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Chapter 694 - The Story

The room was very quiet.

The sunlight penetrated into the room from the window, illuminating the entire room.

A gust of wind blew gently, and the curtains swung with the wind, and the blocked sunlight also changed, as if they were also blown by the wind.

Sitting in front of the computer, Sen Xia kept typing on the keyboard, and the crackling sound was very rhythmic, just like a piece of music.

The entire room is decorated in white, and there is not much furniture in the room, so it gives people a spacious and bright feeling.

I have to say that Morika likes this place.

Compared with my own home, this place probably only has this kind of quiet and distant feeling.

Quietly, slowly, the comfort of the outside world gives people the greatest liberation of Sen Xia's heart.

Gently picked up the cup on the table, Morixia took a sip of the black tea made by Sister Yiji.

"call."

Putting down the cup, Morixia rubbed her temples, and then set her eyes on the manuscript being written in front of her.

"Dongdongdongdongdong."

There was a knock outside the door.

"Brother~"

Before Morika could speak, Yukino outside had already opened the door and turned her head over.

"how?"

Moriya raised her head.

Yukino chuckled, then walked in with her hands behind her back. When she arrived in front of the table, she suddenly took out a bag of cookies from behind.

"Of course it's a comforting gift for my brother~"

Yukino chuckled and placed the cookies in front of the table.

This is a bag of freshly baked cookies, which can be seen at a glance that there is still a little furnace temperature on the cookies.

"Ah, thank you very much. I just need some sugar nutrition now." Senxia took a biscuit and put it gently in her mouth. He nodded, "Well, it tastes really good."

"That's great!"

Yukino seemed very happy.

"Brother, what are you doing now? Can I help?"

Yukino seemed not satisfied with bringing some comfort to Morika. At this time, she was excited to come to whom?

"Hey?! Nothing!"

Mori Naka immediately wanted to block the screen.

"Hmm?" After noticing my brother's extreme actions, Yukino seemed to understand something.

"Oh? Brother, are you not doing your job?"

At this moment, Yukino suddenly came to the conclusion that Morika was not doing his job properly.

"Hey hey?! Absolutely not, I'm writing well!"

Senxia shook her head in a hurry.

Although Mori Naka admitted that she was indeed writing something else, this thing must not be seen by Yukino.

Well, it's okay to be seen by anyone else, but Yukino can't do it.

"Really, brother, you always do this!" Yukino pouted, "Even if you are not doing your job properly, it doesn't matter. The things you wrote are very powerful, so let me see!"

Yukino shook Mori Naka's hand.

Faced with Yukino who acted like this, Morika was so amused and crying. It was just something in front of him. I really couldn't let Yukino see it...

"Nah, let me see!"

But the more Morika didn't want to show it to Yukino, the more Yukino wanted to show it.

Suspicious! Brother is so suspicious!

Yukino knew that if Morika was not doing his job properly, Morika would probably smile embarrassedly at this time and then show the documents to himself.

But Moriya has not done so now.

Not only did he not do this, but Morika also looked very nervous. If it weren't for Yukino's pulling, Morika would have pressed "alt+f4" to forcefully close the document.

"Since that's the case, then brother, don't blame me for being rude!"

At this moment, Yukino decided to slap the king. She gently pulled Morika backwards, then exerted force with her other hand, twisting Morika's joints.

Yukino did not use much power, but it has to be admitted that Yukino seemed particularly skilled in fighting.

At least Morika is no match for Yukino at this time.

"The Empty of Fate? What is this?"

Yukino seems to have come to the new district for this document.

She stared at the document inside the picture.

"Don't look!" Sen Xia's head turned blank.

But it was too late. At this time, Yukino had already seen two characters appearing: Yukino Haruhino and Yukino Haruhino, who are brothers and sisters.

Staring at the scene, Yukino was undoubtedly attracted by the beginning of the story.

"This is...your new novel by brother?" Yukino murmured.

"Ahem, this probably doesn't count. It may be the text of galgame..."

To be precise, this should be written by Mori Nakaki Yuu and Haruhino Aoki based on the original script of "Fate of Sky". Mori Nakaki wrote it. There is a big reason to vent his emotions in his heart.

Bar.

