I handed in the script for "Lampburner" and the results came out the next day.
They selected 3 of the 5 scripts, and the project team decided to interview these three screenwriters at the same time.
Zhang Tan's script was among these three, and he was relieved as he successfully entered the next stage.
To be honest, there is no room for him to give full play to the comic book adaptation. The plot and story are all ready-made, so they can't be drastically changed. Then it's not called an adaptation, it's called a rewrite.
Because it is just a minor revision, it is impossible to say that Zhang Tan's script is much better than others. To be different from others is more reflected in the script framework and details, one is macro and the other is micro.
, just keep it as original.
These days, I have been busy working on scripts at work and off work. When things were almost finished, Zhang Tan remembered that Xiaobai had never shown up. In the past, he would come to his place every day and rush to visit him. Even if he didn't look at him, he would look at him.
Her little one is never left behind.
He made dinner and was about to eat it when he suddenly thought of Xiao Bai, so he put down his bowls and chopsticks, put on his shoes, went out and came to the activity area on the first floor.
It is now half past six in the evening, and the dazzling red sunset is shining in the yard. Under the shadow of the dense trees, small insects are wandering out.
There were teachers and children in the academy, but not many. Zhang Tan saw Luo Zikang sliding down the slide and asked him if he had seen Xiao Bai.
Since the last fight, the two have apologized to each other, ostensibly reconciled, and have been in peace ever since.
Luo Zikang pointed to the yard and said that Little Pepper was playing football.
Judging from the aggrieved look on his face, he probably wanted to join but was rejected. It's quite pitiful when you think about it. Football is originally a boy's game, but he was robbed by a novice, and he was not allowed to join as a young man. It really makes no sense.
ah.
Zhang Tan found Xiaobai in the yard. This child was digging sand with millet and filling it into red plastic buckets. They were very busy. The setting sun stretched their figures very long. Under the light and shadow, they seemed to be rimmed with gold.
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As for the football, it was thrown aside.
"What are you busy with?" Zhang Tan stepped forward and asked.
Xiaobai squatted in the sandpit digging sand, and Xiaomi was responsible for filling the bucket. The two had a clear division of labor and a tacit cooperation. It seemed like this was not the first time they had done this.
Hearing the sound, Xiaobai raised his head in the middle of his busy schedule. When he saw it was Zhang Tan, he said happily: "Oh, uncle! It's our uncle here~"
Xiaomi followed the sound, smiled shyly, and said nothing.
This little girl is not as outgoing as Xiaobai, and she is not as courageous as her. She is timid. Every time she sees Zhang Tan, she smiles shyly. She has not said a few words. Even if she is asked, she will give a simple answer in a low voice.
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Originally, Zhang Tan thought that he had a strong affinity because he got to know Xiaobai very quickly. But when he got to Xiaomi, he realized that it was not that he was more approachable, but that Xiaobai made him stronger.
Xiaomi held the small bucket in both hands and walked to the other end of the sand pit. Maybe there was too much sand in it. After carrying it for a few steps, he couldn't walk anymore. He turned around and called out "Xiaobai" weakly.
"The bunny police are here."
Xiaobai immediately stood up, clapped his little hands, ran over, and with a sigh, he held the small bucket in both hands and dragged it far away, and at the same time called Zhang Tan to come over.
"Do you want my help?" Zhang Tan asked, extending his hand to help lift it.
The two children had sweat on their foreheads. If it weren't for the smiles on their faces, Zhang Tan would have thought someone was abusing them to do hard work.
"Where do you want to live?" Xiaobai was a little unhappy.
What's going on? I asked kindly if I wanted to help, but why is this attitude so obvious?
Zhang Tan said: "I think you can't lift it. Do you want me to help you lift it?"
Xiaobai put down the small bucket filled with sand, stopped, took a breath and said, "Uncle, you look down on the doll."
What is this? I mean it well. Zhang Tan waved his hand and said it didn't mean that. If you don't want his help, then forget it.
