(——The talk about Haitang in "Qing Yu Nian", this is the second half of the title.

Author: Black Belly... The title is too long and I can't write it down, I have no idea...)

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Recently, I read Mao Ni's "Qing Yu Nian" and I love the most about the Northern Qi saint Haitang Duoduo. When I think about it carefully, I have not seen such a dazzling female character for a long time.

Most online novels carry the resonance between the author and the readers about fantasy. The shaping of female characters in online novels has gradually become modeled due to this goal.

First of all, from the perspective of appearance, beauties are undoubtedly the easiest to be recognized and bring people a beautiful feeling, whether in reality or in novels. But reality and novels are different. In reality, beauties are always scarce resources, and inadvertent encounters always bring people a surprise, either looking far away or looking close, watching their lips and white teeth, hearing their orioles singing and singing, and appreciating their frown and smile... When they come, they are happy like a tide, and when they go, they are lost like a valley. In this way, encounters with beauties have decorated the ordinary and boring life with more interest and expectations.

The novel should be like this. However, no online novel writer who has been remembered by thousands of online novels is very caring about the heroines he wrote, and wishes to apply all the beautiful words he has made out. The problem is that the heroines in these tens of thousands of novels, even at least tens of thousands of peerless beauties, can you recognize who is who after they come forward like this?

Let’s look at the appearance first. Many writers will scan the whole body when the heroine’s first appearance. Their hair is like a waterfall, their eyes are big, their eyelashes are long, their noses are small and stylish, their lips are delicate, their skin is swaying, their chests are towering and difficult to grasp, their waists are thin, their buttocks are round and perky, and their legs are straight and slender... This paragraph is written by the old men in the online writers, and hundreds of words are no problem. The problem is that there are still readers now, whether they are appreciative or novice, who will still read these words? Is there any other purpose in writing this way besides filling the number of words?

When we identify a person through appearance, we often look for her characteristics, rather than looking for her commonalities with "one nose, two eyes, and ears on the side and mouth facing forward". In those writers' own works, that peerless beauty is undoubtedly unique (not to mention the stallion), but in this sea-like online works, these peerless beauties are gone, and thus gradually become a street full of people, even a stinking street. Are they alarmist? Not at all, I personally

Now when you see meticulous descriptions of this standardized "peerless beauty", you immediately cover your nose and leave. Where do you come from so many perfect women? Even if you put a few freckles on her nose, you can raise the bridge of her nose and look a little firm, and give a beautiful mole on her mouth a little playful... The authors probably can't bear to add any flaws to the peerless beauty they write, but they didn't expect that their favorites would become a big deal.

Haitang Duoduo's appearance can be said to be "a trick that can be eaten all over the world":

It was a woman, a woman with a flower towel on her head, a basket in her elbow, and some fresh mushrooms in the basket.

To be precise, this is a village girl.

The woman raised her head and looked very special, and she could not be considered a beauty, but her eyes were extremely bright, as if she reflected the colors of the meadow and the blue sky she saw in her eyes, clear and bright, extremely straight.

The village girl laughed and pointed at Fan Xian's nose with her waist, which looked like the peasant women in the fields: "Mr. Fan not only wrote good poems, but even lies, but he still kept his face. He is indeed the legendary Heavenly Vein."

If you think about it carefully, this appearance description has three wonderful features: First, it completely abandons the original description of a beautiful woman produced in a pattern. It is not outstanding in appearance, but it highlights the attractiveness (very bright eyes). Just like a side dish served after eating delicacies, it is fresh and pleasant; second, it is in contrast to the side preparation in front. Through the side description, we learned that Haitang's lofty status and amazing martial arts cultivation in Northern Qi were known to be in northern Qi, but it is a huge contrast with this village girl's dress, which not only makes Fan Xian, but also makes readers suddenly interested; third, this descriptive text is completely consistent with Haitang's character and cultivation. Tianyidao advocates nature and has no decorations. This extremely ordinary appearance also secretly matches Haitang's personality. Moreover, sometimes amazing beauty always makes other things dull. Such an ordinary appearance can make people pay more attention to the characteristics of other aspects of the character.

Just like in reality, the consideration of appearance is just a superficial understanding, and the in-depth personality of the character can truly make people fall in love for a long time.

If most writers have similar writing words in appearance, it is just because of writing skills or angle considerations, then the shaping of female characters' personality fully exposes the lack of life experience of many authors and the lack of ability to reflect real life in words.

In life, we say "there are a hundred people, and all kinds of things." Pay attention to which women you know are not unique. Look at the famous works of many female characters, such as "Dream of the Red Chamber" and "Jin Ping Mei", which use various factors such as identity, mentality, language, and behavior to maximize the difference in each person's personality. In contrast, based on my shallow reading experience, the personality of female characters in online novels is vaguely the power of iceberg women, willful women, and gentle women to divide the world.

