It is with a heavy heart that I tell everyone that Xiao Fei’s attempt failed.
I believe that readers who have read this book can see that this is a book that is half urban and half spiritual, that is to say, half of it is about immortality and half of it is about urban life.
Many readers have told me that they are too tired to read this book, and they feel it is always intermittent, sometimes practicing cultivation and sometimes being urban, and they cannot switch.
Facts have also proved that this book has very few readers, and many readers give up after reading a few chapters.
Xiaofei was also helpless. He originally wanted to innovate in subject matter and writing methods, but he didn't expect that his level was limited and he couldn't write as wonderfully as he wanted.
Xiao Fei himself went back and read it several times, and he was really dissatisfied, even though Xiao Fei had designed a lot and prepared a lot.
Here, Xiaofei shows everyone the outline of his design, and then... there is no more to this book.
I'm really sorry to everyone. Although this book cost everyone your money and it also wasted a lot of your time, I'm really sorry!
Content outline of "Xianlu Special Forces"
Characters who have appeared:
Yu Fei: The protagonist, 23 years old, retired from the special forces. He joined the army right after graduating from high school. He defeated the legendary coach of the special forces in the army. He has performed many dangerous missions. He has a calm personality and is quick-witted in situations.
Su Zi: One of the heroines, the general manager of Donghua Group Company. Her father, Mr. Su (the full name is not mentioned in the article), is one of the founders of Donghua Group Company. She has studied abroad, is smart, capable, meticulous, and a strong woman.
representative.
Jiang Han: One of the heroines, a teacher in the History Department of Donghai Normal University, the male protagonist's cousin (not directly related), has a gentle personality, is considerate, and knows how to care about others.
Jiang Yu: A department manager of Donghua Group Company and an important direct descendant of the Jiang family. He has feelings for Su Zi. He is arrogant, not very capable and hates the protagonist.
Zhao Shan: The ex-girlfriend of the protagonist Yu Fei, who has been in love with the protagonist for many years, but turned her back on the protagonist because of his poor financial conditions. She is also an employee of the sales department of Donghua Group Company.
Xue Dayou: Director of the Security Department of Donghua Group Company, with the character of a smiling tiger.
Xue Yong: Xue Dayou's son, the small boss of the sales department of Donghua Group Company, and Zhao Shan's fiancé.
Assistant Chen: Su Zi’s assistant, a female college student who has recently graduated and has strong work ability.
Tian He: A security guard in the security department of Donghua Group Company. He has a good relationship with the protagonist and was transferred to the special service team of the security department by the protagonist.
Zhang Zhihao: Deputy Director of the Security Department of Donghua Group Company, responsible for the morning shift. He is a sinister and petty person.
A certain Mr. Jiang: the marketing director of Donghua Group Company and Jiang Yu’s uncle.
Liu Qingmei: One of the heroines, the daughter of the head of the Liu family of a martial arts family. She is young, has decent skills, has a lively personality and behaves unruly.
Uncle Lu: A master of the Liu family who is responsible for following, guiding, and protecting Liu Qingmei. He is worthy of being the head brother of the Liu family.
Liu Xinhai: The eldest son of the head of the Liu family and the eldest brother of Liu Qingmei. He has an arrogant personality but is not a bad person. He despised the protagonist in the early stage and was in trouble with the protagonist. Later, he was subdued by the protagonist and had feelings for Su Zi.
Liu Tianhao: The head of the Liu family is quite powerful, strict and upright.
Brother Qiang: The leader of the gangsters near Jianshe Road in Donghai City. He once invited the protagonist to join the gang but was rejected.
Zheng Hao: A rich second generation, his father is a real estate developer, and his uncle is the deputy mayor. He once used a trick on Jiang Han, which was destroyed by the protagonist, and later caused a lot of friction.
Temperament Man: The protagonist and Jiang Han met a mysterious man in the mall. He wanted the protagonist's dragon-shaped iron piece, but failed to do so. He bought the hairpin that Jiang Han liked. His true identity is that he was possessed by an evil spirit.
The person in the body was later killed by the protagonist, and the hairpin was obtained by the protagonist and given to Jiang Han as a surprise.
Bai Qiu Shuang: One of the heroines, the captain of the Criminal Investigation Team of the Fengxian District Public Security Bureau of Donghai City, has a cold personality towards others, is decisive in doing things, and has a strong background.
Wan Zheng: Bai Qiu Shuang's deputy, an ordinary police officer of the Criminal Investigation Team of Fengxian District Public Security Bureau of Donghai City.
Shadow Woman: One of the heroines, the protagonist's first friend in a strange world. In reality, she is one of the executives of an online game guild. She has a hot personality and is also one of the protagonist's main helpers in the game.
Elmer: The son of the patriarch of the Bruch family, Su Zi's classmate in college. He pursued Su Zi but was rejected, and was later shot to death by Bai Qiu Shuang.
The design of the entire story:
At the beginning, it was mainly divided into two parts -
One is the story in the city. This part mainly revolves around the heroine's various troubles, and then the evil spirit will appear.
The heroine's troubles, such as Su Zi being targeted by the Bruch family, will last for a long time.
For example, Zheng Hao, who used trickery to drug Su Zi, relied on his family's wealth and an uncle who was the deputy mayor to continue to pursue Su Zi, which annoyed the protagonist Yu Fei.
Take Bai Qiu Shuang, for example, when she encounters some difficulties while handling a case, she will also turn to the protagonist for help, or the protagonist will offer to help by chance.
For example, Liu Qingmei, who is now helping her family take care of some business, will also run into trouble.
There is also Zhao Shan. Although she is not the heroine, as the ex of the male pig trotter, she will naturally have stories.
