Chapter 130 has been overhauled to speed up the plot and make it more compact [An outline of the book is included]
【There will be another chapter updated tonight.】
Seeing that the big guys are quite controversial about the latest chapter 130, I didn’t think about typing all day yesterday, and I couldn’t sleep at night. The pier was bald and one in ten thousand... The ending plot of the first volume is what I started with
I had a good idea, but because my writing skills were not good enough, it caused quite a controversy. So I discussed it with the editor, and finally thought about revising Chapter 130, deleting 6,000 words, leaving only Qi Bo and Yi.
Mr. Yun’s dialogue content, and then I re-coded the 6,000-word plot and replaced the old 6,000-word content.
The plot remains the same before. In fact, the main purpose is to delete the controversial plot, leaving only a thousand words of the dialogue between the master and the servant, and then write the content of chapters 131+132 in advance in chapter 130. So the plot is still the same
I will follow the outline of Chapters 130, 131, and 132 that I originally set. There is no question of whether it will collapse or not, but I will eliminate some of the more controversial details. So it will not affect the previous Chapter 129.
In order to compensate for the mental loss of the big guys, there are 9 days left in this month, 23-31. During these 9 days, I will use 10,000 words of updates every day to make up for the mental loss of the big guys. This can only be used to make up for the loss of the big guys.
I'm sorry for the losses caused by the bosses. If I can't finish it on any day, I will send out a "233" red envelope in the v group. If I can't finish it once, I will give out a 233 red envelope...
In order to save my breakfast money for N+233 days, I will fight to my death to complete the daily update target of 10,000 words QAQ...
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Well, Chapter 130 was 7k words before modification, and after modification it was more than 7K words. The number of words is not less at all. I don’t dare to cheat the big book friends in terms of money. Chapter 130 is about the dialogue between master and servant.
A thousand words, the remaining 6K are brand new content (I originally wrote the plot of 131+132 chapters).
Chapters 131+132 were condensed into 130 chapters in advance. In fact, the plot of Chapter 130 becomes more compact and better to watch. The new Chapter 130 is really good to watch. If it doesn’t look good, the bosses will use barrage to call me a bad author!
I know that this is almost equivalent to tearing it down and rewriting it. It is very disappointing that it has just been released in the new book issue, but I also admit that my writing skills are not enough and I have not written the plot content I set up at the beginning. I can already foresee this wave of rewriting.
, there will be many big guys scolding the seller for removing the book and turning off the automatic subscription. Then the big guys think about it and open the book review area in frustration, scolding this bad author for failing to live up to expectations and losing popularity, and he is angry and angry.
, it hurt the feelings of book friends. Then the book’s performance failed, and it failed to recover. It collapsed and sank into the Mariana Trench QAQ...
But I didn’t think about typing all day yesterday, and I tossed and turned at night and couldn’t sleep. Finally, I decided to embark on this path of no return and insert ads again. The new chapter 130 is really good to read.
In fact, the old content of Chapter 130 does not say whether it has collapsed or not, because everything is following the outline set at the beginning. Then I will fill in all the holes in Chapter 130 in Chapter 131. I will replace the original Chapter 131
The content to be written in the chapter is listed in an outline for the bosses:
Chapter 131: Building a platform of merit and virtue! Seeing off Mr. Jin An from ten miles away!
Not long after Jin An left Xiba Village, the old Taoist priest and Shayang also broke out of the coffin. As mentioned before, the cemetery in Xiba Village is a small earthen bag, so it is not difficult for ordinary people to break out of the coffin.
After the old Taoist priest and Shayang emerged from the ground, they also saw the coffin left by La Jin'an. Just before dark, Jin'an left Chang County and returned to Xiba Village, where they reunited with the old Taoist priest and Shayang.
Then Jin An learned why they were buried in the coffin. The old Taoist priest said that it was because Jin An was too tired and fell asleep and did not wake up before dawn, so the big-headed old man took the black coffin and left first, and explained everything clearly before leaving.
