First of all, let me end this question here. Although it is indeed a bit rushed, it is indeed within the outline.
The original plan was to spend two to three chapters writing about the final battle. But I thought about it and finally gave up.
This can be considered an experience I have gained over the years of writing books.
I also like to read historical texts, and my second brother’s books are my favorite. Over the years, I have come to a conclusion by reading other people’s books and my own personal experience.
Try not to describe such large-scale war scenes head-on.
First of all, it’s difficult to write. The more grand the scene, the more difficult it is to write. That’s for sure.
Secondly, the tone of the battlefield in ancient times is bloody and cruel. The protagonist is not yet at the level of being unparalleled in the midst of thousands of armies, so it is difficult to grasp the coolness.
I learned a painful lesson in my last book.
In the first volume, the protagonist group fought their way back from the desert to Chang'an. There were no large-scale battle scenes.
All are small-scale fights between the protagonist and the group, bringing the protagonist's personal abilities to the extreme.
And that volume was also very popular, with orders reaching around 13,000. That’s right, 13,000!!!
But later on, when the protagonist took control of the court and began to organize the world, his popularity dropped significantly.
I thought this was because I didn't have an outline. Because I didn't plan to write that volume at the beginning. So I ended that volume and started a new one.
But after opening the new volume, I was still unconvinced, so I directly gave the protagonist a high, and started from the general trend. As a result, the popularity plummeted again. The average order was more than 10,000, and the price dropped to more than 4,000. It plummeted like a cliff!!!
Since then, I have thought about this issue repeatedly and finally came to a result.
Before my writing power reaches the level where I can do whatever I want, I still have to write about people.
Simply put, you should write around the protagonist. With the protagonist as the core, use the protagonist’s experience and evolution to promote the plot.
After all, this story is a story about people. Naturally, the focus should be on people. So I began to try to use more words to create a protagonist.
I don’t want more, I just want one protagonist. I don’t know if you have noticed that in the first half of the first volume, apart from the characters in the movie, there is only one character with a name, Lao Diao. And Lao Diao can only be regarded as a
title.
Even the heroine, that is, the girl has no name. Lee Guangyin and Li Guangwu came up with it for the ending in the later stage.
I know that my writing power is limited, so this time I have to use my limited writing power more on the protagonist.
The several protagonists I created before this were all mentally strong, strong-willed, and even tended to be indifferent and ruthless.
For example, Lin Xuan, Shen Yi, Gu Cheng, and Su Yuan were a little better when it came to Lu Xuan. However, there were not many characterizations of the characters. This led me to read a lot of books, but it was difficult to leave a deep impression on others.
.This is also a common problem of unlimited flow.
This time, I am trying to create a more flesh-and-blood character. I hope everyone can remember this character and this book.
Finally, the next volume is about Xiuchundao. Yes, it is the copy of my last book whose reputation plummeted. I rarely write about repeated worlds, and rarely write about anything except Game of Thrones. But this time is an exception.
Because I'm still not convinced, I wrote this copy again.
