I have finished writing the book now, and the ending is not perfect, but I still want to say something after finishing the book. The main purpose is to mark myself and summarize the shortcomings and advantages of the book... forget it, I am not very good at it.
Look for your own strengths, maybe there really aren’t any.
First of all, the golden finger at the beginning is actually a big failure. This kind of golden finger is destined to be impossible to develop for a long time and will definitely collapse in the mid-term. I didn't realize it at the time. I was really stupid.
Secondly, the collapse of the power system seems inevitable now. In fact, this problem also existed in the previous book, but no matter how exaggerated the previous book was, it was still a mortal. I did not set the power system before opening the book, so many people
The place couldn't justify itself. At first I thought it wasn't important, as long as the story was fine, but when I started writing it I realized that the setting of the power system was also very important.
Even though patches have been added, the power system is broken throughout the book.
Take the city-protecting green energy as an example. I won’t say how good this setting is, but if it was there from the beginning, it would be smoother and many scenes would be more reasonable. In fact, until the completion of the book, my strength
The system is actually fragmented
In terms of plot, the biggest problem may be that Cao Cao was not handled properly twice. The first time, there was actually no need to follow him to Nanyang and just wait in Xuchang. This made the climax not come after all the expectations were raised.
I wrote it earlier, and the second time it was possible to fight back and forth and finally eliminate it. There are many other bugs, big and small, but the biggest point is actually the Xuchang section and the Cao Cao section. Many things were brought out before they were fully demonstrated, such as
When Qi Men Dun Jia blocked Lu Bu, it must have seemed very abrupt at the time. If the settings of Qi Men had been made before, perhaps this feeling of abruptness would be much less.
It was reasonable for everyone to complain at that time. It was not a matter of right or wrong, but something that was in my mind. It was not shown. The sudden feeling was there. This is a sign of the writer's inadequate skills.
As for the recent typos, didn't I repair my computer a few days ago? After reinstalling the system, that's it. Some of them were corrected, and some were not.
In addition, I’m sorry that I didn’t add more as promised. The Chinese New Year is early this year, so I finished early. With the current epidemic situation, I hope all readers will be safe and healthy through this new year. Thank you all for your support over the past year.