It is probably because many authors also hope to write about the uniqueness of the characters in their works, so they deliberately depolarize and exaggerate the personality of the characters in their works, and finally these extreme "monsters" appear. Monsters are not scary, but what is scary is that monsters have become trends. It seems that women are not icebergs, which is not enough to show the ups and downs of love, women are not willing to be arrogant, which is not enough to show men's endurance of humiliation, and women are not gentle, which is enough to show that men have perfect merits in control. Therefore, after the appearance is patterned, there is patterning of personality. It is not easy to find a woman with normal human thinking and true temperament.

Let’s take a look at the introduction to Haitang Duoduo in "Qing Yu Nian":

"Duoduo is not an ordinary person." Si Lili looked at him with a little concern, "She has been obsessed with martial arts since she was a child. As for poetry, calligraphy and painting, she was not interested in it at all. Instead, she opened a vegetable field in the yard of Master Kuhe. In addition to practicing martial arts every day, she only planted vegetables and flowers."

Fan Xian was slightly stunned, thinking that this kind of behavior was quite similar to that Prince Jing. He guessed in his heart why the girl Haitang lived such a life. The martial arts practice of Kuhe's lineage was a school of harmony between man and nature, and the emphasis was on being close to nature. Since Haitang had a genius of cultivation, she would naturally hide in the vegetable garden every day. It seemed that the village girl dressed up not deliberately.

Judging from the background setting, Haitang's status and personality are unusual, but if this unusual goes to extremes and goes to a worse place, it is probably a copy of the Master Miejue. If you go to the right, it is just a Shi Feixuan who is not as good as the world, and it is really hard to get close to him. How to let this seemingly transcendent female character go down the clouds is a proposition that requires brainstorming. Taking Haitang as an example, her special status makes her play the role she wants to play in the minds of everyone, no matter whether she wants or not, she can only show her natural girlish nature. Before that, the only one who can make her reveal her natural girlish nature is her master, Master Kuhe. When facing others, she is lazy and disdainful.

Showing true temperament, or only willing to show the outermost side, without any deep communication from the heart. If a woman who respects such a status and has extraordinary strength, respects her with reason in ordinary ways and convinces her with reason, it will only make the protective layer thicker and thicker. Just like facing Xu Ziling, Shi Feixuan could only wear the fairy hat in the end, which is regrettable. How can she knock her down from the mortal world? Fortunately, Fan Xian is not Xu Ziling! He has a bit of tricky rogue that Xu Ziling does not have. The so-called "men are not bad, women do not love them." After several times, the strange soldiers were stacked up, and finally lifted the veil of the Saint Begonia layer by layer.

In the first confrontation, Haitang fell into Fan Xian's strange trick - "First use poison needle to burn his body, then use aphrodisiac to disrupt his mind and mind, and spring is exhausted, and heaven will be furious to Fan Xian." - It turns out that the saint can also get aphrodisiac! Then, facing Haitang who was furious to ask for an antidote, Fan Xian admitted that his strength was not strong, so he could only do everything and get Haitang's understanding.

It seems that just one aphrodisiac is not enough to drag the saint down to the mortal world, so inadvertently, the author added another play:

On the other side, Fan Xian was silent and nervous, following Haitang and walked out of the palace. He looked at the mountain scenery without realizing it. Qingfeng was just a smile full of hypocritical faces, and he kept his distance from this strange woman with a proud look.

The eyes can clearly see the walking posture of the girl Haitang.

The girl Haitang shook her steps one by one, but it was not the way to seduce people by a woman who was so cool, but a very rural sway. Her hands were inserted into the pocket of her large thick cloth clothes outside her body, and her upper body did not shake much, but her feet were dragging her legs down, dragging forward on the stone road. She looked extremely lazy, but she was not the sexy lazy feeling of a beauty bathing out.

Fan Xian squinted his eyes and looked at it for a long time, but he never understood what kind of walking method this is. Could it be that the other party was constantly practicing some kind of natural practice by walking? Fan Xian was very impressed. He always thought that he was the most diligent person in the world who practiced martial arts the most diligent in the world. His practice at 2 o'clock in the morning and evening has never stopped since Danzhou, but he never thought that he could practice martial arts while walking!

No wonder the little girl is young and is at the ninth level. She has just stepped into the threshold of the ninth level! No wonder the little girl is cited by the people of Northern Qi as a heavenly vein, but she can only shamelessly win the "stories in the world" with some poems! No wonder the little girl waves her hand and wants to crawl on the ground! No wonder the little girl is flying aphrodisiacs all out of her secret crossbow, and others are just bubbled in the lake water. Finally, she waves her sleeves and leaves with great care, and doesn't take herself seriously at all - because of disdain, she doesn't hate her.

