Chapter 621: I learned a lot from Lin Fan!

Although he was working with Lin Fan, the entire team became a soul painting company for everyone to find fault.

Lang Qianfan returned to the company's conference room.

Still very fighting spirited and sucked blood with his subordinates:

"This is the most critical week, so everyone should not take it lightly."

The people below were confused: "..."

There are obviously no shortcomings to find, why can Mr. Lang maintain such a high fighting spirit?

This is unscientific. Does Lang always have endless energy to use?

Lang Qianfan, who had just been stimulated, looked like he was overenerable at this moment.

I plan to work harder and make progress.

We will strive to surpass Lin Fan as soon as possible, lead the Painting Soul Company and become the largest animation company in China.

And he Lang Qianfan stood on the top floor of the largest animation company, overlooking the building group below.

Imagine what my father said when he patted his shoulder with relief: "You are really the younger generation of the Yangtze River and push the older generation forward, and I am proud of your father and you!"

Lang Qianfan became even more passionate when he thought of that scene.

I only saw Mr. Lang slamming the table and shouting:

"Did you understand just now? How did Lin Fan make up stories? Everyone can learn it!"

This time, I cooperated with Lin Fan just to learn from Lin Fan's skills and then surpass Lin Fan in the future.

Everyone: "..." Aren't they talking about how to find fault?

What does this have to do with making up stories?

Seeing everyone's stupid look, Lang Qianfan couldn't help but say, "You haven't learned anything?"

Let me tell you, from Lin Fan, I learned that a work needs to be polished and revised repeatedly, and I will never get tired of it!”

"This is why Lin Fan's work is successful every time! Do you understand?

In the future, the company will also have a script modification system!”

Everyone: "I understand, so that's it!"

"Mr. Lang is really wise and powerful!"

"Lin Fan and I have also learned a lot!"

"So too, report, I learned from Lin Fan that even if the script is belittled and worthless, I have to remain calm!"

"I have learned it too. Even if it is perfect in the end, it will take another week of buffering period to try to polish it to the extreme!"

"So, Mr. Lin is really amazing!"

Lang Qianfan: "..." I just watched you praise other presidents quietly, but I couldn't say anything, after all, it was my first start.

Don't know why.

At this moment, all colleagues can express their appreciation for Lin Fan.

Fortunately, Lang Qianfan was calm and imitated Lin Fan and said at the end:

"So, whether a movie can succeed depends on the degree of care!"

After Lang Qianfan finished speaking, his colleague immediately exclaimed and applauded: "Lang Zong summarized it!"

Very in place.

After all, it depends on how much effort you have put into it.

The next few days.

Lang Qianfan and others are all looking for loopholes.

However, it is difficult to find successfully.

Because they had racked their brains before, it was too difficult to find another one now.

And on the other side.

Lin Fan doesn't expect everyone to find any loopholes.

It's okay to find the best, but it can't be found.

At this moment, Lin Fan was saying to the system:

"System, perform script optimization!"

"Ding, it takes five thousand reputation points to optimize the script world!"

Lin Fan: "Optimization!"

As Lin Fan's words fell.

After the system deducted the reputation value, a modification opinion appeared in front of Lin Fan.

When the script was so perfect, the system could even give suggestions for modification.

It can be seen that this system is very powerful.

Lin Fan picked it up and saw it, and his eyes lit up soon.

The modification suggestions given by the system happen to be something that no one has thought of yet.

The reason why Lin Fan did not ask the system to give modification opinions from the beginning is that the opinions the system can give have a limited number of words, and if the script has been adapted manually to perfection.

With the system's suggestions, this suggestion must be worth the money.

Now, Lin Fan just looked at this suggestion that it happened to be full of two pages.

Then the script was modified in question.

According to the system, Jiang Taigong's personality is still too weak.

Although Lin Fan had already set the background for Jiang Taigong, he allowed Jiang Taigong to experience the sufferings of the world when he was a mortal before.

But the system feels that this is not enough.

Although Jiang Taigong's memory as a human part has been strengthened, it is even more reasonable when Jiang Taigong develops compassion for the human soul in the arms of the nine-tailed fox.

But such a reasonableness is not enough.

You should know that the rationality of the character's motive determines whether the character's behavior is reasonable.

When a character, the sky steps down and presses its head tilts, he can only struggle to grow three heads and six arms for himself to carry the sky.

However, Jiang Ziya never encountered such oppression from beginning to end.

I have never encountered a situation where I pressed my head down.

Even if you save the innocent soul you didn't know and give up the opportunity to become an immortal, it would not be so natural.

First, his relationship with innocent Yuanhun was just that Jiang Taigong was once a human being, so he would not let him give up his future to save people.

Second, the innocent Yuanhun Daji is not a relative of Jiang Taigong, nor his close friend, or even a magic trick of a demon fox. Jiang Ziya's rescue of Daji is just out of humanitarian mercy, and it is a law enforcement officer's mercy for prisoners. The power of this mercy is too weak and false, and it is difficult to generate the righteousness of sacrificing oneself to save.

You should know that many viewers have learned to adapt to the social system and cannot understand or resonate with this lofty ideal.

Therefore, Jiang Taigong's nobleness does not conform to the audience's values.

On the contrary, the audience generally accepts it, only seeks to protect themselves, and is unwilling to take risks to save strangers.

And Jiang Taigong's approach seems unreal.

It is also difficult to achieve in reality.

The spirit of "The world is the world of the people of the world, and we must make a fuss for the ants" is too ignited and too passionate, but too second-rate.

Collective cynicism is the true portrayal of society.

How could the public who do not love truth but only love chicken soup be moved by such righteousness?

Therefore, the idealism promoted by the film lacks the logical support for the implementation of reality.

So, how can such a movie be modified so that Jiang Ziya can save Daji's practice of empathizing with it?

This is something Lin Fan also wants to know.

However, the system only gave suggestions and did not give a modified script.

It is equivalent to how to modify it in the end depends on Lin Fan himself to start writing.

Lin Fan pondered for a long time.

Jiang Taigong's ideal lacks reality.

Then let Jiang Taigong get closer to the audience.

How can we get Jiang Taigong to get close to the audience?
Chapter completed!