I really couldn't help it, so I opened a big chapter to explain it briefly, and said something from
In the past few days, many book friends have been quarreling and scolding me about this chapter.
I have been there to persuade and explain. But there are really too many, so I can only open a single chapter to talk about it.
This book of mine is a work of transformation. Everything is crossing the river by feeling the stones. I also know that my writing level is limited, so I have always taken people's opinions into consideration and made changes accordingly.
For example, some book friends said that it is more appropriate to change the name of a disposable Noble Phantasm to a consumable Noble Phantasm.
I thought it was really good, and then I changed it.
For example, some book friends said: The parting of the shadow warrior's inner farewell in Chapter 53 was too awkwardly written.
Although I found it quite touching, I still deleted those few sentences.
For example, some book friends said: The protagonist sat in front of the grave for a long time before going to check the body. It was too intellectual.
I actually didn’t feel very good when I wrote it, but in order to express the protagonist’s sadness, I just wrote it. After it was posted, people mentioned it, and I changed it.
There are also some problems that everyone pointed out and I found that there are indeed problems, but the plot is already like this and there is no way to change it.
For example, people said: The protagonist activates his ability and shouts it out. It’s too embarrassing.
To be honest... maybe I have never written this type of article, so I felt quite passionate when I wrote it. So I wrote it like this.
As a result, everyone said it was awkward. I wanted to change it. But I found that the plot was not coherent, so I had to do this.
This is indeed a question of my ability. I feel sorry for everyone.
There are also some opinions. After seeing them, I actually feel very sad. This is because people did not pay close attention to them or forgot to set them. Here, I will also explain them together.
For example, some book friends questioned why loan sharking was not used to remove the mark.
The loan shark is not a wishing machine. At this stage, it can only increase the amount (which means the protagonist must have it before it can be used), but cannot remove things.
I was even afraid that people wouldn't understand it, so I spent a few hundred words explaining the logic of its use before the plot started (Chapter 51).
For another example, some book friends said that money and items used to repay loan sharks in Chapter 53 are deus ex machina.
You can turn back to Chapter 32 and take a look.
When I gained the ability, I wrote that I could repay it with money and items.
The original words are [Fang Ze can use any money, items, or even "efforts (but no gains)" of equal value to repay the loan.].
So, this was the ability setting from the beginning. It’s really not a deus ex machina.
As for the crystals and money that the protagonist got, in Chapter 30 the female knife brought the gang's grocery store and gave it to Miaomiao, and in Chapter 31 Miaomiao gave it to the protagonist. That's why the gang surrounded the streets to track down Miaomiao's plot.
Another example is the identification ability in the late-night investigation room. Or the ability to "identify extraordinary objects" appears out of thin air.
You can go back and read all the chapters where you gained rewards (Chapter 12, Chapter 18, Chapter 25, Chapter 28, Chapter 34). Only items with extraordinary power will give information in the investigation room.
The only ordinary item I obtained: a porcelain bowl. I deliberately mentioned it in one sentence without writing the information, just to dig this small hole, and then wait until it is revealed that the investigation room has the ability to identify, and give everyone a surprise. (Chapter 40)
Even at the beginning (Chapter 12), I hinted at obtaining ordinary items without any information.
In the next chapter, I also wrote the reason why this logic is established: the investigation room allows the protagonist to sense the emotions of the person under investigation and hear the other party’s inner thoughts. This is actually equivalent to a kind of "appraisal", so we can know
The true information about extraordinary items is actually in line with the capabilities of the entire investigation room.
And there are still some questions about small details.
For example, in Chapter 26, some book friends said how could Bai Zhi analyze so many psychological activities of the protagonist? She couldn't tell even by looking at the micro-expressions.
Because I wrote: Angelica dahurica has a camera, which captured the protagonist’s expression and movements when he spoke. We zoomed in frame by frame for analysis.
For example, in Chapter 41, some people said that if Bai Zhi was really smart, she would be able to detect lies.
In fact, it was recorded. Because she videotaped the whole process and played it backwards to see that the Noble Phantasm was broken when the 26th person was there, which means that 4 people lied before.
For example, in Chapter 53, the pursuers are coming soon. The protagonist is seriously injured, so he takes the ranger away to investigate. Where is the time? Isn't this just a food delivery?
Because I wrote in detail in Chapter 49: After the death of the trio, Jin Hu only found out the news.
Chapter 51 also says: He can only estimate the ranger’s itinerary.
This shows that he judges the success or failure of the mission through the life and death of the members. Therefore, if the ranger is not dead, he at most thinks that the other party has not caught up with the protagonist (after all, he thinks that the protagonist has the awakening ability to escape)
For another example, some book friends previously questioned why the protagonist was not killed when Han Kaiwei was killed?
Because it is written in Chapter 40: The protagonist is Bai Zhi’s last hope in solving the case. With him around, Bai Zhi will not go crazy, and Jin Hu will have time to continue looking for that thing. And the protagonist has lost his memory and will not expose the organization. So there is no need to silence.
For another example, someone asked the organization why Twitch went after a peripheral member.
Because I wrote in Chapter 44: Jin Hu suspected that the thing he was looking for was obtained by the protagonist. The reason is: that thing can awaken people, and can "enlighten" many extraordinary treasures. It is consistent with the protagonist's situation.
And he is not chasing the protagonist, but wants to bring the protagonist back.
As for other doubts, there are some, but they are caused by the fact that the plot has not been written yet.
For example, a few days ago, Jin Hu said: What about sending him there?
As a result, many book friends were arguing, talking about subduing intelligence, talking about miscellaneous soldiers-elites-mini-boss, and kept delivering food to the protagonist. They didn't know how to send experts there.
But in fact, it was explained in the chapter on the second day: a master was sent there...
The ranger, a high-level awakened person, can be comparable to the fusion person in the jungle. Under normal circumstances, the protagonist, a newly awakened person, is 100% unable to hurt him and can be taken away by pure crushing.
For another example, yesterday I wrote about the protagonist being beaten up by a ranger. Some book friends were arguing, saying that the protagonist's abilities were too rubbish.
But after reading today's chapter, you will know that it is not rubbish, but too strong.
So another book friend said that it was going to collapse...
.......
To be honest, I have been a little exhausted physically and mentally these past few days because of the doubts and quarrels in this chapter.
Moreover, the results of our book are not as good as those of my last book. This makes me feel even more tired.
I really want to write a good book, a book that creates a wonderful world, has an interesting and exciting story.
So I prepared it for more than half a year and went through several editions of the outline before I had this book.
It is indeed my first time to write this type of book. I have no experience and the writing is very average. Some of the battle scenes are a bit awkward and the pretense is a bit stiff, but I have been working hard. Every time I write a plot, I
I would constantly read similar plots written by great masters, and then compare them with my own, and then make changes.
So, I'm really trying.
Old readers know that I have a particularly bad mentality. I am particularly susceptible to negative comments. It is also commonly known as a glass heart.
So, I hope everyone can be more tolerant to me.
And because our book has a slight suspense and detective element, if I really bury the story too deeply or write it unclearly.
If you need it, I can also briefly restore the events from God's perspective in each volume, so that everyone can read comfortably.
And open a single chapter to collect everyone’s questions and make a summary.
I can guarantee that I will write the book well to the end, and our book will be a pleasant novel that will not abuse the protagonist. The logic of the big plot can basically be understood and can be found from the foreshadowing.
I really just want to finish writing this book and make my dream come true.
Therefore, I hope you can read our book happily. I hope you can stay with our book until the end. Don’t quarrel or scold me.