Xiaobai was quite satisfied with his attitude. He nodded and said that he would be a guest today. Then he lowered his head to look at the small bucket and muttered a few words with Xiaomi. Zhang Tan heard it, and there was so much sand in the bucket. He was exhausted.
Oh, and then the two of them worked together to drag the small bucket away.
Zhang Tan followed them. Seeing how busy they were, he wanted to leave, but Xiaobai wouldn't let them go. He asked him to follow them because there was something good for him.
Maybe they really dug the sand and found diamonds or something.
What good stuff? Zhang Tan followed him enthusiastically.
Not a diamond, but a "summer" dinner!
Xiaobai pointed at the delicacies on the ground, smiling like a flower, very proud.
"Emmmm~" Zhang Tan groaned, feeling full just by looking at his stomach.
"Uncle, have you eaten?" Xiaobai asked.
"not yet."
Xiaobai immediately invited cheerfully: "How about you eat this? Eat Mangmang, and there's also Gaga."
Xiaomi was smiling happily at the side, as if she had never been so happy before, like a weasel stealing a chicken, with a face full of anticipation.
Zhang Tan began to have a headache. The "rich" dinner in front of him was made of plates of sand. Some were simply sand mixed together, some were mixed with two stones, and some were mixed with some weeds.
Xiaobai’s glass bottle was also turned into a dish!
Xiaobai solemnly introduced this dish with a glass bottle, saying that it was Fish Baobao's favorite food. It was delicious and full of enthusiasm. Zhang Tan must squat down to taste it.
Zhang Tan knelt down and took a look, "Oh my god, what is the favorite fish to eat? Emmm, it is indeed the favorite fish to eat because there are two earthworms in the glass bottle! Don't fish just like to eat earthworms the most?"
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The earthworms were dug out by them when they were digging in the sand, and they screamed excitedly. The millet was not daring to catch, and the little white was brave, so she grabbed it into the glass bottle with her bare hands.
"Uncle, give it a try." Xiaobai enthusiastically recommended.
Is this just children playing house? It was indeed unbelievable. Zhang Tan smiled and declined, saying that he had already eaten.
"You lied, you just said you didn't eat Mangmang!"
Xiaobai clearly remembered that he had just said that he had not eaten. Why did he say that he had eaten recklessly when he saw her fish feast? Did he look down on the baby?
Zhang Tan:-_-
Xiaobai was really enthusiastic, and Xiaomi was also enthusiastic, with that kind of implicit enthusiasm. She actually took out two branches, said they were chopsticks, and handed them to Xiaobai. Then Xiaobai stuffed them into Zhang Tan's hand and asked him to be sure.
You have to finish eating.
Zhang Tan took the branch and looked at the expectant children, and then at the "Fish Feast" in the sandpit on the ground. He couldn't put down his chopsticks, so he could only pretend to be sick: "Oh, I have a headache. I have been working too much these days.
I’m so busy, my head hurts so much.”
"Ha, Xiaobai, please give me some ideas."
Is there such a good thing? Xiaobai has long wanted to cut Zhang Tan's brain. Although that was his idea when he had a conflict with Zhang Tan, and now they have reconciled, but once the idea takes root, it will grow in a dark place.
Once opened, it is difficult to eliminate. Now that he had such an opportunity, Xiaobai did his best to run up behind Zhang Tan, hit him on the head as soon as he asked.
"Uncle, you have such a big brain."
Xiaobai suddenly said such a sentence, and Zhang Tan didn't know whether she was praising or scolding.
Unable to resist the hospitality, Zhang Tan finally pretended to be full and even burped.
"Okay, now that I'm full, I'm going back to work. Bye."
Zhang Tan lost his chopsticks and wanted to run away. He was too naive. Did he think that he would be done with just one meal? No, Xiaobai pulled his pants and refused to let him go, because...
"This is made by Xiaobai, and there is also one made by Xiaomi, here."
Pull him to the other side, okay, there's a hearty meal here.
Xiaomi looked at him eagerly, waiting for his compliment.
