I wrote this chapter today and read the original novel again. Regarding the incident between Li Qiushui and Tianshan Child Elder Wu Yazi, I felt that the writing of this chapter was unsatisfactory. The plot direction was a bit too taken for granted and I couldn't convince myself.
I have to overturn and rewrite it. I'll read it tomorrow.
Admittedly, I saw someone commenting that I wrote about water and that it was a "deacon" sign, so I obviously kept looking at it.
I don’t quite understand what the water in your mouth is, or why it’s not called water. Maybe I’m just like other authors, killing, killing, killing, etc., because it feels so good.
If so, I do have enough water!
When I write fan fiction, I have one point of view, that is, it conforms to the character of the original work, and the event line follows the general framework of the original work.
For example, the Xingzilin Incident and the Battle of Juxian Village are more than two years behind Xu Zhu and even Tong Lao. I will not be like others and take advantage of the popularity of the Juxian Village plot, followed immediately by the Leigu Mountain plot and Tianshan Tong Lao.
Plot, give yourself a lot of cheats.
The most important Wu Yazi is that two years after the Xingzilin Juxian Village incident, he was only ninety-three years old. The deadline has come, and Ding Chunqiu and other masters are outside. He has no time to teach Xu Zhu Kungfu, so he can only ask him to go find Xu Zhu with his paintings.
Li Qiushui.
Some people resorted to trickery and immediately rushed to Leigu Mountain after the incident at Juxian Village. However, Wu Yazi still said that his time was approaching and taught him internal strength, and asked him to go to Li Qiu Shui and the Tianshan Child Elder to teach him martial arts.
Haha... Wu Yazi will never let his descendants find the Tianshan Child Elder. He doesn't even understand the reason. It's too stupid and disgusting!
Wu Yazi abandoned Tong Lao and fell in love with Li Qiu Shui. Later, it was Tong Lao who said that Li Qiu Shui was having an affair with Ding Chunqiu.
As a result, Wu Yazi failed to deal with the enemy, but was plotted by the other party. Let me ask, would a person as proud and arrogant as Wu Yazi ask the descendant to find the Tianshan Child Elder?
He already felt guilty towards Tianshan Child Lao, and yet the other party found out that he was a cuckold. He didn't feel embarrassed?
So Wu Yazi never mentioned the Tianshan Child Elder to Xu Zhu at all, let alone wanted to use her hand to kill Ding Chunqiu!
This is one person's arrogance!
We are all ordinary people. If we abandon a woman who loves us when we are prosperous, we will probably not go to her when we are down, right?
Is it this way?
Jin Yong understands human nature very well!
To be honest, I just want to be shameless, ignore this timeline, and ride on this popularity. This is also the highlight moment of the original protagonists Qiao Feng and Xu Zhu. Can we write about Jin Yong and others?
Isn’t that overestimating one’s capabilities?
And I won’t completely change the character of the original character, or I won’t be able to write a character who has strayed from the original character.
Moreover, fan fiction actually reaps the dividends from the author of the original work.
It is because Jin Yong is famous that people can read the fan fiction, so the plot can be changed, but the character of the characters written by him must not be changed!
This is the most basic morality.
For example, Qiao Feng is a hero who doesn't know what danger is, and he dares to take action when faced with adversity.
I can also avoid the plot of Qiao Feng’s death in this book because of his popularity, it’s not that I don’t understand it!
But when the plot reaches that point, he has to go offline!
Although Qiao Feng is powerful, the current protagonist is also a once-in-a-lifetime hero with a ruthless personality and a weird temper!
You are not afraid of me, and I am not afraid of you either!
No stakes involved, hello, me, hello everyone!
But his and Qiao Feng's cognitive concepts are fundamentally different. Let's just say Bao Bu is different. Qiao Feng thinks Bao Bu is cool and elegant, not afraid of power, and a man in his own right.
