Most of them came to inquire about Miss Haitang's first night.
"I heard that your Haitang girl sold two thousand taels on the first night, and she directly outsold the hair clerk. Did you ask a foreigner to pick this delicate flower?"
Hua Niang, who was hugged by the other party, was not angry. She just said: "Miss Haitang is indeed very lucky. That man is still in Miss Haitang's room on the second floor. I heard that my mother personally entertained her. Hey, I would have been a few years earlier.
, when you were still an oiran, you were attracted by that man, and you became famous, didn’t you?”
The man gently raised the flower girl's chin, "Just you?"
"Master, don't underestimate me. When I was young, I was no worse than Miss Haitang."
"It's not because of her appearance. I heard from a close friend that Miss Haitang was born into a wealthy family in Beijing. Her temperament and cultivation are something you will never be able to catch up with in your lifetime. Otherwise, who would be willing to pay two thousand taels?
"
However, in the eyes of people like them, no matter how good-looking or elegant the courtesan is, it is not worth spending 2,000 taels of silver to buy a brothel girl for a night. A brothel girl who has not yet bloomed can be redeemed for a few hundred taels, and for two thousand taels...
…
Tang Zangyue became a person in their hearts, and even before they saw her face, they defined her as a stupid person with a lot of money.
Zang Yue, a fool from the Tang Dynasty, was lying on her side on the couch enjoying herself, letting other maids squeeze her legs, while Wen Siyue peeled grapes one by one and fed them into her mouth.
She looked at the poor scholar who was polishing ink on the desk and said: "The main thing is the dialogue and scenes of the characters. To promote the plot, just follow the climax points of the original folk tale. The dialogues of the characters should be in vernacular as much as possible, so that ordinary people can
I can also understand and understand the scene, which is reflected in the props and background..."
What she said was that the scripts of later generations were similar. As long as the poor scholar wrote something wonderful and easy to understand, Wen Siyue would be able to accept it soon. After all, this script was the only way she could plan for her future situation, and she could not be sure of it.
, it just depends on Wen Siyue herself.
People can always unleash their unlimited potential in adversity.
"Props?" The poor scholar was puzzled.
Tang Zangyue gave an example: "When Hua Mulan goes to the battlefield, she must have a knife in her hand, right? Does she have to wear armor? Even Zhu Yingtai in Liang Zhuli had to dress up as a man... These are all props and must appear in a scene.
It’s reflected in it.”
"Oh oh oh."
Tang Zangyue continued: "Literati, romantic talents, even people in the market, men and women all yearn for beautiful love, but ordinary, ordinary love is not impressive enough and has to have ups and downs."
"Ups and downs?"
Tang Zangyue frowned slightly, then relaxed for a moment, and said: "Yes, there are ups and downs. For example, Liang Zhu, there is always one person in both men and women who has a low status, which leads to different concepts of family status. The elders in the family object, because the love is too deep, which eventually leads to tragedy
.You can make appropriate changes, as long as the process is pretty much the same."
"...Sir, please tell me how to change it?"
The poor scholar came to Huan Yu Pavilion to make a living for his family. He knew that the man in front of him spent a lot of money. Before meeting him, the poor scholar classified him as a playboy. When he saw him, he was impressed by his magnanimity and novel thinking.
attract.
Only then did the poor scholar realize that he had a narrow mind.
It doesn't matter if a man is romantic, as long as he has talent, he will be respected everywhere.
Tang Zangyue: "If the woman is strong and the man is weak, the sense of substitution is not strong, and it will even lead to a lot of trouble. Then the identities will be exchanged, with Butterfly Lovers as the center, and a human-ghost love affair, a sadistic love triangle will be launched, and it will end tragically.
The ending.”
Not only the poor scholar, but also the maid pinching the leg behind him and Wen Siyue peeling the grapes, and even the well-informed madam also listened with interest.
The poor scholar asked for advice again, and Tang Zangyue was not stingy, saying: "The heroine disguised herself as a man and entered the academy, and she and the hero fell in love with each other. After knowing that they were well matched, they exchanged invitations. They should have lived a happy life, but she fell in love with the second boy at first sight.
Robbery. Due to the huge difference in status and the heroine’s resistance, the second male lead raised her outdoors.”
The poor scholar said indignantly: "This is too much! What happens next?"
"..." Tang Zangyue couldn't say anything when she saw that everyone else was looking at her with keen eyes and looking forward to what would happen next.
Originally, I wanted to bury the beginning like this and leave the follow-up to the poor scholar. Let the other party compile the follow-up by himself and see how strong he is.
never mind.
Tang Zangyue continued: "On the night when she was robbed, the male protagonist wanted to save the female protagonist, but was beaten to death by the men below the second male lead with sticks."
Wen Siyue covered her mouth in shock, and even the maid who pinched her calf also started to slap her.
The madam, who has always been indifferent to human life, also expressed some emotion: "How sad it is for the hero's parents to give away a white-haired person to a black-haired person."
Tang Zangyue: "It was the night of the full moon. The male protagonist was wearing a bright red robe. He wanted to save the female protagonist and elope with her at the same time, which ultimately led to the tragedy. God couldn't stand it anymore and turned the male protagonist into a ghost.
"
Madam: "Are you going back for revenge?"
Tang Zangyue raised his eyelids and said, "Revenge? I'm talking about love, hate, and revenge here. What revenge?"
"Then, the male protagonist has turned into a ghost..."
"The second male protagonist has an extraordinary background. When the male protagonist first became a powerful ghost, he was restricted and could only cause constant nightmares. Later, a Taoist priest was invited to the family and he learned about the existence of the male protagonist. At this time, the female protagonist followed the second male protagonist, and her heart gradually
Following the body, I developed a different feeling for the second male lead, and begged the male lead to let him go..."
Wen Siyue let out a soft cry, and even the madam said angrily: "This heroine, it was in vain that the hero died trying to save her!"
Compared with the angry expressions on other people's faces, Tang Zangyue was very calm and said: "The male protagonist is angry that the female protagonist intercedes for the second male protagonist. The reason... is naturally the same as yours. So the male protagonist hates the female protagonist because of his love.
He did the same thing as the second male lead."
This time, it would be difficult to replace a poor scholar.
Why does it sound more and more outrageous the more I hear it? But...
He was also a little curious about the follow-up development, and like everyone else in the room, he also looked forward to Tang Zangyue continuing to compile it.
Seeing that Tang Zangyue didn't speak for a long time, the madam couldn't bear it anymore and said: "What next?"
Tang Zangyue didn't even blink and said, "What do you think of this plot, Mom?"
"Okay! It's so attractive! Once the stage is set up, it will definitely attract a lot of customers!" Even though she is well-informed, she has never heard of such a love triangle, the relationship between human and ghost is not over, and the heroine is still half-hearted!
Even if a brothel girl sells herself, the price is clearly marked. This heroine is not only sorry for her fiancé, she falls in love with the man who killed her fiancé, and she also has an affair with the ghost fiancé...
The plot is indeed ups and downs and exciting enough.
Tang Zangyue's eyes fell on the poor scholar: "You need to highlight the helplessness of the female protagonist, the strong and domineering male protagonist, the deep love of the male protagonist as a human being and the resentment after turning into a ghost, and the turning point of the dramatic change in temperament. This story
Only then can progress continue.”
The poor scholar probably felt his lifeblood and nodded, "Okay, I understand."
The madam couldn't help but said: "Master, what's next? You're too appetizing."