After Chapters 84 and 85 were released yesterday, I carefully read the book reviews from every reader who spent money to subscribe to this book. In order to save everyone, I roughly summarized everyone’s thoughts and summarized them into the following points. I will share them later.
I will be democratic and let everyone put forward their opinions. I will modify 84 and 85 completely according to everyone's wishes.
Because in the early days of writing the tycoon, I never had a very definite idea and my ideas were wavering, so I had the two characters Yang Wei and Fang Ruoxin, so the previous writing was a bit worse. And now I am designing the wrong plot for the previous one.
And to make up for it, the chapters during this period are to make up for the previous design mistakes. It is precisely because I know that I am not good at emotional dramas, and I have to take care of everyone's emotions, so I must end the relationship between Fang Ruoxin and Xiao Ran as soon as possible.
By Chapter 85, the mistakes made before have been made up. The ideas have been determined, and I will not make such low-level mistakes as writing emotional scenes. What is left is the real career development, that is, after the emotional scenes
Basically it won’t be covered, it really gets into the theme of this book.
Because everyone’s book reviews yesterday have always made me very depressed. Yesterday, I only wrote half a chapter in the morning and I was so excited that everyone would take it off the shelf and stop subscribing. Therefore, there may be some emotions in the following content. I hope you will read it.
Tolerance and understanding.
First, Fang Ruoxin and Xiao Ran should not end like this, but should let Fang Ruoxin continue to humiliate and torture Xiao Ran.
Explanation: I think not many people can agree with this, so there is no need to explain anything.
Modification plan: No modifications are required.
Second, it should not be Xiao Ran who dumped Fang Ruoxin, but Fang Ruoxin who dumped Xiao Ran and made Xiao Ran suffer humiliation.
Explanation: Fang Ruo
Judging from the reactions, it is definitely unacceptable. I am afraid that some people will say that the author is a pervert and that the author is no longer a responsible man. Therefore, this second point cannot be established.
Modification plan: Modification is still impossible.
Third, Xiao Ran could dump Fang Ruoxin, but he should not use such drastic means, but should say it before the wedding. It should not be told by Brother Fa, so the protagonist is not a man.
Explanation: Hong Gu and the others were still unable to persuade Xiao Ran to give up the idea of getting married on the last day until Fa Ge came back. Please note when Fa Ge came back. He arrived the day before the wedding. The conversation between Xiao Ran and Fa Ge was on
It was held the night before the wedding. When Xiao Ran made the decision, it was already dawn. In the mood of wanting to see his true love Lin Qingxia, Xiao Ran did not go back to the wedding, but rushed to Prague immediately. I think everyone understands Xiao Ran now.
Why didn't you regret your marriage three days ago?
Secondly, in the previous article, it was written about how Xiao Ran was obsessed with Ruoxin and could not tolerate being humiliated. Everyone once said angrily that it was impossible for Xiao Ran to endure the humiliation because of his stubborn character and self-esteem. OK, so how did Yi Xiao Ran behave in the previous article?
After revealing his true character, he understood his feelings. After thinking about Fang Ruoxin's humiliation to him, did he have any thoughts?
Maybe she was very spineless to say anything soft to this Fang Ruoxin? Is it possible that she was afraid of the strength of the Fang family and was trying to say it as softly as possible? If she really said it very softly, then I don’t think Xiao Ran would have regretted the marriage and not gone there in person.
He told the Fang family because he had to rush to Prague immediately, otherwise he might be able to say something even more unpleasant at the wedding due to his personality.
What is a man? This definition is very broad. However, I think from the point of view of most readers, it is necessary to break up when it is necessary. This is the inevitable nature of man. Xiao Ran made a decisive decision with Fang Ruoxin, which is what he
How could he not be so decisive as a man? The most important thing is that the breakup between him and the Fang family did not happen because of Fang Ruoxin, but had already happened
Crack. Please don’t forget that the previous article mentioned more than once that there were huge problems with the contract between Xiao Ran and Fang Ruohai. Xiao Ran could not be willing to be controlled by others and took this opportunity to break off the relationship with the Fang brothers and sisters. This was inevitable. It would have changed for anyone.