The protagonist thinks that he has never been beaten before, that he is weak and does not fear the strong, and that he is looking for death because of his talk regardless of the target!
You said, is Qiao Feng wrong, or is the protagonist wrong?
They're all right, it's just that everyone has different personalities.
Some people also say that the protagonist's martial arts is so powerful, and Qiao Feng has seen it before, so he would not be his enemy.
Haha, when Qiao Feng saw his woman being scolded, just because the other party was good at martial arts, he turned a blind eye and turned a blind eye. Is that still Qiao Feng?
Another example is Jiumozhi, a generation of eminent monks. Although he was possessed of the three poisons of greed, anger and ignorance, he was stubborn and self-willed.
But he is also a well-established martial arts master, and he is by no means a funny character as written in some people's books.
Let's talk about Xiao Yuanshan, the original work clearly stated that he was originally a heroic foreign hero, but in the past thirty years, he was full of hatred and did not communicate with others, and his temperament became perverse and cruel.
To put it bluntly, he is a patient with severe depression. He has become a neurotic, and his brain circuit is different from that of ordinary people.
His reason for killing Qiao Feng's adoptive father and adoptive mother and master was so ridiculous. He said that the Qiao couple pretended to be Qiao Feng's parents and deprived him of his family happiness and did not explain the truth to Qiao Feng. They deserved death.
Xuan Ci asked Qiao Feng to become a disciple of Xuan Ku, but everyone just wanted to hide this bloody crime forever, so they turned his son into a Han Chinese and asked his son to become a disciple of his great enemy and to succeed him as the leader of the Beggar Clan.
Let me ask, who in the right mind would think this way?
If Xuanci, Wang Jiantong and the others were so bad, wouldn't they just kill Xiao Qiaofeng and eradicate the root cause? What's the point of making such nonsense?
You know, Qiao Feng thought that it was absolutely right for the Jianghu people to eradicate the roots. When he learned that Duan Zhengchun was the leader, he wanted to kill all the dogs and chickens in his family to vent his hatred. But he saw Duan Zhengchun as a heroic hero.
Because of benevolence and righteousness, I was ready to kill him alone.
Therefore, if you put yourself into Xiao Yuanshan's brain circuit, you must not think about it with normal people's thinking.
In order to bring Xuanci Shaolin into disrepute, he endured it for thirty years. How could he allow the protagonist to open his mouth and talk nonsense?
You know, Xuanci had a private meeting with Ye Erniang and asked someone to deliver the baby. He watched from the side and did not reveal it. He was just waiting for a suitable and good opportunity.
Because Xuanci thought that no one knew about his affairs from beginning to end. Let me ask, the protagonist directly revealed that Xuanci was the leading brother, which made his forbearance for decades a joke. If the heroes of the world gathered in Shaolin, he would not give Shaolin Xuanci anything.
Any attempt to make room for Ci will be completely ruined and there will be no chance for him to make a comeback.
If he had just said this casually, Xiao Yuanshan would have done it decades ago.
When he rescued Qiao Feng in Juxian Village, he could have revealed his identity and told the truth, but he didn't!
Why?
That's because he still feels that his son doesn't hate the martial arts people in the Central Plains enough!
Qiao Feng would never agree to his method of revenge!
You must know that Xiao Yuanshan wants to shame the entire Shaolin sect, and he is definitely not a Xuanci!
Qiao Feng's martial arts originated from Shaolin, and he didn't even kill Xuan Ji. Xiao Yuanshan understood clearly, so he saved people and was unwilling to tell the truth to his son!
We must let him find the truth in the Jianghu, and let the Jianghu people pursue him again, completely destroying Qiao Feng's good impression of the Central Plains martial arts, and then he can work together with his father and son to clean up the Central Plains martial arts.
You must know that what Xiao Yuanshan hates in the end is the entire world!
He even said to Qiao Feng in front of everyone during the Shaolin Temple plot: "These Southern Dynasties warriors are insidious and treacherous. What good things do they have?!"
