Open a single chapter, thanks to the book friends who have been supporting
Open a single chapter to thank the book friends who have been supporting...
Author: Picking the Stars Tomorrow
Open a single chapter to thank the book friends who have been supporting...
Those who read this must be book lovers who have read the latest chapter, right? I believe you will also find that the content of more than 7,000 words feels a little disconnected, a little messy, and not even very exciting.
...Because, this is the original content of 23,000 words. After deletions and deletions, it became the current chapter.
In the original plot, the little girl's "Ghost Realm" was immature, and the battle in the Ghost Realm affected reality. Kayako showed new abilities, and insect clones spread to Yokohama City.
After the protagonist successfully defeated Kayako in the ghost realm, he chased him all the way to Shengqi Academy, and then met "Tomoko" who had turned into a ghost (the deceased at the beginning of the movie "The Ring")
When "Tomoko" saw Sadako coming with the protagonist, she was "stimulated" and dragged the entire Shengqi Academy into the "Ghost Domain" to start the battle royale mode.
The protagonist and Chen Qing were separated and received a side mission. Saving a person from Shengqi Academy would add 100 points. So while leading people to escape from the battle royale, they also found Tomoko who formed the ghost realm.
Then, as the number of deaths increased sharply, Tomoko's resentment became more and more powerful, and the ghost realm became unbreakable, giving rise to various death games (two games are designed here, one is a mirror guessing game and the other is a guessing game).
The protagonist finally collides with Tomoko through the little girl's "ghost realm" and devours Tomoko's ghost realm, and then successfully "evolves" into the full version of the ghost realm.
In this way, the little girl's "ghost realm" can evolve from a semi-finished product to a finished product, otherwise it would look too abrupt based on the current content.
However, due to the emergence of many death games and issues involving supernatural deaths on campus, these plots had to be deleted. After two days of modification, everyone collapsed.
[Actually, when I changed it to the afternoon, my mentality changed completely, because not only this plot, but also the subsequent "School Ghost Story", "Hanako", etc. are all decryption + death games, but they all involve campus supernatural and
Gaga student, you have crossed the line too seriously, so you can only delete it.】
It adds up to 30,000 to 40,000 words, which is equivalent to a week's workload. It's all gone... Originally, it was just a waste of time, and I rested for a day or two before continuing.
But it has become a habit to open Writer Assistant every day to read comments. When I opened it today, there were dozens of red dots. They were all interesting comments, recommendation votes, and monthly tickets from book friends...
Counting yesterday, today is equivalent to a day off. Everyone still hasn’t forgotten to give away tickets, and there are even big guys who give away 20 votes or 30 votes...
Then I thought about it, wasn’t it just 30,000 to 40,000 words? In the past, 160,000 words were cut off, but now it’s 30,000 to 40,000 words, which is a huge blow!
No big deal! Duplicate code!
I connected the new story line to the work of the heroine Asakawa Reiko of "The Ring" and transferred all school-related content to the office. I will put a 10,000 to 20,000-word manuscript to test the waters tomorrow...
Finally, thank you all again for your support!
Thank you to every book friend who voted!
I wish you all a happy May Day in advance. If I have nothing else to say, I’d like to say my first thanks!