Chapter 75: Comments from the New Star Literature Society
I am very grateful to Xinxing Literary Society for their comments, including suggestions, criticisms, and compliments. I am very grateful.
The most common criticism of this novel is the first person and the abrupt change of plot. In fact, the original setting of this novel was suspense. In order to please the readers, the style and writing type were constantly changed.
So how to modify it? It is better to decide to change all the stories back to suspense, so as not to look like this. If it is changed to suspense, then each story can be established independently, and there is no need to abandon a lot of things in order to adapt to the whole story.
Should I stop editing temporarily and revise the article? Should I continue writing? I have some doubts. Friends who have seen it can give their opinions. Thank you!