Such remarks show that he already hates everyone.
Master Zhiguang has long lost all his martial arts skills, and people who told Qiao Feng some truths chose to commit suicide. He would use Shaolin's special skills to add a few fingers to his body to make people misunderstand that it was Qiao Feng who killed him?
Is he still thinking like a normal person?
Let’s talk about Li Qiu Shui and Tong La. I think everyone can guess that Tong La committed suicide and the protagonist stopped her...
Then……
But I read the original work carefully and sorted out the entanglements between the two women. The two women had been feuding for nearly seventy years, 68 years to be precise. Tong Lao appeared in the original work at the age of 96, and now appears at the age of 94. At the age of 26, she was killed by the 18-year-old Li Qiushui.
Zheng is obsessed with it and can no longer grow up.
Child Elder later restrained Li Qiu Shui, but only ruined her appearance. This also tells everyone that it is not that the Talisman of Life and Death cannot control Li Qiu Shui, but that she can resolve it.
If the life and death talisman is really that powerful, wouldn't it be more satisfying for Child Elder to give it to Li Qiu Shui than to disfigure her face?
This shows that Tianshan Liuyang Palm and Plum Blossom Hand are Xiaoyao sect martial arts and are not exclusive to Tong Lao as many people say. Wu Yazi and Li Qiu Shui don't know it at all.
Original text of the previous paragraph [Tong Lao said: "You are the direct descendant of the Xiaoyao sect, and my 'Tianshan plum-breaking hand' is the best martial arts of our sect. Wu Yazi asked you to go to Wuliang Mountain to find Li Qiu Shui, a bitch, to teach you martial arts.
Huh, this bitch has a cold heart and may not be willing to teach you sincerely. Today I will teach you on my own. You are so blessed and you don’t seek to get what you want, so why don’t you learn from it?”
Xu Zhu said: "This junior is from the Shaolin sect and has nothing to do with the Xiaoyao sect."
Let me ask, if Li Qiu Shui doesn't know these martial arts, why would Wu Yazi ask Xu Zhu to find her? What would Child Elder say?
Child Elder said that she would not tell the story sincerely, not that she would not!
Let’s look at Su Xinghe’s original words again.
"Ding Chunqiu, you plotted against Master, and your martial arts are better than mine, but you can't even touch the most profound Kung Fu of the Xiaoyao Sect. Do you want to read the scripture "Beiming Divine Kung Fu"?" Ling Bo Wei
Do you want to learn the Qinggong of "Steps"? What about "Tianshan Six Yang Palm"? "Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand"? What about "Eternal Eternal Changchun Kung Fu"?]
Do you think that if Wu Yazi didn't have these martial arts skills, how could Ding Chunqiu believe Su Xinghe's lies and not kill him?
[Just now, you showed off your magic skills and caught Ding Chunqiu by surprise before scaring him away. If we were to fight in real terms, you and I would still be no match for him if we work together. To kill Ding Chunqiu, you must first have stronger internal strength.
To get him, secondly, you must be good at using the superb martial arts of your sect, such as 'Tianshan Six Yang Palm', 'Tianshan Plum Breaking Hand', etc. Only by combining martial arts with internal force can you produce great power.
Due to my busy schedule and my inattentiveness in martial arts practice, my martial arts skills were not as good as those of Ding Chunqiu. Otherwise, master would only have to inject his inner strength into me to deal with this traitor. Furthermore, I have an uncle.
, her internal strength and martial arts are really not low, but somehow she was deceived by Ding Chunqiu and joined forces with him to deal with my master.
This uncle likes handsome and handsome young people. At that time, Ding Chunqiu was young and handsome, which made him favor him. Ding Chunqiu learned some martial arts, such as "Little Wuxiang Kung", from this uncle. If we
He launched an attack on Ding Chunqiu, and the uncle tried his best to help him. It was very difficult to get rid of him.