From Xiao Ran's point of view, this is the choice. It is a good thing to cherish the fragrance and pity the jade, but it also depends on the person. Xiao Ran is not Chu Liuxiang after all.
Modification plan: It can be modified. According to everyone's opinions, Xiao Ran should personally tell the story of regretting the marriage. The tone should be soft, and it should be done three days before. Then let Fang Ruoxin be moved by Xiao Ran's tenderness and gradually fall in love with Xiao Ran, and then Xiao Ran will say it again.
Caught in a love triangle? Or maybe the Fang brothers and sisters were not forced to leave by the marriage scandal, so they have a lot of time to play with Xiao Ran to death? I think these are not what everyone wants. Therefore, this plan can only involve small operations at most.
, generally the main line cannot be changed.
Fourth, the whole relationship is illogical. Lin Qingxia and Fang Ruoxin are not similar at all. How could Xiao Ran regard Fang Ruoxin as a substitute.
Explanation: Please pay attention to the description of Fang Ruoxin's first appearance. She is better than Lin Qingxia in appearance, but slightly inferior in temperament. Here, Xiao Ran has compared the two, and Xiao Ran will choose her both emotionally and rationally.
Only a woman who is comparable to Lin Qingxia can make up for and escape true feelings. Besides, it is really strange how people look at people. What looked beautiful a year ago will look like a dinosaur a year later.
I think everyone understands this.
Modification plan: delete Fang Ruoxin.
Fifth, the author created the Fang family as an enemy in order to create enemies for Xiao Ran. The idea was good, but the plot was not logical.
Explanation: This is a correct answer, but it is not complete. Without Fang Ruoxin, the Fang family would still turn against Xiao Ran. However, with Fang Ruoxin, this hatred becomes unsolvable. As for the logic of the plot, let each of them take their own approach.
It’s different, so I can’t guarantee that every reader will agree with it.
Modification plan: delete all the Fang family dramas.
Sixth, since Xiao Ran had sex with Fang Ruoxin, he must marry her and marry N others in the future.
Explanation: There is no plot in the book that mentions Xiao Ran having sex with Fang Ruoxin. On the contrary, Xiao Ran thought of a certain woman during the only time he had close contact with Fang Ruoxin, and it was the woman who stopped him from further action. As for marrying N women, this is a matter of opinion.
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Modification plan: delete Fang Ruoxin
Seventh, the author is an idiot and a pervert, and this book is even more idiotic and perverted.
Explanation: Personal attacks have no effect on me. What can hurt me is the book reviews of readers and friends, not blind criticism. Besides, if you don’t agree with the meaning of this reader and friend, then you are a pervert and an idiot, then I think,
It’s meaningless for readers like me to live. Because you will find that the world does not revolve around one person, and you will encounter so many undesirable things in society that you will want to commit suicide.
Eighth, this book is not worth reading. The more I write about it, the more disgusting it becomes, so I no longer read it or subscribe to it. If I want to read it, I only read pirated posts.
Explanation: Yesterday every book review said this. I can only say that it is a pity. Because the emotional drama in this book has ended, and the career has just started, which is when the excitement begins. If you are now
Just say that I won’t watch it anymore, then I can only feel sorry for you. Of course, if you insist on
If you feel that my character is not worth your money to support, and you must read the pirated posts, there is nothing I can do about it. However, I just want to tell you that the reason why I do not seek publication of my works is because I do not want my readers to read them intermittently.
Yes, if my sincerity is rewarded with such treatment, then I will indeed have no choice but to do so.
Ninth, this book is absolutely terrible and should have been eunuched long ago.
Explanation: I feel very sorry for my friends who think this way. You may not know me. Although I am not a professional writer, I still have professional ethics. All the works I create are complete, and this one is no exception.
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Finally, I want to sincerely apologize to everyone for the emotional drama in this book, if it really made you feel sick.