Today I carefully read the article from the first chapter to the latest chapter, and found a very obvious problem, which is bland.
If this question is to be forgiven at this stage when I just started, it has been three months now. I don’t know whether I understand it or not, at least I can’t go on like this anymore.
Next, I will try to improve the progress of my writing. The reason why it was dull before is that the narrative level is limited, and the explanation is very cumbersome.
I spent a day researching and sorting out my article. (I asked someone for help, but there was no response. So I sorted it out myself!) I have found out the main problems.
So instead of updating the text today, I will use the remaining time and tomorrow’s daytime to organize new writing methods. This time I will clarify many things that have not been expressed before, and then I will speed up the progress of the story and strengthen the control of the plot’s rhythm.
, as well as the interestingness of the plot.
This can only be said to be a kind of self-version upgrade. In fact, I have long felt this and the fact that it is a bit boring. But the concept has always been very vague. When I read my book carefully today, I couldn't stand it.
Next, we will focus more on the key points, and at the same time, we will spend more energy to improve ourselves, and no longer waste this dream that we have wanted to realize for many years.
If there are friends who have actually read this chapter all the way, I am very happy. Although everyone wants to win the lottery, everyone knows the expectations. I am the same. Fortunately, this matter has room for my own efforts, so
Let me briefly talk about the next situation to give an introduction to friends who continue to support me.
If I say that I am practicing my writing, some people may not be able to help but criticize me and practice your sister's writing. However, I will really be inseparable from this essence in the future. I will continue to improve my narrative level through attempts in order to achieve my personal level.
An optimal state. Of course, you can also say that I am practicing writing during this process, but this is a benign practice because I will improve my coding level more quickly.
In fact, now I have the ability to explain one thing clearly, but it is not enough because the expression is not exciting enough. This is what I hope to change.
Okay, the above words can be regarded as expressing a positive aspect of me, so I won’t be verbose.
As far as the current situation is concerned, the following text will have certain jumps. Some irrelevant things will not be explained in detail. The number of words will be concentrated on the key points of the content. If any well-meaning friends feel that I am jumping
If you have any issues with sexual propriety, you can raise them directly in book reviews. Everyone can clearly feel that I am very active in book reviews.
In addition, the plot has also entered a medium-sized climax, and various plots will return from cumbersome explanations to the story itself. As for the latest unfamiliar props and characters, I will give a concise and clear explanation.
Finally, let me talk about my personal feelings about the current change.
The main reason for this is that as a coder, I feel like I want to sleep during the coding process. This is because the content does not have the passion I want.
I always take into account the completeness of the plot and focus all my energy on narrating some non-important links. This leads to the slow progress of the plot and never reflects the focus of my writing of this book. What I want to write is always ignored.
Isolated.
Okay, I won’t go into details for a long time. Friends who support me in my mood should completely understand!
Special reminder: There are many typos in the book (I found a lot of them when I was reading today, and there are also typos that affect the meaning of the sentence.) I use intelligent pinyin code, if
If there are typos, they also have wrong pronunciation. I hope you can understand. Everyone knows this!