Over the past thirty years, Master and I have tried our best to find someone to inherit Master's martial arts skills. Seeing that Master is old, it has become even more difficult to find a successor. Not only must the mind be extremely high, but he must also be a handsome and handsome young man.
..."]
[Li Qiu Shui turned around, looked at Xu Zhu, and said: "Xiannie, Ding Chunqiu and I have an affair. Senior brother didn't know it at first. It was your uncle who reported the secret to your master, and the matter came out. I and Ding Chunqiu didn't know about it.
Ding Chunqiu worked together to knock your master off the cliff. I had no choice at that time. Your master wanted to kill me to vent his anger. If I didn't fight back, my life would be at risk. But I didn't do it ruthlessly. Although he was dying,
, I still took Ding Chunqiu and left without killing your master. Later, I went to Xixia and became the imperial concubine. I lived a life of prosperity and wealth. Your master came to find me and made a tic-tac-toe mark on my face with a knife, but
At that time, my son had already ascended to the throne of supreme king...]
[Child Elder liked it very much and said: "Little monk, it's all thanks to you...ah yo...ah yo!" Suddenly his tone changed drastically, he made fists with both hands, punched Xu Zhu's head, and cursed: "You don't have any
Little conscientious thief, you...you must have done something ulterior to her, and I have kept it a secret from you. Little thief, do you still want to lie to me? You...how can you stand up to me?
"
Xu Zhu was shocked and quickly put her down and asked: "Senior, you...what did you say?"
Child Elder's face turned purple, tears rolled down her face, and she shouted: "You are having an affair with a bitch like Li Qiushui, right? You still want to deny it? Still refuse to admit it? Otherwise, how could she tell her?"
"Small Formless Skill" passed on to you? Little thief, you... you hid it from me so hard." Xu Zhu was confused and asked: "Senior, what is 'Small Formless Skill'?"
Child Elder was stunned for a moment, then she calmed down, wiped away her tears, and sighed: "It's nothing. Your master can't help me!"
It turned out that when Xu Zhu recited the verses, he passed many difficult points quickly, especially when reciting backwards. Child Elder suddenly remembered that it must be because he had practiced the "Small Formless Skill".
Although she, Wu Yazi, and Li Qiushui were taught by the same master, the three of them learned quite different things. Wu Yazi had the greatest achievements and the strongest skills. He succeeded his master and became the head of the "Xiaoyao Sect".
The "Small No-Phase Kung Fu" was only taught to Li Qiu Shui by her master. It was her self-defense magic skill and it was extremely powerful. Back then, the child had been harmed several times, and Li Qiu Shui relied on the "Small No-Phase Kung Fu" to save his life.
Although Child Elder does not know this skill, she is very familiar with the conditions of this skill. At this time, she found that Xu Zhu not only possesses this skill, but also has profound skills. In shock and anger, she actually regarded Xu Zhu as Wu Yazi.
[When I regained consciousness, I remembered that Wu Yazi had an affair with Li Qiu Shui behind his back, and I became very angry and hurt myself again. In fact, this matter had been guessed decades ago, and now there is concrete evidence.]
[The "three brothers and sisters of the Xiaoyao Sect" are all strong in internal strength and strong in martial arts, but except for Tong Lao, the other two are not devoted to each other in love.
Wu Yazi first fell in love with Tong Lao. Later, Tong Lao was deliberately interfered by Li Qiu Shui during her martial arts practice. As a result, Tong Lao could never grow up and her appearance deteriorated. Wu Yazi fell in love with Qiu Shui, but he denied it.
That night, Child Elder kept scolding Wu Yazi and Li Qiu Shui. Although Xu Zhu heard her scolding viciously, he felt hurt more than resentment, and he couldn't help but feel sorry for her.】
Wu Yazi is such a scumbag. Jin Yong's narration determined that he would fall in love with someone else because of his body shape. He still refused to admit it. But Tong Lao had already guessed it.