Fan Xian felt sad, thinking that such a genius was so diligent, and probably only a genius like Uncle Wu Zhu could compare with him, and he might be missing.

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After looking at it for a long time, Haitang seemed to feel the two hot gazes behind him, always staring at his buttocks and waist, and finally couldn't stand it anymore. He looked back quietly and stared at Fan Xian's eyes, as if he was about to peel off Fan Xian's beautiful skin and reveal his vulgar true body inside.

Fan Xian's eyes were clear and there was no trace of miscellaneous intention at all. He looked at the other party and was slightly surprised. He knew that the other party was thinking something wrong. He smiled bitterly and said, "I just saw the girl walking in a strange way. I think she was practicing martial arts, so I admire her very much."

He was stunned, and Haitang was even more shocked. He opened his mouth slightly, and looked at the young man from Qing Kingdom, and his heart was in chaos. She spent most of her life in the mountains and palaces. She had always been as stable as a stone. But for some reason, when she saw Fan Xian's hateful and beautiful face, she could not hear Fan Xian's words, and she had no way to get angry. At this time, she was even more inexplicable when listening to Fan Xian's words. After a while, she said: "It's not practicing martial arts."

After saying that, Miss Haitang felt a little strange. Why did she explain this to him?

So she said in a slight indignation: "I have been walking like this since I was a child. The Queen Mother said that I have been talking about for many years, but I can't change it. If Lord Fan feels it's annoying to see it, you might as well walk ahead."

Fan Xian was stunned and thought to himself what was going on. He had to follow Haitang who turned around and continue moving forward.

But Haitang still dragged her feet and held her hands, and walked forward lazily.

Fan Xian turned his head slightly, frowned and looked at Lao Jiu, and suddenly realized this - what kind of martial arts is this? Isn’t this the most common walking posture for lazy women in the countryside!

When he thought of the great master of the ninth grade, the crabapple that looked like a fairy in the eyes of the world, he was really a village girl at heart. Walking in the palace was like walking on a ridge of fields, Fan Xian finally couldn't help laughing.

"Why is Mr. Fan laughing?"

This was the expected question from Haitang. Fan Xian coughed twice and explained with a smile: "I like the way you walk, girl."

Haitang was slightly stunned, and a trace of anger flashed in his eyes.

Fan Xian quickly said, "If there is any deception, heaven will be punished by the earth."

Haitang couldn't believe the poison of this swearing, but Haitang still didn't understand why the young guy behind him liked it when he was teased by the palace people for many years? When she thought of Fan Xian's shameless methods on the North Sea, Miss Haitang felt even more confused.

I really like to watch Haitang's forced girl angry when facing Fan Xian's scoundrel. Of course, this description is not just for funny or to add characteristics to Haitang. Without smoke and fog, there is no trace of lotus waves, and with the chapter title "Shake with Haitang", Imagine the rustling footsteps of the girl's lazy and casual family, the village girl's appearance and the footwork of the village girl, the "fairy" finally successfully landed from the clouds to the fields.

What can make Haitang have a special impression is Fan Xian's "literary works"; but what can make Haitang begin to get close to him is Fan Xian's trusted drunkenness and sleep in a mess. Such interactions, like Haitang said, "She is not a ruthless person." Of course, Fan Xian's scoundrel always plays a catalyst. Seeing the article appearing again and again "Haitang is free and natural, and no matter how unrestrained everything is, it is still just a young girl's home. He couldn't help but be furious when he heard this..." In such a scene, facing the people and the scenery, who can continue to regard her as a fairy in the clouds?

The thick clouds in the sky floated over, covering the sun behind, but the sun was too strong, even so, it could not hide the red light from the edge of the clouds, just like a fairy embroidered a golden edge with her skillful hand. A gust of wind blew over the plain, passing through the ancient road and the Li Pavilion on the ground.

Fan Xian looked at Haitang and said, "Duoduo, thank you for your help these days."

Haitang finally took out his hands from the big pocket of the coarse cloth clothes, and learned from the ordinary girl's family photos a little awkwardly: "You are kind to you, Lord Fan."

Under the pavilion, Fan Xian took a step forward honestly and unceremoniously, hugged her in his arms and hugged her. For some reason, with Haitang's extremely high cultivation level, he did not avoid his hug. He put it away with a hug, and he showed a sincere smile on his face: "To be honest, if you and I can really become friends, it would be a very good thing."

Haitang gently tickled the black hair on his forehead. His ordinary face was not embarrassed and uneasy because of his extremely intimate hugging before. He smiled and said, "Everyone."

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Haitang stood under the ruined Li Pavilion, beside the ancient road, watching Fan Xian's figure disappearing from a distance, and couldn't help but turn his head slightly. Recalling this time in Shangjing, a smile appeared on the corner of his lips, thinking that this young man from the Southern Dynasty was indeed a very interesting and keen figure. He thought that after he returned to Qing Kingdom, some very subtle changes would occur in the southern world.

