Unknowingly, it has been a year since Lao Mo wrote this book. This year has been filled with many emotions. With the end of the third volume, I would like to express my deepest feelings to you readers.
Becoming an online writer is something that Lao Mo never thought of before. Writing the book "Wanli Xinming" has given Lao Mo a lot.
First, it is the huge increase in historical knowledge. Before writing, Lao Mo only knew the general outline of history and did not understand the details. After writing books and consulting information, a Wanli Dynasty was gradually sketched in his mind. The biggest feeling is: It turns out that today
People may not be like the ancients. The second feeling is: all history is modern history; the final feeling is: the ancients are not historical records, but the living things that once experienced joys and sorrows on this land.
Second, I have made a lot of good friends. In the past, Lao Mo even expressed his gratitude in his writer's speech, but as time went by, he felt that this was not enough to express his gratitude. This emotion has gone through several stages, the first one
In the second stage, I feel that many readers are not close friends with Lao Mo. In the third stage, this emotion breaks through the dimensional wall and I feel that everyone is the same as my real friends.
, with different personalities and lively; now is the fourth stage: I have discovered a lot of true love.
Third, Lao Mo's ability to withstand stress has been greatly improved. Writing books was a hobby, during which it became a job, and now it has become the calmness (or resignation) of a middle-aged man who realizes his own limits. He still broke through the dimensional wall.
, there is a sense of reality. Readers who do not write books (Lao Mo used to be the same) find it difficult to feel this feeling. Lao Mo often looks at the content he has written before, and for a long time he has a sense of unreality. This book
Did I really write it?
After summing up the harvest, let’s talk about the book. If Lao Mo re-wrote this book, it would be much better than it is now. In the early stage, I broke away from reality and quickly advanced the plot. In the middle stage, I lost touch with the outline because of worries about gains and losses. I almost collapsed in writing, but later I finally sorted it out.
, but the readability is greatly reduced.
It wasn't until this month that Mo found the feeling of telling stories instead of writing papers. Mo is a standard science student who loves literature, history and philosophy. This experience is very precious to me. At least now I can write new chapters.
At that time, I had a deep understanding of the word "abandonment".
For example, in Lao Mo's outline, he wanted to write a chapter about the processing of wool products or dairy products to solve the economic problems of the grasslands and the Western Regions. But then he found that this kind of thing can be explained in one sentence, and the really interesting thing is Zhengzhi.
The description of Zhengji was originally intended to express some insights. Climbing the technological tree to enhance national power was supposed to serve this main purpose. However, due to the limitations of writing power and lack of knowledge, both ends were not written well.
The "Second Volume" of this book was particularly unsightly. I read it over and over again, and I felt that it was because Lao Mo had not written the inner palace well. Zhang Hong's assassination of the emperor should have been foreshadowed in a few chapters, but I was depressed at that time, so I couldn't write the book.
The incident was mixed with other things, confusing Lao Mo's thinking. Coupled with the readers' aversion to the inner palace plot, Lao Mo was at a loss. Many plots in the outline were not included, and the result was such a very abrupt plot.
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The character of Empress Dowager Li had many stories in Lao Mo's original plot arrangement - for details, please see several edicts in the chapter "Return to the Palace". But because Lao Mo strayed from the outline and rambled, he lost his hair at the expense
, not to mention the costs such as eye disease, various plot arrangements were out of line, and the character was basically useless.
These are Lao Mo's lessons. I believe there will be a big change in Lao Mo's next volume.
The third volume is generally quite satisfactory, and I have found a sense of telling a story. This volume was originally planned to have 100 chapters - at least 90 chapters. However, the two previously blocked chapters made Lao Mo furious. If he really
After writing those thirty chapters, I'm afraid the book will be finished.
Therefore, there is probably a plot that was originally planned to be 50,000 words, but Lao Mo deleted it from the outline - if it were written, I would have to write it all the way to the other end of the Wakhan Corridor, sorting out the entire north. Because during this time period, where
There is no strong force, and Chinese civilization always needs to be bordered by Persian civilization to promote the development of subsequent plots.
So having Cena - the peony flower on the grassland is a little tribute to the understanding of "abandonment".
Lao Mo wrote the above paragraph not to complain, but to express his understanding. We are now under greater pressure than we have ever seen since the reform, and the struggle situation is surprisingly complex. Although some missionaries have been defeated from the high ground of public opinion,
What they hide makes them more troublesome. Therefore, as an Internet writer and dear readers - at least we must not add confusion and understand more.
Finally, please look forward to Lao Mo's fourth volume after a short period of revision, and please continue to support "Wanli Xinming", thank you!