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Chapter 179 Five Points Memorial Defect

Chapter 179: Flaws of Five Points Memorial

When we arrived at Shirakawa Rensuke's place, the "story meeting" seemed to have been pressed on the fast forward button. Not only was his story very brief and concise, but the villagers' ratings were even briefer——

The Knife Butcher spoke first with a heavy blow: "Ten points."

Almost everyone is probably wondering, why did Knife Butcher give this story a perfect score?

Knife Butcher didn't make any comment on this, just when others didn't think about it either——

Like him, those who gave full marks to Shirakawa Rensuke's story were Jin Dafu and Wu Meili, and they also did not give any comments.

The remaining three villagers have completely opposite opinions to these three villagers——

Yu Xian said frankly: "I don't see any praiseworthy features in this story at all."

"First, the length is too short, the characterization is not rich enough, there is no detailed description, and there is no background introduction. The protagonist's emotions appear as abruptly as a bolide; you know, at least we can know which day and time from the website

I can observe meteors falling in the night sky somewhere, but I can’t just rely on my imagination to make up an inexplicable story with no beginning or end, right? The story must have the appearance of a story. Bad review, bad review

."

"Second, the heroine is an artist, which does not reflect her artistic temperament at all. As for the hero in your story, he is just a background board, right? Your description is too perfunctory, and the audience does not know what he is doing.

I don’t know what kind of character he is, and what kind of letter he received in the end? He didn’t say this, and he didn’t say that…”

"I think it's a boring story."

Yu Xian could say so many words, it was really raining red from the sky.

"Okay, okay, ten points, no more words."

Good guy, didn’t you find a lot of faults?! You actually gave me full marks again?!

Ye Zhaoling was surprised, but also felt that it was reasonable.

Miss Wu loves Duzi more than the other five villagers. As one of her subordinates, Rensuke Shirakawa will definitely and definitely give him full marks.

Jin Dafu is Miss Wu's brother, and he is obedient to Miss Wu. In order to please Miss Wu, he will definitely give high marks to Rensuke Shirakawa.

As for the Knife Butcher who specifically gave Rensuke Shirakawa full marks in the first place, it was because of her, Ye Zhaoling.

This knife butcher is not very smart, has a bad temper and likes to join in the fun, but he is very loyal.

If Ye Zhaoling and Rensuke Shirakawa hadn't made such a... strange drama before, it would have been impossible to expect Knife Butcher to show partiality without reservation, such as giving full marks to others unconditionally.

It's just that he was too easy to bribe.

Looking at it this way, Knife Butcher, who was jointly bribed by Miss Wu and Jin Dafu, supported Miss Wu's people with both hands in order to express his position. It was logical that he could go against his own principles and give full marks to Rensuke Shirakawa.

Of course there is nothing wrong with doing this, as it is all to make the other two villagers feel relieved.

Of course, it is undeniable that the three of them share the same ulterior secret, and the knife butcher can still profit from this, and even obtain more benefits to satisfy his "big appetite"; just giving high scores to others means expressing his own

It’s sincere, it’s not painful or itchy, and it won’t cause any loss of flesh, so why not do it?

As for Yu Xian, in addition to playing the violin, he usually engages in performance art and sleeps. For such a guy who is unconscious for much longer than he is awake, why would he give full marks to Shirakawa Rensuke's story?

Ye Zhaoling couldn't figure it out.

The only reasonable explanation may be attributed to the artist's quirks.

With four perfect scores at the beginning, Tianhu started the game.

Yu Xian's evaluation was quite objective. At least when he was awake, his mind was not as hazy as when he had just woken up.

This time, only Li Du did not disappoint Ye Zhaoling.

"Can this also be called a story? I want to ask you, do you have any misunderstandings about the word story?"

"Story, it tells an event with a moral through narrative. It focuses on the description of the development process of the event, emphasizing the ups and downs of the plot, thereby elaborating a certain principle or value. Let me ask you, this paragraph you are telling

Children's text, what kind of meaningful event does it tell? Where is the description of its development process? Is its plot complete? What kind of truth does it contain? What kind of values ​​does it have?

!”

"You really disappoint me, Shirakawa Rensuke." Li Du said coldly, "I could get countless inspirations just by looking at your face; to be fair, your appearance almost matches

It’s everyone’s fantasy, especially girls who have expectations for love stories. You have a good look and seem to be blessed by God.”

"But you are so disappointing. Although you described it as briefly as possible, I only saw your flaws from between the lines!"

"Irredeemable defects."

"So I'm sorry, I can only give you five points." Li Du said mockingly, "The five points deducted are symbolic tributes to your flaws."

As for why you don’t deduct all of it, I can’t refute it. If I don’t give you this face for the remaining five points, I’d be sorry for the inspiration you brought me, so I have to leave some points for this face of yours.”

"Even though, I don't have any good feelings towards people who look like this."

Li Du shrugged.

"I'm just telling you that my aesthetics are top-notch and my layout is grand."

"In addition, I also want to warn others not to be fooled by the beautiful skin of human beings. People who can appear here and grow up like this are either pure white and extremely good, or pure black and extremely evil, without exception."

The words of the villagers are not imperial edicts, so just listen to them. If you really take these words seriously, you are simply missing out on your brainstem.

Ye Zhaoling didn't take it to heart.

Li Du's person is far from as good as the words he describes himself with.

Ye Zhaoling agrees with the point of top-notch aesthetics. As for the grand style? How big of a style can a person who focuses on picking out the smallest mistakes of others and putting them on the bright side and finding fault with others have?

Carpenter Zhen is the most fair and just person among these villagers.

It's just that he always gives the final rating, and his own evaluation can't change anything.

"I personally think there is some truth to what Li Du said, but not much."

"I like this story very much."

"It is true that this story is rather curious and can accurately screen out most people who have no idea about it. Its shortcomings are obvious, but its advantages are also clearly visible."

"At least, I like the story."

"I think, very..."

"Too many, one point..."

"Too little."

"Then let's add one point to another."

"One plus one equals two under normal circumstances, but it does not just equal two."

(End of chapter)


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