I would like to express my sincere thanks to my friends, Peacock Mingwang, who are enthusiastic readers, for their enthusiastic and persuasive comments. I hope that other friends will also give more comments and follow me to accompany this book.
The following is the content of the book review. The first one mentioned is "Mortal Killing Immortals" written by me while studying at Tencent last year. Friends who are interested can also check it out!
#A brief analysis of non-VIP chapters and the expectations of readers
In the first part, the male protagonist and the female supporting character had no choice but to do so in the second part. They couldn't do it consensually. As a writer, you have a very flexible mind and used free chapters to set up countless big traps for readers.
I am willing to jump into VIP. The story is rigorous and the clues are interspersed in many details. It always feels like I am playing an RPG game, and the titles of each volume are closely related to the plot.
The first volume, Blood-stained Qingyang, can actually be divided into another volume. After all, the previous volume tells the story of Xiao Fan’s miserable experience and his first encounter with the little earthworm malaria. It’s not like we share the same hardship. Then we saw the first female character Ning
Shuang, it is said that good causes lead to good results. This gentle and pleasant Shuang'er saved him, but Xiao Fan could not commit himself to him. After that, there was the second female character Zhou Yuxiang, a descendant of the Holy Demon Emperor. When I saw this, I
Knowing that this guy was going to be harmonized, it was just as expected. After that, Xiao Fan had to find a backer, otherwise he would be lured to Qingyang just because he had a little treasure without being ripped apart.
What I have to praise is the author's description of the environment, which can be described as detailed and vivid. When I saw the seven-star killing formation, the Qingyang Competition... Ben Hong's duel, I was really worried about it, even though I knew that the protagonist was not
He will die, but it is rare to see him die with only his head left in a hundred years. Although the scene in the back is also very intense, but with the scene of only the head remaining, the death in the back is not as exciting. I think the author
Maybe we need to find other ways to make breakthroughs.
What I want to complain about is that in the Qingyang Sect, the extremely realistic hierarchy is very similar to that in the non-virtual era. The resources are scarce and the people are extremely poor. How many people have the same opportunities as Xiao Fan to make a success of themselves?
Why? Why do you instantly think that Xiao Fan should have the image of a nouveau riche in the early stage, and he also has countless beauties? Back to the topic, there is a very pretty character in the novel, Brother Gu Ning, who has an extremely rough life experience. I originally thought he would be a
The main character, but seeing how few scenes there are later, I wonder if there are more amazing performances in VIP? When I saw Qingyangzi smiling like that at the end of the first volume, I didn’t know whether he was loyal or traitorous.
It's like he has some kind of conspiracy. The main reason is that you have buried too many holes in it, which makes people think that they may be conspirators. So what is there under the Wuxie Palace? Just say "it" and "that
"It's really a girl's thoughts. Don't guess. You can't figure it out after guessing. Then Prince Shura said that in half a year, that thing would be born. So far, I haven't seen it. What is it? What is its purpose?"
In the second volume of the Red Gushen Cult, I actually saw the accompanying one. This guy should be said to be the highlight of the first volume. The setting of a child's heart is very good. I am very grateful to have him appear again. At the same time, he is also the highlight of the book.
Here the Yin and Yang Realm of the Heart Poison Crystal is revealed, and characters such as the imperial sister Hua Si, Hua Gang, Chen Yunfei, etc. are revealed. The appearance description of Hua Si is 65% similar to Qi Yingxue! What makes me miss the most is the soul.
The two blood Shura people have been entangled for thousands of years, with constant love. They only want to be with each other and rebel. I originally wanted my heart to illuminate the moon, but you only look for him... No, no, no.
The third volume is too much to exclude VIP. Apart from the pill-swallowing calamity, I didn’t see anything. I can only pay to read it. Support the genuine version and support the path to immortality!
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