Chapter 556: Full of oil but not afraid of the cold
Otherwise, we can say they are father-in-law.
Yan Laoer's thoughts are in sync with Yan Yushen's.
There is oil and water in the stomach, so you can bear the cold!
He planned to use this as the title to clarify the center and make it clear at a glance.
But it’s not okay to write it this way, it needs to be changed.
There is oil in the belly, which means it is freezing.
If it still doesn't work, make it shorter.
There is oil in the abdomen and it is cold.
There are bad words.
Uh...it's too straightforward.
A full stomach with oil and resistance to cold!
Hiss! Still missed.
At this moment, Yan Laoer had a flash of inspiration.
Got it!
Don’t be afraid of the cold when you are full of oil!
appropriate!
Yan Laoer is satisfied!
I thought about it and started writing.
First of all, we highly affirm the significance of disaster relief and the wise leadership of the royal family.
After that, some small suggestions will be made regarding the current progress and methods of disaster relief.
Take warm-weather clothes as an example. In fact, there is no need to issue new cotton-padded clothes. Old clothes have more comprehensive sizes and can be worn as they come. If they don’t fit, they can be interchanged, or they can be disassembled and re-sewed.
Yan Laoer previously learned that in addition to cotton, Guanzhou people also fill it with bird feathers and catkins. This is also a good idea. Rich people are generous and kind, but sometimes they don't have to do it so well.
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There are only two things we pursue: speed and large quantity.
Insufficient medicinal materials, insufficient firewood, and how to distribute rice grains can actually be grouped together.
Yan Laoer reiterated his central theme here.
People will not bear the cold if there is no oil in their bellies!
If you eat well and have plenty of oil and water, and have two ounces of fat on your body, your cotton-padded clothes can be made thinner, and the charcoal fire does not need to be too hot, and your body will not get sick easily, so you will not need so many medicinal materials...
Don't worry about it or not, Yan Laoer just applied it mechanically.
Putting forward an idea without a follow-up is just empty talk.
He is not that kind of person.
If Yan Laoer proposed it, there must be a solution.
Going into the mountains to pick meat...cutting ice to catch fish...
Go to Beirong!
Nothing is faster or more direct than looting.
The Beirong came to grab grain, and we went to get meat. It was only fair that there was coming and going!
Yan Laoer can write well now. Why did he give me a word count earlier? He can’t write too plainly. I forgot!
Although he is a bit timid in reality, he is very passionate on paper!
The king with a strong mouth doesn’t just brag!
Analyze the pros and cons.
To weaken the enemy is to strengthen yourself!
Take a bite of meat from Beirong's mouth and add a bit of fat to us Guanzhou people.
We took them by surprise, they didn't expect it!
Just take advantage of the white snow in winter to rush over and catch them off guard!
If one Beirong dies this winter, one less bastard will come next autumn.
Eat their cattle and sheep, leaving them with no meat to eat.
Seize their horses and leave them without a horse to ride on.
Just imagine, if Beirong invades the border on their legs, we will chase them to death on horseback...
Yan Laoer was so excited to write that he almost filled a piece of paper before he realized that he had written so much!
He ended this paragraph in a hurry, finally realizing the word count issue.
I thought I still had enough time, so I just started drafting it, writing it first, and then starting from scratch when I finished it.
Thinking about it this way, Yan Laoer felt no more psychological burden at all.
Directly describe the government's classification of disaster-stricken people.
Big mistake!
How absurd it is to judge someone’s grief based on the damage to their house!
After writing this sentence, Yan Laoer was stunned.
Damn it, I wrote this?
So awesome!
This sentence is so amazing!
Keep it, keep it, must keep it!
After that, what Yan Laoer is good at is solutions.
What's so difficult about this?
Isn’t it just a comprehensive rating of the disaster situation through household surveys?
The order is wrong. Should the house come first? Wrong. It’s people-oriented!
People are in the front, first assess how miserable they are and what kind of rescue they need, and then build a house!
Or separate two departments, one responsible for rescuers and one responsible for repairing houses, with parallel management and cross-liaison...
Count the elderly and children at home, count the wounded and sick, and see if the labor force has been lost...
When supplies are sufficient, relief can be provided indiscriminately.
If the disaster relief materials are not enough, then the work should be carried out more carefully. How many cotton-padded clothes are there at home, how much rice, grain, firewood and charcoal are stored...
Finally, Yan Laoer wrote that for the sake of sustainable development, it is best not to allow disaster victims to be rescued unilaterally. They should also be allowed to do some things within their capabilities. For example, household surveys require a lot of manpower, so they can be assigned.
Everyone in Guanzhou is united and under the correct leadership of the Royal Palace, they will be able to successfully survive this cold disaster.
As winter passes and spring comes, the sun warms and the flowers bloom.
Yan Laoer put away his pen and looked at the last eight words with satisfaction.
I was moved: It’s so well written!
Yan Laoer put down his pen, picked up the previous page, and read it from cover to cover.
Muttering to himself.
It's really a superb performance, not a single typo!
After reading it, he put it down and was about to polish the ink and prepare a qualified answer sheet.
I don't want a hand to suddenly reach out from beside me.
Picked up his draft!
Yan Laoer:......
First I was shocked, then panicked!
Especially after seeing the figure in official uniform walking back to the middle of the hall and sitting down with his test paper, the panic reached its extreme.
Examiner...Prefect!
Yan Xiangheng winked at his second uncle anxiously.
Follow me quickly!
Yan Laoer was stunned for a while before he realized what he was doing. He stepped forward nervously, but luckily he didn't forget to salute.
Big people see quickly.
When Yan Laoer came closer, he had already finished reading.
He raised his eyes in surprise.
This candidate had done it in one go in the previous two times without any modifications, and he thought he would do the same this time.
Unexpectedly, I made a mistake and turned out to be a first draft of an article.
The full text... in vernacular.
But if you chew it carefully, it can be regarded as an article... worth reading.
Throw away the words and just focus on the content.
Pragmatism first.
Render the second one!
The emotions are so full that the viewer's heart is moved by it, especially the main battle sequence, which is hearty...
The topic of household registration and rating is fresh, thoughtful and practical.
There were several parts of the article that he particularly liked.
For example, the phrase "people-oriented!"
For example, the sentence "How absurd it is to judge someone's grief based on the damage to their house!"
It's the last eight characters that are a bit vulgar.
Perhaps it was because of the first draft that I wrote it as soon as I was inspired.
Pang Daren did not want to waste this candidate's time.
I asked a few questions briefly.
Regarding the saying that he eats meat and keeps oil in his belly and is not afraid of the cold...
He knew how to dig through the ice to catch fish, but what was the point of going into the mountains to pick up meat?
When I heard that the village lived near the mountains, when the snow stopped and I went into the mountains, I found many frozen wild animals...
Da DaRen immediately thought of Beirong sensitively.
I read the paragraph about going to Beirong again.
After a while, he asked again about the household survey.
After Yan Laoer added his answer, Pang Daren asked him to take his seat.
Then he remained motionless, staring at the empty desk, his eyes flickering!
…
Yan Laoer revised the answer sheet again.
I reluctantly deleted many paragraphs.
Finally, the number of words was limited to one answer sheet.
He was quite satisfied with this condensed version.
What dissatisfied him was that he could not take away the drafts, and all manuscripts with words in the examination room had to be handed in.
Yan Laoer had a hunch that he might never be able to write such a top-notch article in his life... and he didn't know if he could still write it silently when he returned home.
