one go!
However, what made her even more gratified was actually her husband's subsequent creation of the female character "Yu Shengfan". She originally thought that this almost exaggerated Mary Sue character was no longer saved and could not be liked by readers, but after reading the manuscript, she thought this character was very interesting!
Originally, the character image of "Yu Shengfan" was extremely empty and pale, and seemed perfect, but in fact it was very fake. The behavior of driving a luxury car to the Internet cafe can be criticized by readers who are more rational. The forced explanation later can only fool readers. However, when Yu Shengfan's real character characteristics are revealed, this "Internet addicted girl" who loves games and is addicted to PK seems to become intimate and vivid...
The cute thing about her is undoubtedly her mouth that can't stop. Of course, it is reflected in the game, which is a text bubble that almost never disappears on her head. If such a person appears in reality and appears as an opponent when playing the game, he will definitely hate this guy who likes to keep ridicule. However, when he appears in the book, it seems that this "talk" and "poisonous tongue" have become cute attributes, especially after readers see the subsequent plot and find that this guy is likely to become the protagonist's teammate.
Readers who have taken over the protagonist Lin Feng's natural favorability for the protagonist's character will be +20. In addition, the character "Yu Shengfan" doesn't look like a teammate of a pig. Her operational skills are so powerful that she has not even exposed her full strength. If she can join forces with Lin Feng, how powerful will the "Glory Team" in the future be?
In short, the subsequent portrayal of "Yu Shengfan" in the content of the manuscript has further improved the expectation of the entire work, because the subsequent portrayal is so wonderful that everyone even subconsciously forgot the initial eye-catching description, and only remembers her identity as a chaebol lady and the setting that is proficient in multilingual languages. This is simply convenient for her to swear, ridicule, and make trouble when she faces e-sports teams in other countries in the future!
This Yu Shengfan is just a troublemaker. He can raise hatred and sturdy. In this way, the plot will obviously become more exciting and exciting. Yu Shengfan can be responsible for raising hatred and wash away all the luster. He has a steady and calm personality. He likes to hide his sharpness and is responsible for output, slapping the face, and occasionally showing his sharpness and pretending to be a big shot. Wouldn't it be pleasant?
One is the king with a strong mouth and the other is the strongest king. When the two of them cooperate, the picture is so beautiful that they can't bear to watch it!
In fact, setting "Yu Shengfan" is a lonely girl without any friends, just to imply that the reader will definitely rush to the friend once she becomes a friend she recognizes. If "Yu Shengfan" is regarded as a man, it will not be inconsistent at all. Whoever can become his friend can turn "Lone Wolf" into a "loyal dog". This routine is common in novels, and readers only take this trick.
It is obvious that Ye Hai has used the way of portraying male characters to "Yu Shengfan". He no longer regards "Yu Shengfan" as an optional supporting role, but an important supporting role. He did not even notice that the setting of this character was actually not done by him, but he believed that this was the product of his inspiration. He was very satisfied with this character anyway and very favored his first female character who wrote so well. He thought that he had finally portrayed a soulful female character!
Regardless of whether the readers are satisfied or not, he must continue writing like this!
No one can stop the creator who has already been "out of the way"!—
Chapter completed!