I'm very happy that someone can give me some advice. But regarding the opinions of several book friends, I just want to say that this book is by no means abusive, and can even be said to be a good read.
On the one hand, it is for the fullness of the logical chain and the gradual progression. I always feel that a good story, a story written with care, and a story that strives to satisfy readers is the kind that can make people remember something after reading it.
You shouldn’t forget about it after reading it.
Just like my Internet enlightenment book Zichuan ten years ago, I still have a deep recollection of it. Maybe I will never forget it in my life. Although I cannot reach its height, I always want to try to imitate it and get closer to it.
On the other hand, the harder you press, the more exciting the explosion will be, and the subsequent plot will be more exciting, with all kinds of wonderful twists and turns. The protagonist is definitely not a sage type. If the previous chapters seem to abuse the protagonist, but the second volume
Ending If there are still people who say that I am abusing my master, you are welcome to come and watch me slap myself in the face.
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So, I really just pursue the fantasy and try to make the plot as reasonable as possible. Before the prince and princess live a happy life, the villain, the evil devil, must be brainless, right? Okay, I feel so bad.
Admit that I am a reasonable person, even though I am writing YY articles...
But if you only want to bless your brother, then there are all kinds of pornographic stories about trampling on people and pretending to be bad, which is more simple and crude.
But I always feel that writing plots that are completely logical and have no lower limit is disrespectful to everyone. Maybe some people like to watch that type of movie, but not all of them, let alone those of you who have seen it now. If you are just for nothing,
If you read my article with a pure mind, you may have abandoned it long ago.
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The first and second volumes are just the only way for the protagonist to grow up. For a book that is expected to be at least three million words+ according to the detailed outline, I have tried to compress their length as much as possible...
The key point is that as the controller of the family and the general, I really don’t want to wait for the war to come and let the protagonist just be a soldier... Especially when the background of this article is still a modern military system. You have to call everyone "sir" when you see them.
The most annoying thing is that it’s more fun and cool to be a commander, okay.
As for the third volume and beyond, well, by that time the protagonist has already fully fledged and has officially entered the magnificent era of great demon wars, the era of great wars. He doesn’t have to abuse him even if he wants to.
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So, the above. I hope everyone can understand this explanation. Thank you very much.