Morika never expected that Nasu and the others would give an answer so quickly. . The fastest update

But after reading Nasu's script, Mori Naruto shook his head.

Although this script looks interesting, it is actually a little bit less meaningful.

In this script, Mori Naruto did not see Nasu's own style, nor did heal enough.

Although it is just a first draft and there is no content in it, Mori Naka does not find it interesting when looking at the outline.

Some of this content is still much worse.

Simply put, it is not shocking enough.

Even so, Morika is still quite interested in this story.

After communicating with Nasu and the others, I contacted the second generation Meta teacher through qiq because Nasu had already told Mori Nasu that he wanted to cooperate with the second generation Meta teacher.

But surprisingly, the second generation teacher did not seem to agree with making this story of fairy tale-style gentlemanly.

"why is that?"

Morisha asked curiously.

The time difference between a major oriental country and Ni Hong was only one hour apart, so Morika started chatting with the second generation teacher at this time, but it wasn't much time anyway.

However, Morika did not use her own laptop, but was using Iki's spare laptop. Because Morika's laptop was requisitioned by Yukino, she said that she had inspired her and seemed to want to write something.

"This kind of fairy tale is not suitable for this kind of gentleman script." The second generation teacher said this on QiQ, "I have also played the game "The Sword of Fairy", but this is not a script suitable for gentleman stories.

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"Well... wait a moment, I'll set up a group, Nasu and the others are here, I'll bring them over and discuss them together."

Anyway, Nasu and the others have arrived at a certain port, so Morika can let everyone discuss it together at this time.

The four people entered the group, and Morika continued to type at this time and said, "Minasan, let's discuss the script about the Immortal Sword now."

It was not the first time we met, and we were all very familiar with each other, so we started directly when discussing.

At this time, the second generation teacher first explained his own insights.

Like the other two, the second generation teacher has played the Fairy Sword series.

No, it’s not just the Fairy Sword series, but the second generation teacher even played the Xuanyuan Sword series, which even Senxia was a little surprised.

In the end, the second generation teacher really told these young people in the tone of the teacher.

"You guys, don't just see the wind and rain. You have to make your own judgment. Is such a story suitable for adding gentleman content? That is definitely not suitable!"

Xianxia emphasizes the ethereal and ethereal temperament. If you forcefully mix something strange, it will only make the plot strange.

If someone else said this, Morika, who is a gentleman, must have criticized him.

But now, the person who told Morika this truth was not someone else, but the second generation teacher, so this tm was embarrassed.

Why, as a second-generation teacher of the work leader, would say that this part is not suitable for gentleman content?

"... Sorry, I was wrong about it. Such a story should be said that it is not suitable for the kind of gentleman content we used to feel, but is suitable for the cruel type. Simply put, the gentleman content here must

It must be cruel."

"Cruel?" Although Nasu also wrote about the content of the gentleman in Gongkou, Nasu's own grasp of the content of Gongkou... Ahem, it is up to be discussed.

"It should be the kind that makes people cry and masturbate!" Lao Xu expressed his opinion.

"Hi, if this kind of fairy tale is immersed in the desires of the body, it is a failure. If the player buys the game for this reason, it is a failure in failure."

No, there will be a game called Sword Spirit in the future, which is so popular...

Well, the second generation teacher Mu is also a creator, so naturally he considered it from the perspective of the creator, so Morika didn't continue to say it. What's more, the second generation teacher Mu said was indeed no problem, so write it carefully

A story, this is taking the path of "sustainable development".

For capital, what they care more about is short-term profits. Capital is a vampire. After sucking blood on a project, it will go to the next goal, which is contrary to the creator itself.

Morixia is rich and willful, so she doesn't care much about this aspect. The story itself has a greater impact on Morixia's decision-making.

"So, what kind of story should be better?" Senxia was also thinking at this time. Although she was a little embarrassed, at this time, Senxia recalled Zhu Yan and other novels in her mind.

But then Senxia shook her head.

Then, he thought of a relatively cold ********* female ninja magic treasure legend.

