Final remarks(1/3)
Hello everyone, this is Andlao, your loyal friend who is finished and about to enjoy the holidays.
First of all... without any confession, before starting today's nonsense literature, let me pull up the sponsor list.
Thank you, the leader of [Infinite Moon]
Thanks, the leader of [Book Friends 20190729205446286].
Thank you, the leader of [Promise to Be King].
Thank you, the leader of [Leek Kite].
My memory is not very good. If there are any good friends that I missed, you can click on the one-click group on the homepage of the work to join the group and privately message me for torture. If it doesn't work, then I'm really sorry, dong dong dong.
The plot has reached the end and is over soon. There is really no extra plot that I can add more to. Adding more just for the sake of adding more will only make the plot bloated, so I will give it a try and see if it will be added in the next book.
For an update, let’s think about adding extra updates or something like that.
Then.
Thank you, the leader of [Hundred-Eyed Ones].
Thank you, the leader of [Yu Ban 17784].
Thank you, the leader of [Shimano poi].
The three alliance leaders asked for more comments. This can be added, Jie Jie. Then [Leek Kite] is the ember of the reward. Ask me to update the extra story of the ember. Well, well, you kid, take the sword of the previous dynasty and kill this dynasty.
The official, right?
It's almost like I owe the four alliance leaders an update, and I'll remember this kindness.
Hi, I have something to say. I think the alliance leader’s addition of updates near the end is simply an epic conspiracy.
It feels like you are about to get off work and your boss comes over and asks you to work overtime.
Extra update, what extra update? I’m not done yet, why do I need to add more updates? Don’t do it.
No debts.
The name of a person, the shadow of a tree.
Speaking of which, this reminds me of the kind of dancing live broadcast room I saw when I was watching videos. Whoever you tip will dance. The more tips you give, the longer you dance. Once I saw a guy dancing very fast.
I fainted, feeling pain and happiness at the same time.
In short, thank you for the reward. To all readers who have subscribed, thank you very much. The list of thanks is too long, so I won’t include it in the text. You can find it on your own in the book friend list.
A grateful heart~Thank you for having you~
One thing I have to say is that every time I list my thanks to the leader of the alliance, I feel like that kind of anchor who keeps kowtowing to the screen and thanking the big brother for sending rockets and so on.
It's a pity that I don't have coordination with my hands and feet, otherwise I would give you a little bit of a handshake or something.
Ah, you can also see that because the book has reached the end, in order to ensure that the plot flows smoothly and will not suddenly get stuck at a constipated point and let everyone torture me, so for this period of updates, I have basically updated more than 10,000 per day.
, I didn’t split the chapters, so I can’t add more. I’m really sorry.
Also because there are a lot of words in this update, I am in a state of exhaustion, and the day and night are reversed, making me confused every day. The typo rate will be much higher, so please forgive me.
Then I would like to express my special thanks to all the food and clothing parents who gave me rewards. Then, several leaders asked me to write more testimonials, and I did so...
To be honest, I didn’t understand before that I needed to add more testimonials, but after I started adding more testimonials, I found that adding more testimonials is good, and I’m the best at nonsense literature and so on.
I feel that the book Endless is not good enough, and there are too many problems in it.
For example, the entire book is written in a way that connects a large series of several main plots for the sake of writing the situation of making dumplings with vinegar.
If it's a unit drama, it's okay, but it's obviously not okay to put it on a large-scale serialized story like a web novel.
It was also when I was writing this book that I fell into confusion and doubt. Fortunately, through this book, I also clearly understood what I am good at and what I am not good at, and I can use my strengths to avoid my weaknesses.
When I was writing Embers before, everyone complained that the ending was a bit too bland. Embers could not expand its content due to its own story structure, so it seemed like this. Moreover, it may also be related to the author's slack.
When I was writing to the end, I had the problem more than once. Anyway, it was over and the manuscript fee was just right. I should hurry up and co-write it, finish it and rest.
It's easy to make do, just like the alarm clock has been ringing for a long time and you are already late, so you might as well just sleep until noon.
But fortunately, I curbed this bad idea. Just like what this book says, professional people must have professional ethics when doing professional things!
Then, in order to finish it well, the completion date of the book once changed from years ago to the next year, and then from March 5th, which was scheduled with a friend, to now.
Looking at the chat history, similar conversations like "When will you finish the book?" occurred no less than ten times. Every time I was asked, there was a feeling that Party A was urging you to die, which was unsettling.
Because of the feedback and experience of the previous book, when I finished this book, I deliberately left a lot of content and released it in the ending. However, due to personal writing skills, daily updates and many other factors, there are still many things that are not enough.
Perfect, not expressive enough.
To use the way I prefer to describe it, it’s like when I played ff7re a few years ago. I played from 9pm to 12pm. I felt it was about to end, so I thought about staying up late to finish the game, but ended up playing until 12 noon the next day.
The typing was not over yet, so I had a good sleep and finally finished typing when I got up at night.
The information density of the ending was a bit too high, making it seem top-heavy, and at the end, I did feel tired.
