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I don’t know what to say to a newbie, it’s inevitable that I’ll be a little nervous for the first time…
Let me use what I said before, if it can be completed, it will be considered a success. If there is no pigeon, it will be completed, hahaha!
As I said before, this book was actually intended to open up other worlds in the middle, and Yihao Clone was prepared for this. However, due to performance reasons, it did not follow the outline, which is a pity.
I have also seen some readers strongly suggesting that other worlds can be opened after the end of One Piece. Otherwise, the origin of the system and Yun Ye is not explained clearly, and it will be considered unfinished...
I don't know what to say about this. It's up to the beholder. Whether it's considered a mess or not is up to you.
I personally don’t think it’s a bad ending, because Pirates has filled in all the pits it buried (if there are still unfilled pits, it’s probably not that important), and it also gave the final battle, Im’s final
Purpose explained...
Everything that can be explained has been explained. Whether it makes sense or not depends on the readers’ understanding!
There are more than 200 people who have read this book in 24 hours, thank you in advance!
Except for one reader who mentioned the origin of Zhu Zi and the protagonist, no one said it was a bad ending.
Maybe most people who read books don’t like comments. It can be seen from the dozens of comments in the comment area...
I almost never delete comments other than advertisements, but there are only a few dozen...
Although it does leave a bit of suspense in this aspect, it has already been mentioned that the bead is the "origin" of the Shinigami world, so let's treat it as an open ending!
Or maybe I can explain it in the next book~~
Back to the topic.
That's about combat power. Well, except for what someone mentioned earlier, this is also about the ability of the various Zanpakutōs, and the various path-breaking abilities are not as strong as they think. Later,
No one mentioned the topic of the collapse of combat power. I think the arrangements for combat power should be pretty good, right?
Some say that the combat power increases too quickly, while others say that it increases too slowly... (scratches head)
After all, comparing combat prowess in different worlds is just trying to be a hooligan. I think I’m pretty good at this, well, I feel like it. (Guilty)
Another point is that the Vinsmoke plot in the early stage does have some problems now. It would be more reasonable to hit it a few times before subduing it. In this regard, it is really unreasonable to stand up and get beaten without explanation... (
stand at attention and receive a beating)
As for why Vinsmoke's emotionless sons are afraid of the protagonist, this was later patched. Like those giant Neptunes, their souls with incomplete emotions are different from others, so they can more or less detect the soul of the protagonist.
The exception is considered a patch.
Another somewhat controversial aspect is the plot of Uta. Some people think that the dead are resurrected through the dream world, which is a bit ridiculous and even inexplicable.
At that time, a reader who kept reading and often left comments about this chapter mentioned it, saying it was a mess...
I didn’t dare to reply because I felt guilty, so I would like to apologize, hahaha.
However, I didn’t think that part of the plot was unreasonable, and there was an explanation. Devil fruits are inherently unreasonable anyway. As the saying goes, it’s a matter of opinion. It’s impossible for everyone to like every plot.
As an aside, this resurrection of the dead was originally intended to be used by Im's ability. The Life Fruit can use the [Seed of Life] to briefly resurrect the former strong man, which is comparable to the ability of the residual fire sword.
The purpose of resurrecting the souls who died under the sword is to make the final battle bigger.
But after thinking about it later, I realized that the swastika is so powerful that it would be ridiculous to compare it with its combat power!
From the beginning, Ryūren Wakahuo was written to be too strong. It could overwhelm the general at the beginning, and the proficiency level was 100 swastika. If it couldn't overwhelm it, it was a little unreasonable, so I changed it.
The proficiency level of the swastika sword here is 80, which is comparable to that of Mr. Yamamoto thousands of years ago. The proficiency level of 100 is enough to destroy the world.
Although Mr. Yamamoto was strong thousands of years ago, the temperature of the flames did not reach a level that could destroy the world. This was mentioned in the original work of Death.
Thousands of years ago, it was called [Sword of Fire]?
As for the Quincy's abilities, I haven't written them down, because most of them are law-based. In the world of One Piece, which focuses on physical strength, ability, and melee combat, it's a little too inconsistent. And I feel that I don't have the ability to write it well, so I can't.
Write it out.
And why not write Blackbeard to death from the beginning? This was originally foreshadowed. The predecessor of the Dark Fruit, the Black Hole Fruit, was set up like this. I originally wanted Blackbeard to explode later, but I saw that there was
Many people didn't like him, so they asked him to leave the show early...
Fortunately, it didn't have much impact on the outline, and it kept following a line.
Another point, some readers have mentioned that in the early stage, it seemed like I was watching a fantasy, and some of the terms were also used in fantasy. I also realized that, and I paid attention to it when I wrote it later. It should be changed to some extent, right?
I can't really see it myself. If there are changes, please tell me and give me some confidence...
Well, there’s nothing more to say, so thank you again to all the readers who have subscribed to this book!
Special thanks to the readers who have been reading the votes. Although this book has many flaws, I am lucky enough to have you continue to read it. Thank you very much!!
PS: The next book has already passed internal submission. If you still like my style of pretentious fan fiction, please save it when the book is released!
It's a Naruto fanfic. It's a different story, but it's not the same world as pretentiousness. However, one book is finished. Maybe the next one will have better experience and better writing?
I'm not sure about this, hahaha, newbies are always trepidatious.
But again, as long as the minimum requirements are met and all orders are over 500, there will be no eunuchs, and I will keep writing.
After a few or ten days of rest, I will publish the book and prepare the outline first.
Well, that’s it, tomorrow’s weekend, I wish readers a happy weekend!