This story is created by Yamaguchi Ryoji and sells classic works in ** paintings.

The story tells that during the Warring States Period, the Ninja of the Wanmo Ninja was a ninja for Toyotomi Hideyoshi and received a reward of one million taels. This treasure was hidden by the leader of the Wanmo and made into a ninja treasure post with a tattoo of seven.

Girl's body.

The heroine Shi Yin is the daughter of the leader of Wanmo, and she is also one of the seven.

The story begins with the extermination of the poem.

Just looking at this part, of course it’s nothing, but the touching part of this story lies in the setting of the Ninja Tie and the setting of the female ninja.

In the story, the secrets in tattoos do not always exist, but only when the female ninjas are allowed to show up. Therefore, in the plot, girls are all important positions for women to be attacked by enemies.

What's the matter...

Moreover, the female ninja in this story also has a very female ninja look.

What is the female tone style?

Simply put, it is the kind of girl who is good at using her own body.

While fighting violently, selling meat hard, such a story is indeed very good. There are also several sad stories in this plot.

Thinking of this, Senxia suddenly had a bright light in her eyes and he had an idea.

"It's better for us to do the opposite."

He typing a line of words.

The others were silent for a moment, and then questioned.

"Our story wants to express the spirit of "Xianxia", but this expression is not just a representation, we can realize it through the story itself. The content of gentleman to be filled can also be part of its representation. Think about it

Look, a goddess with great compassion and enlightenment appears in front of everyone, what will she be like?"

The first one to speak was Nasu: "This goddess will definitely look at everyone with compassionate eyes. She will not feel ashamed of herself. Those who cast gentlemanly eyes on the goddess will definitely feel ashamed."

That's the taste!

Morixia smiled.

There are many similar methods. Our protagonists and stories themselves may not sell meat, but we can sell meat in the plot. No, not sell, but "rationalization". For example, those in the Yuanqi Dan and the Turtle School Qigong

No matter how you look at it, it is impossible to keep it the same! This is the real mouth!

However, the second generation of the people instantly shattered Morika's idea: "Can such a story be called a gentleman's story?"

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The scene fell into silence.

"Let's not consider the topic of gentlemanship or not. Just start from the plot, let's think about this content first."

Moriya decided to return to the story itself.

Everyone else has seen the story of the Legend of the Immortal Sword. According to Nasu's setting, this story is a story of extermination and revenge.

But this story setting, in Mori Naka's opinion, is not curable at all.

Although reversal and reversal are very distinctive and highlights, it still doesn't feel enough.

"But I actually agree with the background."

If you insist on saying something, Morika thinks the background of this story is OK.

During the war in the Sui and Tang Dynasties, it was an era of rampant demons, and demons were everywhere who led beasts and ate humans.

In this way, the story's suppressed background will be rendered.

But Moriya still felt that it was not enough.

"It's better to do this. Let's continue to set that in fact, the court and the demons collude. The demons give their powerful abilities to the court, and the court secretly helps the demons import boys and girls..."

Since you want to be black, then you will be blacked to the end. Since you want to be cured, then start from the root.

Although the future of the "Sword of Fairy" series has gradually taken shape, it is just the future.

In this era, who knows what the Fairy Sword Series can develop into?

Since everyone doesn’t know, of course it’s up to Mori Xia to make a magic change here!

In fact, Sen Xia thought Yang Guang's unlucky child was quite pitiful, but for the sake of the story, the poor Emperor Yang of Sui could only act as a villain at this time!

If there is a background of collusion between demons and people, then the story of the heroine will be revealed.

"I think it's interesting to have the heroine become a disciple of a big sect from the beginning, but since she wants to be cured, she might as well set her as a prisoner."

Well, the classic set Prisoner protagonist from the Elder Scrolls.

"After that being said, why do you have to be limited to the heroine?" The second generation teacher said again, "Will there be any problem with men? I think if the protagonist is a cute boy, it doesn't seem to be a problem?"
To be continued...