Personally, I feel that the final battle in the novel is very bland. It can be decomposed into the protagonist going to kill the villain. Whether it is a Star Destroyer bombardment or a street fight, it is the same result. It is nothing more than a way to achieve it.
So when it comes to the part where the protagonist fights the villain from a military perspective, it was a bit difficult for me to write.
Due to different story carriers, novels cannot be written too cumbersome. Being cumbersome will only give readers a headache. A few thousand words can be summarized as to who killed whom, but animations and movies are different. For example, I watched Dragon Ball before.
·Broly, I never got tired from the beginning to the end.
So at the end of the book, with the idea of Ember in mind, I wrote something counter-conventional, not an ending where who killed whom.
reconciliation.
I really like the word reconciliation and the meaning it brings, just like no matter how many obsessions, disputes, and pains, they will eventually reach reconciliation and achieve a kind of self-liberation.
This may be related to my own complicated state of mind, so at the end of Embers, I wrote about the reconciliation between the protagonist and his own past. When writing this book, I wanted to repeat the same trick.
But halfway through, I felt that there was nothing to reconcile with the protagonist of Endless. The previous volumes had pretty much explained it, and the character’s mood was that of a pure and cheerful boy with a cloudless heart.
So what's the point of reconciliation? Forget it, just write whatever comes to mind.
I like the word "reconciliation". It gives me the feeling that a peerless master has enlightened himself, laughed wildly, and then ascended to heaven. But at the same time, I don't like the word "reconciliation" that much. It feels like if you really can't solve a certain problem, you have to do it.
Solve yourself, convince yourself, shake hands with it, and feel helpless to compromise.
Sometimes, I feel that the characters I write are somewhat homogeneous. They all seem to have the same hobbies, bad jokes, and movies. This may be a reflection of myself.
In order to make a certain distinction, the protagonist of Embers often doubts himself, so the protagonist of Endless is a confident boy. Regardless of whether he hits anyone or not, a big disability is a big disability.
There is nothing to reconcile with such a confident boy. Just like in Boruto, everyone's cognition is distorted. Uchiha always questions the world before doubting himself. There is nothing wrong with Uchiha.
So when I was imagining the ending, I decided to focus the ending's perspective on the little characters. In fact, they are not little characters, but I just ended everything from another perspective.
The theme has also changed from the so-called reconciliation to a more romantic sense of redemption, an ending that is not quite like the ending of the online novel. After all, everyone else is defeated.
But very few people write endings like this, so let me do it.
The reason for this ending comes from two aspects. One is the urban supernatural novel that I wrote a long, long time ago but failed to serialize.
In many of my later books, many elements were disassembled from that book. After all, I am a lazy dog and I love certain elements very much. I wish every book had traces of them.
This strange stubbornness has persisted for a long time, and maybe it can be regarded as one of my styles, just like my favorite Final Fantasy series. No matter how the world view changes, killing matt, crystals, and chocobos are the eternal elements.
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The other is from "What Bad Thoughts Can I Have?"
A very interesting book. The often seen meme of going to the pier to order French fries originated from this book.
But compared to the pier fries, what I actually like more is another content drawn by the author. Two birds are flying in the sky. One suddenly asks if we will be friends in another world, and then the grid of the comic begins to split.
Each small grid is a parallel world. Two birds have such a conversation, and then the grids are put together. The other bird thinks for a while and says, "Unlikely to be friends."
The ending, a summary of a book, is like a comprehensive evaluation after clearing a game. I like to do all the collections, all the illustrations, all the achievements, and then get the precious platinum cup, so I like a perfect ending, at least
It is a logically reasonable and perfect ending that is both emotional and reasonable.
I like those majestic epics, and I like countless characters who come one after another to push the wheel of greatness forward. As early as in my unspeakable black history work, I have used such an element, called the power of unity.
, that is, gathering the strength of everyone.
In my subsequent works, the stories I wrote were more or less like this. In addition to the protagonist, there were many characters who contributed. Everyone worked together to push the plot to the end of the boss, just like Warcraft fighting in a group.
, the leader's current microphone shouted wildly, Just beat Germany! Just beat Germany! It's the same.
I think I will continue to use this element in the future, and I already have many similar but new ideas in my mind.
So, to put it nicely, I have my own unique style, but to put it harshly, I like to copy myself, quack.
In fact, when I first conceived the concept of Endless, I was thinking of an ember promax. After all, according to my career, my character at that time was that of a small author who was inexplicably trying to revitalize himself. Of course, for my own food and clothing, I had to do it.
It's path dependent, right?
As long as I write according to the content of the ember and copy it again, I can make a living more or less. But when I finished writing the endless first volume with this idea, I realized in despair that the work itself is a unique one.
Regardless of whether the results are good or bad, whether there is an audience or not.
In my opinion, the work is like a total reflection of the author's personality, own situation, thoughts and other things at the time when he created the work. If one of the elements changes, the work will change accordingly.
Just like what a senior said to me when I had dinner with him later.
The general meaning is that when I wrote Embers, I was still a freshly graduated college student. Don’t talk about artistic pursuits, self-worth realization and other fancy things. I wrote books just for a bite of food. It was okay to take care of food and shelter, nothing else.
To be continued...