Of course, it is because of all these things that the plot I wrote today is a bit too superficial. The protagonist is not a god, and the child elder is even more stubborn. It is not that simple to resolve the hatred between the two girls.
That’s why I want to revise it. At least I have to believe it after reading it. I don’t believe it myself, and I believe that everyone who paid money to read it will not believe it even more.
To be honest, I can't write cool articles that are illogical. I am not good at writing cool articles that are logical.
I can only write every plot as well as possible.
Those who want to watch a movie that is just fun, just fighting and killing without any human feelings, should not watch it.
Some people think that Mrs. Wang asked the protagonist to kill her love rival and the protagonist was angry because she did not understand the world.
Haha, you must know that the current protagonist has a great name and a high status, which is the rhythm of "the best person in the world".
Of course, if the protagonist doesn’t win against the Sweeping Monk, he will never recognize him, but others don’t know about the Sweeping Monk!
Therefore, there are some things that the protagonist can do and some things that he cannot do. Don’t place him at the lowest level of society forever.
For example, Mrs. Wang asked the protagonist to kill Ruan Xingzhu and Qin Hongmian, and the protagonist was angry.
What makes the protagonist angry? It’s not that she ordered her, but that Duan Zhengchun was present. She obviously wouldn’t do it, but she still wanted to scare people.
It's just one sentence for her to kill, and it's also one sentence for her not to kill. The protagonist understands everything.
What does she think of the protagonist, and what do other outsiders think of the protagonist?
If Mrs. Wang is really determined, killing two love rivals is nothing but killing everyone. With the protagonist's character and strength, he can do it.
But does Mrs. Wang know how to do it? As soon as Duan Zhengchun opened his mouth, the protagonist could not even say a good word about anything he did.
This is where the protagonist gets angry.
When we first entered the inner room, Mrs. Wang asked the protagonist to break Duan Zhengchun's legs and capture him. Was the protagonist angry?
No?
Why?
Because we are all on our own and there are no outsiders, it doesn’t matter how we act or speak.
But then Ruan Xingzhu and his daughter, Qin Hongmian and his daughter, Duan Zhengchun and his son, the three men and four guards of Dali, and Yue Laosan were all here, and you still shouted around, killing when you said you wanted to, and not killing when you said no. Are you the protagonist?
Has this “number one person in the world” considered it?
Huang Yaoshi kept reprimanding Guo Jing, and Guo Jing always accepted it.
But Guo Jing later became a hero. Who has ever seen Huang Yaoshi reprimand Guo Jing once in front of everyone? The same goes for Huang Rong.
Would Huang Yaoshi Huang Rong not dare? Would Guo Jing be angry?
No, it's just that Guo Jing's status is different. They have to save face for Guo Jing. The situation is different. In this case, one person's prestige will be lost!
For example, Wang Yuyan is the head of the Xiaoyao Sect, Tong Lao weighs her in, and the protagonist and Li Qiu Shui intervene to stop her, who loses face?
Is it Tong Lao? No, that’s Wang Yuyan!
Those women in Lingjiu Palace will never obey her!
There are ways to this.
Others said that Xie Xun killed hundreds of people with his roar, and what happened when the protagonist met hundreds of people?
Alas, I just want to curse people, are you worthy of reading a book?
First of all, Xie Xun was in a valley, which was the most important terrain issue. Secondly, those people were extremely stupid. Thirdly, he didn't need to consider the issue of accidental injury.
The most important thing is that he has been screaming for a long time, and because there are no masters, no one can interrupt him.
And the protagonist is not facing a bunch of masters. If he doesn't have one of his own, what is the point of howling? Either he will be interrupted in the middle, or he will accidentally injure one of his own!
It's so simple. Why did Qiao Feng fight in Juxian Village? He almost lost his life? Just like Duan Yanqing's disciple who was shocked to death or Tan Qing with the soul-chasing staff, just drink him to death!
