I mentioned before when I wrote about Dragon Line 2 that before I had thought about the ending of Dragon Line 2, I had thought about the ending of Dragon Line 3. This is the finale of version 1.0.
This is my outline, but I conceived a few pictures when I was writing this book. As I said before, I came here to draw the emotional line between Chu and Xia. To be more precise, I came up with these pictures.
One of them is what Lu Mingze said to Lu Mingfei in the previous chapter.
This paragraph was originally supposed to be at the end.
The results on the shelves were quite poor, but I still said that I would write the ending of Dragon 3, so I put the finale at the end of Dragon 3.
"Treading on the Stars"
In the originally conceived ending, Lu Mingfei returned to the supreme position, but it was not Lu Mingfei who returned, but the Lord of Heaven who once overlooked the world. He was so powerful and perfect that even if he did not devour his younger brother, he would still be there.
It is a supreme-level creature.
At this point, the catastrophe of the cycle of the Fifth Solar Era has arrived.
Everyone is trying to defeat him and get back the Lu Mingfei they know.
How can the king of heaven, who can overlook the world, be resisted by ordinary people?
At this moment, Lu Mingze walked out.
He said brother, actually that girl remembered you from the beginning, she thought of you before you met for the second time.
She watched you do exactly the same thing as last time, and fell in love with you again.
that moment.
Lu Mingfei's soul irresistibly awakened from the body of the Lord of Heaven.
What other power can stop a boy who is filled with both sadness and joy?
No.
Even if the god appears in this world, he will subvert the throne of the god for the girl he loves.
The emotional lines of Chu Xia and Lu Hui are different.
What I arranged for Chu Xia was to "make things happen", so before they met, Dawn Rises had six chapters (dog head). Strictly speaking, these six chapters were for them to truly realize what they wanted, and to write the ending.
In fact, I felt that it was too smooth. I had arranged so many reasons for them to be together, and it was just natural and logical. So I specially added the scene of Duan Lu Mingfei's awakening, which can be regarded as a small explosive point...
But Lu Hui is different. The highlight of Lu Hui is when Lu Mingze said to Lu Mingfei:
Brother, that girl has remembered you from the beginning. She knew your story would be a tragedy, but she still couldn't help but fall in love with you.
God, what kind of love is this? How can they not be together?
This is the finale of version 1.0, ending with Lu Hui’s emotional line.
But in the subsequent process, I added too many secondary settings. If it ended in the third line of the dragon, it would be difficult to finish these secondary settings, and I realized that I had overlooked a person, a character that spans the entire book.
Lu Mingze.
So after the end of Dragon 3, there will be another volume in which the protagonists are the brothers Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze.
The Dragon Clan starts with these brothers, and should also end with them.
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In addition, some explanations are given below for some of the second assumptions.
Yesterday's chapter "The Lord of Bronze and Fire" made it quite obvious.
God created Behemoth Leviathan and Sheeds respectively, representing the earth, sea and sky respectively, and they will become the food of the holy ones.
Finally, God also created humans.
Humans held high torches and used the light and heat of the flames to drive away the herds of beasts in the forest. They used bronze as a base to build shelters and forge weapons, starting endless wars.
In the Dragon Clan, the sky represents divine power, the earth represents royal power, and bronze and fire represent war.
He is described as the dragon that most resembles the Black King, and is also known as the "Grey King". In the Second Sun Age, God created creatures called humans based on himself.
In the Second Solar Age, human beings were "bronze and fire".
One thing that must be mentioned is that there are actually a lot of information on how to build the world view of the Dragon Clan on the Internet.
A large number of experts on Tieba Zhihu have long written many analysis posts, including analysis of Lu Mingfei as the Holy Spirit from the Bible, or the World Tree based on Nordic mythology, and the clone Zero of the man-made ultimate hybrid Black King.
etc……
But the second set of this book should be considered the only one in the entire Internet, right?
emmmm, anyway, I haven’t seen anyone write an analysis post about the worldview that is similar to mine.
Starting from the time when Lu Mingze was Nidhogg, Lu Mingfei was Vidfornir, and the one who instigated the break between the two was the second Black King Ratatosk, and then on to the subsequent Five Sun Epochs.
By the way -
In Norse mythology, Vidfolnir is the eagle or rooster in the crown of the world tree, and Nidhogg is the black dragon at the root of the tree. One of them is at the highest point, and the other is at the lowest point.
Ratatosk is a squirrel that wanders between the tree crowns and roots all year round. He goes back and forth between the tree tops and tree roots all day long, telling gossip to Vidfornir and Nidhogg, causing a conflict between the eagle and the poisonous dragon.
suspicion between them and sow discord between them.
Lu Mingfei, Lu Mingze and the second-generation Black King are based on this kind of relationship.
Of course, Lu Mingfei is not an eagle or a rooster.
Ratatosk is not a squirrel either.
There is no so-called World Tree in the Fifth Solar Age.
As I said before, this is just a metaphor. It is Odin's method. He smeared them on the basis of preserving history. This method is normal. This is how any monarch treats the king of the previous dynasty.
When building the world view of the second world of this book, I referred to the analysis posts of elders, but in the end I gave up and did not adopt it because I thought it was too limited, and everyone should have read it.
You can guess how boring this is.
So I simply based it on the solar era predicted by the Mayans and completely improved the world view of the Dragon Clan.
Under normal circumstances, the old thief will definitely not build a world view like my book, because it is too big.
The only thing I worry about with this kind of worldview is that some readers will feel that it is "jumping", so I usually write as much as possible and do not spend a lot of pen and ink describing the stories of the first few solar eras, and there is no need.
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One last thing to say.
The house is built on the basis of the original work. The old thieves have designated one-third of an acre of land, and I just built a thatched house on it, but the foundation is still the same as the old thieves.
In many places, the reason why you think my writing is beautiful is precisely because the old thief wrote it with "good intentions".