Wu Meili followed closely and started grading. She held the magic mirror and looked at her cheek lovingly and affectionately: "Hey! I have completely different ideas from my brother. Young people dare to try anything. This courage deserves praise.
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"However, no story is perfect, and every story has its good and bad. Personally, based on my aesthetics, I still have to kindly remind you that I don't like ugly things, but the story you created
The protagonist perfectly hit my mark..."
"And the protagonist of your story is so ugly that I can't accept it."
Wu Meili sighed delicately: "I can't bear ugly things to stain my eyes and ears. As long as they are ugly things, there is no need to exist."
"I'm sorry, I give you zero points."
Zhang Dazhi lowered his head deeply.
"Ahem! The heroes see the same thing," Knife Butcher rubbed his big hands like cattail leaf fans and said in a rough voice, "However, we agree but disagree. I just like the recipes in your story very much.
Braised pork, my favorite."
"I just want to ask you, take one bite of the tender and juicy braised pork, it is fragrant! Cut into large pieces, stewed and the aroma is overflowing! The whole room is filled with the aroma of braised pork! If you think about it carefully, how sweet it is?
The glutinous texture, the unique aroma of meat lingering in the mouth, the delicious meat swirling on the tip of the tongue! Is there really anyone who can resist this delicious taste?!"
"Although! Your story is not rigorous enough. We all know that slaves are not qualified to eat meat, but you made up the story of a slave family cooking braised pork out of thin air! This is a story that seems to be fine at first glance, but it can't stand up to the closer inspection.
What a big bug! Speaking of which, it’s really serious!”
"In addition! There is another thing that I hate!" Knife Butcher twitched his nose and said speechlessly, "What I hate the most! Winged insects! I'll kill them! Dragonflies! You actually let the protagonist raise them?
Dragonfly??? Why don’t you let him raise some normal pets? Do you have to raise dragonflies? Can’t you find anything normal to breed? What’s wrong with raising them? You have to raise something with wings!”
"It's really unlucky, the thing with wings! Hiss~~~" The Knife Butcher pouted, "But, since there is a recipe that I like, I still give you three points. This is the most benevolent thing."
"Next time, remember not to raise any unlucky things with wings!"
It was Yu Xian's turn to score, but Dao Butcher pushed him and managed to wake him up.
"Hey! It's time to wake up! Hurry up and give me some points! People have been waiting for you for hours!" After waiting for a few seconds, the knife butcher was indeed a master at telling lies.
Yu Xian woke up leisurely, looking bleary-eyed, which made people a little worried. Did he hear the story clearly? If he didn't, how could he give a good score?
Yu Xian just stared at Zhang Dazhi lightly and said lazily: "I see that your protagonist doesn't seem to like sleeping that much?"
"I'm sorry, we don't have the same ideas. I'll give you a point to encourage you."
Zhang Dazhi suffered a series of blows, and his little eyes had already become very dull. They did not contain much wisdom, and now they looked very funny.
Next, Li Du scored. He slowly twisted his neck, then slowly twisted it back, and then his sinister eyes looked like two poisonous snakes hanging on his face.
"I didn't find anything in your story that made my eyes shine at all. Boy, your story is so bad! It's so bad that I can't bear to criticize you too harshly..."
"Believe me, if the punishment for telling a bad story is to be shot, then countless bullets will fly into your skull before I kill you."
Li Du was always rude in his speech. This was the reason why other villagers would never choose to communicate with Li Du verbally.
"Look, in your story, I can neither see the emotions that the protagonist should have, nor the prejudice of the soul in the supporting characters! But aren't your protagonists human beings? Why are they obviously all human beings?
But they don’t have the shortcomings that all human beings have? You described them too monotonously. Boy, I am a person who pursues perfection. Human beings have never been as pure as you made them up..."
"The coexistence of shortcomings and advantages can create a perfect human being."
"Of course, what I mean by perfection is completely different from the original meaning. It refers to the coexistence of both bad and good qualities in human beings! The protagonist and supporting characters of the story you described are, first of all, the strange protagonist. He is supposed to be a character with good qualities greater than
He is a person with bad qualities, but in order to cater to the bad things that happened to him, you finally molded him into a bad guy whose bad qualities are greater than his good qualities!"
Zhang Dazhi showed a surprised expression.
Unexpectedly, Li Du, who has always been gloomy and weird, would evaluate his story so objectively!
"This is completely unreasonable, boy. Since he never chose to resist from the beginning, he will never have the courage to resist. But you increased his deteriorating courage to an explosive level one day.
, this completely goes against his character, he has become the same thing as his father, can it make you feel a sense of accomplishment?"
“Only when the strengths and weaknesses are always relatively balanced on the scale can we truly portray a true and perfect human being.”
Zhang Dazhi carefully pondered Li Du's words, but suddenly heard him sneer.
"Forget it, what's the use of telling you so much? As an ordinary and ordinary human being, you will never experience the huge energy contained in these two things, success and perfection. They are destined to be with you.
There is no time to tell, just like your limited and pitiful IQ, you are destined to be unable to weave a good story of flesh and blood."
"For me to be so human and objective about your story, I give you a zero."
What could Zhang Dazhi say? He was speechless. Only a wry smile could express his helpless mood.
If he had known that the villagers would find so many faults, he should have perfected the details! He should not have free play at all, resulting in the story being full of things that people hate.
When Ye Zhaoling heard Li Du criticizing this story eloquently, he was also shocked. He did not expect that Li Du, who always seemed to take nothing seriously, would comment on a story so seriously.
Although, it is purely possible that Li’s belly is due to an occupational disease——
Hey, isn't there anyone who doesn't know this? Li Du is a novelist.
Until Li Du gave Zhang Dazhi a zero, Ye Zhaoling became more convinced that Li Du had suffered from an occupational disease.
It’s true that he is still the sarcastic Li Du——
Very humane.
In the end, Zhen first said nothing. After thinking for a few seconds, he sighed: "There is no need for any evaluation of a tragic story full of dross."
"Five points."
"Give negative emotional value to what you have to offer."