The reason why it is called a "fan" is because the story itself does not follow the original work, but draws on the stage and character relationship of the original work, and the story itself is new.

"The Sky of Fate" can be said to be an iconic work in the galgame industry. In this world, Mori Naka has not seen any better works than this one in the same type.

"The Sky of Fate" tells the story of the brother Yu Haruno, whose parents both died, and his sister Yu Haruno Yoko returned to his hometown in the countryside, and then interacted with a series of characters such as childhood sweethearts. In the script, there are many routes, but

What players talk about most is the girl who guides her sister Kasugaki.

Qiongmei Qiongmei, a very famous name in the second-dimensional horoscope world, comes from this.

If a girl hates a girl, it’s not Qiong, and if a girl hates a girl, it’s also the classic summary.

Although the original work is excellent, the animation is slightly worse, especially the modification of Qiongmei's character. Of course, the animation itself is not useless. At least the music inside is a highlight, "Biyi's Feather Root" is very good,

Moreover, the brother Yuu Kasuhina and his sister Yuuka Kasuhina actually did a real fight. This is rare among Japanese fans who are all cowards.

Of course, this also has something to do with the animation being played on pay TV stations.

In the game "Fate of Sky", there is also the subsequent work "Yuankong". In the subsequent works, there is a future talk about the brother-sister route.

In addition to the story of the taboo of brother and sister itself, the best in this game is indeed the character setting of the character Kasuna Nori. The character design of the Yokomi himself is very outstanding.

At least Senxia thought this girl from Dome is very cute.

In the original work itself, Morika also likes it very much. If you want to say something bad about it, Morika thinks it is probably the most disadvantageous part of the whole story, that is the rhythm.

One problem with Japanese galgame is that it forces daily life. Yuan Zhikong itself is a daily script, but it doesn’t matter. Other non-daily scripts still have to be played like this, which is really a bit wrong.

Perhaps it is because of habits, some of the plots of Yuanzhikong will also give people a long feeling.

The script written by Morika is a different story.

This script removes the special interactions with others, and Morika only grasps one important contradiction, that is, the sparks generated by the taboo relationship between the brother and sister when they collide with this society.

Well, it's a fan who doesn't follow the original routine.

At the beginning of Mori Naka's fan script, the brother and sister Yuuka Haruno and Yoko Haruno already had a wonderful relationship. The purpose of their visit to their hometown in the countryside was not just because their parents died, but also to leave the past

Take advantage of the situation in life and then go far away.

Simply put, this is a short and medium-stories with about 400,000 or 500,000 texts. And Morika actually wrote a little to change his ideas. Although it might be a novella, in fact, he didn't have it at all.

Thinking about writing it completely.

In other words, Morixia is digging a hole, and she is digging a hole without filling it.

Morika wrote a simple plot of about 20,000 words. This part describes the life of Haruhino brother and sister after they returned to the town. After they moved, they were carefully contacting the people around them.

Although it is just the beginning, Mori Naka has already depicted the beauty of the Japanese countryside and the emotions of the brother and sister.

What is shown in the beautiful picture is an alternative and taboo emotion.

It has to be said that the script written by Mori Naka has surpassed the categories of galgame and light novels, and can even be classified as a serious literature category.

The picture scroll presented in the quiet countryside has reached a height in itself.

Compared with the original cute and cute spots, this "fan-made" that focuses on describing the conflicts between brother and sister and outsiders and society, as well as the changes in the emotions between brother and sister, which itself has surpassed the scope of fan-style.

Although the original script was applied, there was no sense of incongruity if the male and female protagonists were replaced with names like "Tiankai Monaster" or "Tiankai Yukino".

The conflict between people, the emotions and conflicts between brothers and sisters are just the beginning, but the oncoming feeling of heaviness makes Yukino, who is reading the article, seem to have his heart tugged.

The interaction between the two brothers and sisters is very loving, the willful sister and the accommodated brother, and there are deeper feelings hidden below.

Although the beginning is beautiful, the heavy theme seems to have realized the direction of the whole story, but at this time, there is still a feeling that is unsatisfactory, as if I want to keep watching this...

“…”

At this time, Morixia seemed to be in deep thought.

There is no doubt that Yukino has been captured by this story.

...

Today's update, this is moral integrity~
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