Recently, many enthusiastic readers in book circles have pointed out many shortcomings of this novel.
Here, I would like to make it clear that I will delete some extreme comments directly. It is not that I am arbitrary, but that I am afraid of affecting the senses of new readers and causing a decrease in subscriptions.
After all, this book is still a commercial novel. I am not high-minded and want to eat, so I will delete it.
I always hope that book friends who have specific suggestions and ideas can respond to the QQ group. I will also stay in the book friend circle to reply directly to neutral comments.
Sometimes it’s not that I don’t want to write well, it’s that I can’t do it. I graduated from a full-time technical secondary school, and all other diplomas are from a late-night university. I am semi-literate.
This book has 2 million words. Many of the contents are beyond my control. I am sorry for my lack of writing skills.
Finally, I sigh, this book has experienced two turbulences. One was when he cut his face and took an oath, and the other was when Terutora Uesugi was set as a male.
The first time, I was scolded by my book friends. The second time, I didn’t dare to write it down at all. I was persuaded in the QQ group.
Many people feel that the sense of separation between the Kyoto chapter and the Kanto chapter comes from this, because the outline has been revised.
I have stressed many times with my book friends that it’s not that I don’t listen to advice, it’s that I can’t do it. It’s hard to agree with others, let alone a novel with two million words.
It's not that if I say something that makes sense, I can change it to everyone's satisfaction. I am only semi-literate, and my writing power does not allow me to let go, so I can only follow the designed outline.
Finally, I want to say that the performance of this book has hit rock bottom. The reason why I still insist on writing it is for the book friends who still insist on reading.
For those who have left, I understand your disappointment. But I care more about those book friends who insist on supporting me even though they know that the plot is becoming less and less effective.
Commercial novels also have principles. If book friends pay for it, I have to finish it. If they pay for the book, I have to present the story completely.
I don’t want to say anything lofty, it’s just my explanation to my book friends, nothing more.
Finally, bow and thank you.
PS: I hope to seek common ground while reserving differences with all the book friends. I delete the messages in the book friend circle just for eating, and for no other reason. If you have any opinions, you can come to the QQ group to discuss, I am very willing to communicate.