As for the evil spirit, the original design was that the temperamental man has set his sights on the protagonist's dragon-shaped iron piece, and he will do everything possible to get it.
The early stage of the urban part is mainly about the heroine's troubles. The middle stage is to let the evil spirits appear on a large scale. The later stage is naturally to eliminate the evil spirits and all the troubles of the protagonist or heroine.
Of course, in the middle and later stages, more characters and plots must be arranged based on the situation in the world of cultivation.
The strange world, that is, the part of the cultivation world——
The protagonist mainly relies on the characteristics of his special forces and the dragon-shaped iron piece to continuously upgrade his level, constantly kill bosses, and constantly obtain treasures, thereby becoming the overlord of the party. In the process, of course, he must make friends, help the heroine, and obtain
Pets, build large guilds.
The real identity of the protagonist should not be exposed too early.
The protagonist is a sword cultivator, who cultivates the sharp and fearless sword intent.
This world is actually not a game world, but a real continent of cultivation. However, there are no monks here, only monsters, ruins, treasures, etc. left by previous monks.
The fairy gate in the sky in the real world is actually the dragon's magic circle. This magic circle allows the will of the people on earth to enter the continent of cultivation.
The vast majority of people on earth, after practicing in the Cultivation Continent, have only improved their mental state, that is, their spiritual power, when they return to reality. If they cannot obtain any cultivation resources in the real world, their physical bodies will not be greatly improved or improved.
The protagonist's dragon-shaped iron piece can help the protagonist bring part of the gains from self-cultivation in the continent of cultivation into the real world, so his body will be strengthened.
The dragon-shaped iron piece is a mysterious treasure. The protagonist's is a "Dragon Soul Pendant". In addition to this piece, there are more than a dozen mysterious treasures, such as Dragon Soul Knee Pads, Dragon Soul Shoulder Pads, and Dragon Soul Rings.
Wait, this part should be designed according to the characteristics of the game equipment.
Gathering all the mysterious treasures is the protagonist's long-term mission, and it is also the main line that has not yet been made clear.
Whether on earth or in the Cultivation Continent, you can rob other people's mysterious treasures. Because they are all real worlds, so do not describe and design them in the game world in the Cultivation Continent. In addition to complete sets of equipment, such as fighting
It cannot be written if the monster drops the treasure.
Of course, this continent of cultivation has been dealt with by Shenlong, and it is indeed very similar to the game in many aspects, but the scale of how similar it is must be grasped well.
There are currently two levels of cultivation, namely the Qi Condensation Stage and the True Yuan Stage, followed by... such as the Golden Pill Nascent Soul and so on.
Characteristics of upgrading: Level 10 has ten white circles on the right arm, level 20 has ten red circles.
It is worth noting that if the level has not been reached, no matter how many monsters are killed, it cannot be upgraded. For example, if Shadow Woman does not build a foundation and does not cultivate her true energy, she will not be able to reach level 20. At most, she can only
Wandering at level 19. For another example, our protagonist Yu Fei is on the Cultivation Continent. He has already cultivated sword energy, so he can reach level 20, but if he cannot cultivate sword energy, he will not be able to level up.
to level thirty.
About the setting of evil spirits——
The evil spirits are alien beings that have attacked the earth before and fought with the strong men of the earth before, but were finally defeated.
In order to prevent the evil spirits from invading again, the strong men of the earth set up the dragon array.
In fact, the dragon that appeared at the beginning was just a dragon soul, not a real dragon.
When the evil demons invaded again, the dragon soul opened the magic circle and destroyed some of the evil demons. However, the evil demon army retreated again, but they did not retreat far. They were waiting for the power of the dragon magic circle to be exhausted.
Of course, some evil spirits also fell to the earth, but their strength was greatly weakened. While they slowly recovered, they planned to occupy the earth.
The reason why they want to capture the earth is because in the universe, every planet with advanced life has a treasure called "Heart of Life", and they are here just for this treasure.
These contents will be revealed bit by bit in future articles so that people on earth can gradually understand them. Of course, the protagonist can know them in advance.
The full text should be at least two million words long when it comes to defeating the devil. Before that, a lot of content and plots must be arranged. The heroines can be added continuously. For example, there are no foreign girls appearing yet, so they can be arranged appropriately.
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Regarding the setting of the Xuanling Treasure——
The Xuanling Supreme Treasure was refined by the Dragon King, the most powerful man on earth in ancient times. At least until all the evil spirits were eliminated, the Xuanling Supreme Treasure was the most powerful magic weapon.
Only when more than a dozen mysterious treasures are gathered into one person can that person be said to be invincible and possess the magical power of being possessed by a divine dragon.
In other words, whether on earth or on the continent of cultivation, the Xuanling Treasure is the top magic weapon.
Under the Xuanling Supreme Treasure, it is natural to design other levels of magic weapons, such as magic weapons that have already appeared, spiritual weapons, fairy weapons and even divine weapons that can be designed later. However, in order to have room for development in the future, it is best not to create them.
Divine weapons come, and the Xuanling treasure in this article can only be compared to the best among immortal weapons.
In short, the early stage is divided into two worlds: the city and the Cultivation Continent. The content of the city is mainly the daytime part, and the night part is appropriately designed, while the Cultivation Continent is mainly at night on the earth.
However, it must be considered that it is night in Donghai City, so it is actually daytime in Europe and the United States. Everyone can go online at the same time, but some go online during the day and some at night.
Basically, the content (text volume) of cities and cultivation continents should be kept half and half. Of course, if there are special circumstances, one aspect can be added appropriately.
You can't have an affair with all the heroines, and you have to have relationships with the ones that are supposed to happen. Starting from the first one who is pushed down, the difference between the subsequent ones should not exceed 300,000 words.