, Changxian County is a large-scale dungeon. Anyone who enters Changxian County will encounter a large-scale Ghost Wall (Ghost City). Everyone in the Ghost Wall has an independent plot.
If you fail to clear the level, you will die in the ghost wall. If you clear the level, you will be sent out of Chang County, that is, you will wake up from the coffin (meaning that these dead souls are eager to be resurrected from the dead).
And Da Meili really wants to kill her old body.
However, there were originally two ghost places, but because both places involved clues to the polygon, the Changxian ghost domain intentionally spread to the coffin temple (thousands of dead souls wanted to use the polygon to resurrect), which led to even
The beautiful old body was also involved in this whirlpool.
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Then, Jin An and the old Taoist priest planned to stay one night in Xiba Village, a deserted village, and leave the next day. As a result, the outside of Xiba Village was very lively at night, densely packed with people. It turned out that the souls of the dead from Chang County traveled ten miles to say goodbye, which had a great impact on them.
Jin An, the great kindness.
Changxian is no longer an ordinary ghost, but has grown into a very powerful ghost realm that can affect dozens of miles. Therefore, even the Five Thunder Evil Slaying Talisman was not able to see through the reason, because Brother Fu only sealed it three times and returned it.
You cannot ignore everything every second.
Jin An met many acquaintances among these dead souls. Everyone expressed their gratitude to Jin An and sent their own fruits to Jin An. Jin An did not dare to accept them at first, fearing that they were mice or horse urine. The owner of the mutton restaurant said
, the mutton they eat is the fruit that grows in their own backyard, and is transformed into mutton in the ghost wall. The owner of the medicine shop said that the medicines Jin An takes are all real. Chang County is backed by hundreds of thousands of mountains, and there are many medicinal materials.
Yes, they did not harm Jin An and the old Taoist priest, because Jin An and the old Taoist priest were good people who helped them from the beginning. Their resentment and obsession were just because no one took action to save them in the first place, so Jin An and the old Taoist priest's
Appearing to relieve some of their resentment.
Just like the Five Zang Taoists had helped these dead souls back then, so they did not harm the goats, and the goats were kept eating fruits.
As long as you help these dead souls, although you will not be harmed, you will not be able to get out of the ghost wall. You will always think that you are living in the world of normal people and interact with them in the story until you die in the ghost wall. Because ghosts are also lonely.
I want to find someone to accompany me.
If you can help them clear the dungeon, the dungeon will be released.
Jin'an, the old Taoist priest, Goat, Mr. Yiyun, and the beautiful lady are all people who have passed the level for the first time. Especially Jin'an, he has solved crimes in Chang County one after another, interacted deeply with these evil ghosts, and even became the one who broke the situation, gained more favor, and solved the problem.
These fierce ghosts have a lot of grievances and great merits. The old Taoist priest said that there is more hope for Jin'an to build a golden body with merit.
Finally, Jin An was about to leave Chang County, but there was no boat. Tens of thousands of old boatmen in Li Guili personally built a boat for Jin An and sent Jin An and his party away.
Look at everyone, from now on Chang County will be Jin'an's home, Jin'an's safe haven, and Jin'an's family elders.
And the elders in the family are the best at protecting the calf.
After Jin An left the road to the state capital, these tens of thousands of ghosts returned to Chang County and built a merit platform for Jin An. They also wrote down all the merits of Jin An for saving a cat and a dog in Chang County.
Being grateful to Jinan every night is creating merit in Tai Lat.
Shortly after Jin An left Chang County by boat, he rescued the seriously injured Thief Master in the water (which happened to be the ending plot of the new chapter 130).
The yellow talisman, the tiger evil sword, and the exercises that Jin'an had enshrined were all real, and they were all taken out of the ghost realm...
The little fan boy of the big guys who always cries and sheds three tears remains.