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I was a little angry at first, but when I came back in the evening and just started typing, a mindless book review popped up. I wanted to reply, thinking that time was running out, so I hurriedly typed, but two more similar book reviews came in a row, and I was almost in a state of mind.
collapse.
If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. Please don't hurt me. It makes sense and I will change it. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, and it's hard to adjust to the heavy taste.
In a hurry and angrily, I replied to them: When I finish coding, I will send out individual chapters at midnight.
I kept typing while I was nervous, and it was only ten minutes until twelve o'clock when I finished typing. I kept thinking about the plot, and I lost my anger because of the book review. If the words had not been spoken, this single chapter would not have appeared. After all, it was already
It's past twelve o'clock, and I only slept for six hours yesterday.
Maybe I’m a newbie, I’ve been replying to many book reviews, but I found that I really can’t explain them. Many of the ideas are, in my opinion, bizarre and unbelievable. Some of them are just for the sake of trolling.
Let me first answer a question asked by a book friend about book club groups. There are book club groups, but they will most likely be established after the book is finished or stabilized in the later stages. Because I know how to join groups and have always been in groups, I want to calm down first.
Come and write better.
I don't feel that my writing is very good, there are many shortcomings, and even many book friends' writing skills are better than mine. I have carefully read the corrections made by many book friends.
Every novel must have its own characteristics and positioning to be unique. This book is about a modern ordinary person traveling through the world of cultivating immortals. The biggest difference is that it strives to be reasonable.
I know that many people read cool articles and write routines, and I earn more. I don’t think my ideas are worse than others, but there are too many people who write them, and my writing skills are poor, so I can only go my own way.
Just like other people's world of cultivating immortals, high-level monks wish they could practice for tens of thousands of years, but end up dying like dumplings every day. It seems novel at first, but it's okay after looking at it. After looking at it, don't you wonder, such a killing method?
, there are all kinds of fighting methods and killings every day. Except for the protagonist, the death rate is almost full. Is this cultivating immortality? Isn’t it PlayerUnknown’s Battlegrounds?
I won’t talk about the nonsense, but let’s talk about some of the most criticized issues in book reviews.
The first is that the protagonist is careful to protect his skin. What I want to express is that he has a desire to cultivate immortality, but there is no hope in a small mountain village. There is no way at all. The seemingly methods and practices are ridiculous, but people are in despair.
We need hope, even if it is pitiful and ridiculous.
From a practical point of view, which modern person would be willing to be tanned like a black man when he was a child? This is a normal and ordinary heart.
Another thing that has been criticized is the protagonist's laziness. I just don't have such a detailed writing process. If I write this at the beginning, the book will probably be useless.
If you write too much, it may be verbose, but if you write too much, it may be completely wrong.
Imagine a modern person suddenly transforms into an ancient child. The language and writing have changed. Let alone those novels about traveling through time. If it were you, would you dream first or panic first?
At the age of five or six, if you don't have enough to eat, or you haven't had enough to eat since you were born, you start working. From a modern perspective, you are just a young child. How many people can start working as cows and horses right away?
?If you are not a modern person by nature, you may even commit suicide.
But under this kind of productivity, where starvation is commonplace, bad children will directly reduce their rations and continue to starve you. This is a vicious cycle.
Are you going to give in? Or remain stubborn.
Someone directly commented that the protagonist deserved to be sold. Didn’t you see that the protagonist I wrote worked hard and shared the game he hunted with his family? What was that situation? It was a situation where his feet were weak because of hunger every day, but he still cared about family ties.
Mainly because the protagonist is not a native, but has memories of past lives. It would be nice to compare the two lives without despair.
He has to be careful even when speaking at the dinner table. Can't you tell how difficult his life is?
Can’t you see the purpose of the protagonist’s parents? It’s to stay hungry and sell them for money, just like selling livestock. There’s not enough food. It’s understandable that a ten-year-old child can’t eat enough. How can a five- or six-year-old eat more? He’s not a real child.
immature.
If the protagonist had enough to eat when he was five or six years old, how could he see his parents not having enough to eat and not working? People's hearts are full of flesh, but this is not the case. Not getting a tan is a good excuse.
I don’t want to write in such a depressing way. Don’t talk about how it is possible to have such parents. Have you ever heard of changing your child to eat? Poverty is the original sin, and hunger can make people have no moral bottom line.
There are thousands of good parents, but there are also some bastards.
Even in the book world, not everyone is like this and it is impossible, only a very small number. But when the protagonist catches up, it is more about the helplessness and forced survival wisdom, so in the end, it is said that understanding is understanding, but never
forgive.
The novel is a joy to read, and it is passed through in one stroke, so as not to affect the mood. I can stand on several floors to read it, and read it on several floors. I have written it all, and there is no room for imagination. I don’t want to write about tragedy, but I want to be as close to reality as possible.
, it will feel better if you write it this way.
The third point is that in the chapter where the protagonist blocks the road and robs, he talks about seeking death. Haven’t you noticed that the hidden meaning is that he is seeking death and will starve to death immediately? Even if he pretends to be unconscious, he does not want to lose the dignity of the last time traveler. I think so
Robbery, but in fact, it means death anyway, so in the end, the iron plate with strengthening points is left, which is a life-saving grace.
Some people say that the guards killing the protagonist is like killing chickens. Ten taels of silver is a lot, and the guards may come back and kill people secretly. What about human nature? First of all, if they can protect women and children on the road, the nature of the guards cannot be bad. Secondly, if several guards sneak back to one
, do other people know? If they are this kind of people, it is impossible to give things to the protagonist, and on the road, the protagonist gets money and food and just stays where he is? Bangchui won't be like this, right?
The world is different, so don’t bring it in casually, because the systems are different. It is impossible to explain the 8,000-word narration in one sentence, and it is impossible to introduce the local customs in ten or twenty chapters. It can only be a little bit in the book.
Let it unfold naturally.
Some people also said that there are too few immortals and spiritual stones and it is unreasonable. I forgot the specific details. I just looked for it and couldn't find it. I just want to say that I didn't see a chapter titled "Is this world abnormal?" foreshadowing.
, will be revealed later.
There are also a few who said that the protagonist seems to have not grown up. What can a skinny ten-year-old child do in a world where the law of the jungle is almost the rule?
If there are some, they are deliberately added to make fun of and liven up the atmosphere, or they are too dull. It is not that easy for mortals to cultivate immortality.
In the blink of an eye, it’s almost 1:30 in the morning. Single chapters with this kind of explanation will not be published in the future. After all, no one can write a work that satisfies everyone, and it will also affect everyone’s reading experience.
However, when I look at other people’s book reviews, most of them are peaceful. Half of my comments are questioning or vomiting sweet things, which is a bit unwilling. Is it true that only writing settings and plots that others have written is the light of the right path? What matters in life is to keep growing and doing things.