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After reading your novel, I'll read it, a few suggestions
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Chapter 1, 151 said that more than 200 monsters at the top of level 12 were collected and prepared to give the beast robbery pill. As a result, when Chapter 153, they all became level 14 monsters? Isn’t this jump too big?
2. Use "stage" at a time and "stage" at a time. It is better to unify it.
3. Regarding the comparison of the strength of monsters, I often cannot match it. According to the article, I will consider it as follows:
Level 1---5th level of Qi refining and below
Level 2---6th-12th level of Qi Refining
Level 3---Early, Middle, and Later stages of Foundation Building (the article says that the Little Gold level 3 peaks, almost catching up with the Great Perfection of Foundation Building (it is a bit unreasonable here)
Level 4
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---The early stage of the Golden Pill? Two mothers who had successfully built foundations were killed.
More chaotic, one level of monsters corresponds to a small realm, such as the golden elixir and the Nascent Soul
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One level corresponds to a large realm, such as 12 and 13 levels?
It feels unreasonable, so I should reorganize it
4. Inner Sea, remember when the pig's feet first went there, what island master, the king, some were level 13, and some were only level 12. At that time, the pig's feet were only in the early stage of the God Transformation (corresponding to level 10, combat power level 13
), However, in just over a hundred years, the strength of pig's feet has improved, but the monsters under his command are almost all above level 13, which is unreasonable.
5. Inner Sea. Originally, there were only three elders in Qiuxian Island that reached the level of the God-Distraction Stage, and the island masters were only able to merge to the top, but later they were about to kill.
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, If you kill three or more people with distractions, what big prizes are there? Wouldn't you just kill the three elders? Which monster is so powerful? You must know that they have been attacking for tens of thousands of years and haven't attacked them.
Because the pig's feet are coming, everything is easy
6. Inland Sea, the original power is reasonable. The island masters of monsters are at level 13 (the detachment stage), and the kings are at level 12-13. There is a detachment stage in the Immortal Island, so it is reasonable that they cannot get in even.
Now there are more than 200 levels of 14 under the pig's feet, and the Monster Island seems to be easily killed by Qiuxian Island, which is unreasonable.
suggestion:
Level 1---Qi Training Period
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Level 2----Founding Period
Level 3---Danjing stage
Level 4---Ninthian Soul Stage
Level 5----The God Transformation Period
Level 6---Combination Period
Level 7---Divide Period
Level 8---Ascending level 1-3
Level 9---Ascending level 4-6
Level 10-Season 7-9
Absolute zero 10:06:15
First of all, thank you for your comments! Thank you!
Let me explain your question here. Regarding the monster-level issue, due to the plot, there is not much difference between the earth-level monsters and human cultivators, especially the monsters below the transformation and the human Nascent Soul stage.
After all, there are very few monsters in the transformation stage of the cultivation world, and there are not many masters in the Nascent Soul stage.
Regarding the issue of improving the strength of the protagonist in the Inland Sea, the protagonist's improvement is relatively slow. It is acceptable for him to obtain a large number of top-quality materials at a time of hundreds of years. If he advances further at this time, it will be very difficult.
, and the article also explains it.
Regarding the matter of Qiuxian Island, although the monsters have been attacking for countless years, they have not really been dead. Lu Fei is a variable and an explosion point.
Regarding the monsters under Lu Fei, they have been upgraded from the peak of level 13 to level 14, and they are taking the beast robbery pill. The author dare not jump to two levels at once.
Absolute zero 10:07:00
Relatively speaking, the protagonist's strength is still very weak. Compared with the powerful cultivation world, this level of cultivation cannot be achieved, and the Yunjian Sect and Jinhuo Island are not of great strength.
Lin [Jia] Xiaolong 10:07:22
Haha~ Then look at Chapter 151 again. At that time, you wrote about the peak of level 12
Absolute zero 10:07:42
Hey, it was a typo, I'll correct it, thank you
Lin [Jia] Xiaolong 10:08:15
My master, the plot you wrote is quite good. I like to read it very much. I am just sensitive to numbers, so don't blame me if you suggest it
Absolute zero 10:08:43
It's okay, I'm happy that you can like me
I really want to thank you
Lin [Jia] Xiaolong 10:09:05
If Chapter 151 is changed to Level 13 peak, I don’t think it’s very reasonable~~ After all, before the pig’s feet went, the island owners were only level 13. Now you gave him 200 Level 13 peaks at once. Where can I run
Got it out
Lin [Jia] Xiaolong 10:09:31
If this is the case, then these more than 200 people could become one prince before.
Absolute zero 10:11:48
I'm so serious that you didn't see the explanation in the book. There are more than a billion monsters in the inner sea, and there are millions of people above level 12, and there are many people at level 13. In addition, I collected a lot when I wiped out the Black Dragon and the Cuttlefish King.