It’s just no brainer!
[Why don’t you use what Child Elder said, send out a message and ask people to attack? Think about it, no matter pushing the ice or transmitting the sound, you have to concentrate your efforts. Child Elder is watching, so she will naturally seize the opportunity and deliver a fatal blow]
This is the original text. I read it clearly. It’s clear that a master is on the side. The protagonist wants to shock a large group of people to death. How much internal power does he have to use? The people next to him are all dead. He won’t stop him? He won’t take action?
Never say that the inner strength is profound, the protagonist is powerful, and other masters are just paper?
They are all a group of people who have reached the top of the world. How much worse can one be than the other? Is there a difference between clouds and mud?
It’s such a cool article that my brain went crazy after reading it!
There are differences between top players, but the gap is not so big that it cannot be bridged.
The sweeping monk was so powerful that he didn't have to resist Murong Fu's palm power. When Qiao Feng pushed with both palms, he used one of his hands to deflect the opponent's palm power. Why not also knock the opponent away with a wall of energy?
This is the simplest truth:
With the same kick, can you kill ants, dogs and pigs? Can you kill elephants and tigers?
Don’t we need to separate objects?
Just like the Tianshan Child Elder, who kills people without using a second move, this is just a metaphor. She is so awesome, why doesn't she kill Li Qiushui?
The opponents are different, the situations are different, and the results are different. You don’t understand why. You don’t even have the most basic understanding. What novels are you reading?
It’s a kind of torture for me, and even more so for you!
I also answer some questions raised by some book friends,
[The three brothers and sisters of Xiaoyao Sect are all powerful in internal strength and martial arts, but except for Tong Lao, the other two are not dedicated in love.] This is the narration of the original text.
Pay attention to one piece of information: It is true that Li Qiushui, the three brothers and sisters of the Xiaoyao sect, has a girl, but nowhere does it say that this is his junior sister. This is not a concept. When Tong Lao saw the portrait clearly, she just said, "It's not her."
!”
This she is Li Qiushui.
When Tong Lao looked at the painting for the first time, she didn't even realize that it was not Li Qiushui.
Original text: [Xu Zhu took out the picture from his arms. The girl opened the scroll, and when she saw the beautiful woman in palace attire in the picture, her face suddenly changed color, and she cursed: "He... he wants this cheap maid to teach you martial arts! He...
When he was dying, he still couldn't forget this wretched maid and painted her so beautifully!" Suddenly his face was full of anger and jealousy, he threw the painting to the ground and stepped on it.
Xu Zhu shouted: "Ah! He reached out and grabbed it. The girl said angrily: "Are you a pity?" Xu Zhu said: "It is a pity to trample such a good picture." The girl asked: "This is such a bitch.
Who is this maid? Did Wu Yazi, the little thief, tell you?" Xu Zhu shook his head and said, "No." He thought to himself, "Why did old Mr. Wu Yazi become a little thief again?"
The girl said angrily: "Humph, the little thief is wishful thinking, and he still thinks that this bitch has the same appearance after decades! Bah, even back then, how could she be so beautiful?"]
So the following paragraphs all show that the Xiaoyao sect only has three senior brothers and sisters. Li Qiushui’s sister is not a member of the Xiaoyao sect. Otherwise, Child Elder wouldn’t have been unable to recognize “my little junior sister” when she saw the painting for the first time, right?
There are some plots in the book that you need to think about a little bit, don’t stop reading!
This is like Jin Lun practicing Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu to the tenth level. Many people said that he did not know Dragon Elephant Kung Fu sixteen years ago. It only took him sixteen years to practice it to the tenth level, reaching an unprecedented level.
the point.
He also said plausibly: "Jin Yong didn't write that Jin Lun learned the Dragon Elephant Skill sixteen years ago, so he never reached the tenth level in sixteen years."
hehe……
I just want to say that the brain is really a good thing...