She sighed and waved away the sadness in her mind because of Zhuang Mohan's death. Then she remembered that she had forgotten something after all - does the Begonia Poetry Club in the Stone Record have anything to do with her? She subconsciously reached out to tie the flower scarf on her head, but found that she had touched it. She immediately reacted and couldn't help but feel a little hot. Only then did she realize that no matter how well she covered it up, she was still a little nervous when she hugged her before, and she didn't even notice that the thief had stolen her flower scarf.

Fan Xian was walking through the sorghum that was higher than the top of the human head. Occasionally, branches smacked and shattered, and a happy and innocent smile appeared on his face. The trip to Northern Qi finally had a relatively satisfactory result. After he was reborn, he met some interesting characters, such as Yan Bingyun's ice, and Haitang, a flower that seemed vulgar but was actually light. In addition to some conflicts of interests and differences in concepts, he liked to talk to Haitang very much.

——The emperor also wants to give birth to a son, Kuhe also wants to eat meat, Chen Lazi also wants to go to the cottage, and Fan Xian also wants to have friends.

He put the piece of flower cloth in his hand into his arms, pushed away the plants in front of him, looked at the faint blue smoke coming out of the station in the distance, and hummed softly: "Don't throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw, throw..."

The parting outside the capital of Northern Qi, Fan Xian's hug and steal not only immediately diluted the sorrow of parting, but also took the last opportunity to tie a small knot to Haitang's smooth and unrestrained heartstrings. So naturally, the letter exchanges followed and the reunion of Jiangnan later.

There is a lot of spring rain in the south of the Yangtze River, moistening things silently.

It seems that Fan Xian and Haitang each have taken the mission of various countries and are all doing their business for the interests of all parties, but there is always a hint of unintelligible things covering the two of them, making the atmosphere so inviting and strange.

Let’s talk about it back to the beginning.” Fan Xian said, “Why can’t you like me? I can’t like you?”

Haitang was a little stupid and angry, thinking why this person was always obsessed with this matter, and said coldly: "Duoduo has never cared about men and women. There is no difference between big and small in love, but there is a difference between superior and inferior. I don't ask for the destruction of emotions, but I will not consider this issue."

Fan Xian understood that the girl's family was expressing the idea of ​​putting the people of the world first, and said slightly mocking: "Worrying about the world first? Isn't it too boring to live like this for a lifetime? Your emperor still has a hat to play with..."

He didn't say what color the hat was, and suddenly he showed his teeth and said with a smile on his face: "Duoduo."

"Hmm?" Haitang stopped and turned his head to look at him, but was shaken by the gentle smile on Fan Xian's pretty face. He couldn't help but sigh and asked, "What's the matter?"

"It is possible that the Hu people will not kill people." Fan Xian said seriously.

Haitang knew that he was saying the words he had blocked Sisi's mouth in the carriage, and couldn't help but feel sad, but he still replied quietly: "Is that right? Perhaps neither the people of Northern Qi nor Nanqing would believe it."

Fan Xian said gently: "Of course, it is possible that the Hu people will not kill people, if they are all turned into dead people by us."

Haitang was stunned and laughed for no reason.

Fan Xian said softly: "The same is true. I may fall in love with you, and you may fall in love with me."

Haitang mocked, "Wait until we are all dead?"

"No." Fan Xian explained seriously: "When everyone else in this world dies."

Haitang had no choice but to say, "Everyone is dead, and we are the two of us standing by the river to blow the wind?"

Fan Xian raised his head, thought for a long time before nodding: "It seems that it is really meaningless."

Then he stretched out his hands from his pocket, held Haitang's hand, rubbed it gently in the girl's slightly astonished eyes, smiled gently, and said, "Since it's a boring thing, don't think about it. The weather is still cold, and you are wearing a maid's clothes, your hands are afraid they will be frozen."

The four hands held each other, firmness and tenderness were in a warm feeling, and the sound of carriage wheels gurgling came from behind the two.

Haitang had an interesting smile in his eyes. He did not pull out his hands. Instead, he turned his head slightly and looked at Fan Xian and said, "I deliberately let him see it?"

Fan Xian lowered his head halfway, blinked his eyelashes and replied softly: "There is a reason to convince my emperor that I am taking you in Jiangnan. To give a stronger foundation for mutual trust between your emperor and me, we must all be closer."

Haitang looked at him with a smile.

Fan Xian finally said seriously: "Of course, it's still very comfortable to hold your hands. You often do farm work, but... there are no calluses."

With the rogue and the temptation of step by step, how can the girl's family resist such a trick to pick up girls? Let her be the ninth-grade master, let her be in harmony with man and nature, and all of them will be recommended!
To be continued...