The second volume [The Moon of Illusion] is finally finished. It really took a lot of effort!
After confirming it several times, I feel... quite satisfied!
In fact, there are some slight flaws in the first few scripts. If I were to give them a score, I could only give them 70-80 points. Time is really tight, and the pressure of serialization is unprecedented, which leads to some details being slightly off.
The connection between the scripts is not very good either.
The level of detail in the different world is also a little bit poor, a little less full!
But the last article "Paradise" has a total of more than 70,000 words. I am still very satisfied with it and can give it a score of 90 or above!
It is really difficult to write all the clues of the previous copies and hundreds of thousands of words in series. The most important thing is to write it wonderfully. After all, it is the final climax. If it is not wonderful, how can it be worth the foreshadowing of hundreds of thousands of words?
Fortunately, it did!
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1.Satisfied!
2. Not satisfied!
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But the problem comes again. This way of writing consumes too much money on the author.
The way of throwing out clues at the beginning and then connecting the clues in series is actually a way of writing a script.
An excellent script can only produce 60,000 to 70,000 words a year (roughly the same in the industry).
If you are more narcissistic, you can use the Qingtian Hospital chapter and the Paradise chapter as scripts.
(Has anyone bought the copyright? It is estimated that you can get the copyright for tens of thousands of yuan, which is very cheap!)
All in all, this book consumes so much energy that the daily update volume is less than 6,000 words.
What's more, this way of writing is thankless.
There are really too many people who keep books (and give them up). I have already ordered 16,000 high-end books. I only have more than 1,000 readings. At the lowest point, I only had 1,010. Now I have reached the climax of writing and it is only 1,600. It is really too much.
Pulled the crotch.
(Actually, I always thought this book was pretty well written.)
Every time a new dungeon is opened, the subscription will be cut in half. This is not a collapse, but as soon as a new dungeon is opened, the second chapter will be cut in half. This can only be attributed to "keeping books".
Keep it, keep it, and then throw it away.
Since writing the book, I have never seen such miraculous signs of large-scale book cultivation.
This way of writing makes the experience of chasing books really bad.
So your journey of weird rules ends here. Now I’m going to change the writing method. I found some interesting ideas, I hope they will be effective.
There is still a lot of interesting content to come, the "Internet Cafe" has another incompetent and furious customer, and the story of prehistoric civilization is not over yet.
As per the old rules, we have a day off tomorrow (salted fish, salted fish)!
Happy Mid-Autumn Festival to everyone!
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Regarding the paradise chapter, a lot of content has been left blank, and there are many notes and no detailed descriptions.
Mr. Xiang Hao's layout was not very clear.
I’m not going to explain it clearly here, it’s better to leave some blank space.
1, [There are no children here, disorderly entertainment is common here, but no children are born. Women cannot give birth to new lives, they don’t need and don’t care.]
【I need to be more vigilant.】
[There is no mirror, even in the bathroom, there is no mirror. But the camera of the mobile phone can be used.]
[I made a mirror with mercury and looked at myself, but nothing happened...]
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2,【...He is the wisest person I have ever met. His purpose of coming here is different from ours.】
[I asked him, what exactly is paradise? He avoided answering and might die if he explored the truth.]
[While pursuing me, he told me an interesting story.]
[An old lady in a certain family died unexpectedly. The old man worked until late at night before falling asleep. When he woke up the next day, he found that there was already a hot breakfast in the kitchen. It was his favorite egg-filled pancake. He quickly asked who made it.
During breakfast, the children all shook their heads. The old man suddenly squatted down with tears in his eyes.]
[After asking, I learned that after getting married, the old lady got up early every day, made breakfast, and then went to the fields to work...for so many years, without interruption. 】
[...The old man was looking for life and death, and wanted to pursue the old lady. At this time, the village chief, who was somewhat knowledgeable, stood at the door and said faintly, "The one who cooks for you is not your old lady."]
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3,【...If everyone is a saint, we can achieve success easily. It is too greedy, and sacrifice can really weaken it.】
[But obviously, human nature is self-interested and selfish, heroes are always in the minority, and that kind of plan is impossible to realize. Therefore, we failed in the past.]
【We came here and modified the plan.】
[It is not a bad thing to let the power of the evil soil extend out.]
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4,【It observes humans, manipulates humans, and plunges people into the abyss of desire.】
[That is an extremely terrifying black hole. Once you fall into it, you will be completely destroyed and will never be reincarnated. 】
[However, it still doesn’t understand humans. It doesn’t know that human desires cannot be fully satisfied. 】